Sussins
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So still 16 huh?this should have been the first one to thought it was a continuation looks like it’s not
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Great story but do we really have to go step by step true history like that I thought it was going to be about why the demons were sent on the earth the history of Prism and Grim’s relationship is good but do we have to know every thing most of what we are reading is not relevant why good demons turned evil is good jumping forward in time is a really good idea this is the 11th chapter and they are still 16 it’s really becoming boring very boring I just want to know if Grim is coming back and how and how Fasha will be killed
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Oh shit this is fucked ip hate this kind of endings wish I hadn’t read it😡 great story hate the ending u should be written an alternative ending where Daniel gets taken away hate this one
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Oh shit this is fucked ip hate this kind of endings wish I hadn’t read it😡
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Wow Daniel is really crazy and roping Joe to do his dirty work that’s low 3am can’t stop reading
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Chapter 11: Love for Children
Sussins commented on AmosLee1023's story chapter in Chapter 11: Love for Children
Daniel is scary he is really going to do something really bad I don’t think they really investigated his back ground properly he is a very cunning psychopath very scary kid -
I don’t really watch a lot of war movies I love action movies 🎥 but I don’t know this story is just too technical for me I can’t keep up I loved the first one this one is a difficult read I keep skipping chapters now all I want is to know how it ends but I was hoping Eric will end up with Brian but oh well 😔
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The chapters take very long in coming don’t they 🤔 i wish they were at least once a week love ur stories u know that especially this one it’s intriguing and exciting but I wish it was a longer chapter but thanks for this bring a new one soon please
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Am reading a story with a similar story line he was bullied in school by the guy who is now his lover but they are way older it’s by Bndmeti and it called November falls very interesting as well
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I have not read a lot of Australian stories so this talk of racism is really an eye 👁 opener what makes some ppl think they are better than others and feel it’s ok to treat them like they are nothing it’s really sad 😢
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Hmmm 🤔 this story is weird you’ stories usually are i’ve Never been able to finish a chapter so 🤔 will try to finish this one?🤷♀️ Well hmm 🤔 I hope
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Ok is anyone as confused as I am that conversation didn’t make sense
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So this is the end of book 2?
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Great story but all this different POV’s is giving me whiplash I have to track of that as well 😅
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Anna really needs to die dat bitch be crazy can’t believe there are human beings like her
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Finally been waiting another great story you’re really good thank you
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Another great story loved as well but I wish the men were Versatile sounds more fun anyway on to the next ☝️ thank u
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Awww great story where is the rest pls
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I love the way you write the characters are so relatable they feel like a part of ur family u want to cry with them laugh and celebrate anything they do as well there is one other writer like u one this site really enjoying it
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Love ❤️ love 💕 love 💗 great story love this kind of D/s I hate this is the way every relationship should be hate the ones with slaves and masters great story
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🤔 hmmmm don’t know but I feel like jnr has feeelings for Christopher well still reading
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👏🏾🙌🏽👏🏾🙌🏽👏🏾🙌🏽Great story I write beautiful stories read all of them u are a great writer loved it congratulations
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Whoooo shit just hit de fan a lot is happening 😊 wait for next chapter intriguing 😍 it
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Love love ❤️ the story but because each chapter is written by different ppl it can be so confusing who is black Blu or Kyle and how Jared’s story was told was so confusing it didn’t make sense seriously 😐 pls do a lot more editing but love the story though
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Awww missed this thanks and happy birthday to you dear may all ur wishes come true enjoy your day
