Bushman60

You guys should realise the author of this story is both emma2 and.TJ4 in wicked sense of humour. Becauze he is like that and because he is the the writer he will get his own just like t2 and t3. Lol

My,my, my! What a chapter and what an ending! Why u not wait T2 says T1. What do you mean says. T2!? YOUR PREGNAnt........... followed.by the longest of pregnant pauses .and giggles. ...... quite funny.

I don't believe it was Ron watching. I believe it was Bill or Charlie. What a great story and powerfully ending with Harry finally using all his magisterial influence and power for good. My feeling is that Harry will never go dark Lord he might come close but he will turn away from it. That is when he will become truly great and finally find his destiny. Draco Andy he others because of their closeness to him will always be there to keep him from getting power crazed. Plus his heritage will mitigate against that happening in some degree.

What an interesting and good story! Chandler is a good guy and clearly wants to see Brandon not be bullied by brain dead morons. Who can't tell or dontcare enough about hurting others and he isn't impressed by the inaction and lack of concern of the coaches who should know better and are little more than docile bullies themselves. Kudos to Chandlers little brother he is golden by any stretch of the imagination and only wants to see Brandon happy and have some good times and good friends. The way these two brothers tag team with the help of some others is great stuff especially the kun

This was a great story and shows the grand scope of human emotions and the ability of humans to hurt the ones they love and help and love the ones they love and ultimately forgive and let love triumph over sadness and hurt. Love never hurts nor is it puffed up,pridefull or arrogant. There is one paragraph towards the end where you mix up Matt and Mike in the same paragraph.

This is a good story a little like a good star trek story but with So many other technical and fantasy science elements.

Again the last number of CHAPTERS have been excellent. This chapter ended on nice cliffy. I wonder what our tour guide has for us next?

This was a very powerfull and and impacting chapter and is possiblely one of the best and most impacting of its category put on here. I am a little surprised about the comments of loneliness. I have had that challenge all my life because of family other reasons. Once it bothered me greatly but now it doesn't much even with having bipolar disorder so the issue of social distancing isn't a problem for me . I only go to town once every two weeks to shop and the rest of the time l stay home and talk to no one nor do l care to as l Don't trust them after what my family and some others have

Good chapter. Hmmmm that call! What's happened now?

This is one back of a story and could well make an excellent novel would you please consider revisiting it and making it a much longer story. As it it stands,there are potentially, 12 maybe be 15 thread lines already there beging to be written.gp

This is such a good story although that creepy older bloke hope he gets his just reward. Wah a sleazoid!

Beware and avoid vexatious spirits is one of the things l keep in mind now lt helps keep me from being hurt and having my trust broken all the time. Loneliness at times is the lesser of two evils. It is far easier," to travel the road less traveled for that makes all the difference."

I agree with what you said. Its all true! All too often the is a darkside in most if not every relationship where someone is trying to manipulate another. Once it has happened a few times to an individual that prrson often will step awaybfrom the situation using one of several strategies to get out of the web of manipulation so that they can van continue to be themselves. Mine for instances is often to blow up at the person doing it and then run for the hills so to speak. Depending on how serious l veiw it l will often not speak to them again. In the case of my four living siblings a

What do you mean seems like it will be a great story! It is a great story just from the frame work or plot outlined in thins chapter.Lol

Definately! The same could be said about the ending of the next chapter! Reality has away of interfering and changing scenarios and circumstances in which people find themselves enmeshed. This can so often bring the best and worst out in people who are otherwise loving caring and level headed.