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Beware and avoid vexatious spirits is one of the things l keep in mind now lt helps keep me from being hurt and having my trust broken all the time. Loneliness at times is the lesser of two evils. It is far easier," to travel the road less traveled for that makes all the difference."

I agree with what you said. Its all true! All too often the is a darkside in most if not every relationship where someone is trying to manipulate another. Once it has happened a few times to an individual that prrson often will step awaybfrom the situation using one of several strategies to get out of the web of manipulation so that they can van continue to be themselves. Mine for instances is often to blow up at the person doing it and then run for the hills so to speak. Depending on how serious l veiw it l will often not speak to them again. In the case of my four living siblings and outlaws l nolonger see or speak to them as l find them so overbearing and hypocrtical and bullying and out and out liars.

What do you mean seems like it will be a great story! It is a great story just from the frame work or plot outlined in thins chapter.Lol

Definately! The same could be said about the ending of the next chapter! Reality has away of interfering and changing scenarios and circumstances in which people find themselves enmeshed. This can so often bring the best and worst out in people who are otherwise loving caring and level headed.

Aidan.has always been up front with.Dustin.It's just that Dusty hasnt been up front untill now and now he is is confused because he.loves Aidan who is afraid to tell his.mum that they have had sex and are boyfriends.because A8dan know there will be big trouble and now Dusty has rejected Aidan in a fit of pique. I suspect they will get back together very quickly after some humble pie on both sides.

Ps. I just read the story again and found Aidans final comments about ridding the bike after what he had just done was quite amusing.

Yes hartley is manipulative,sarcastic,selfish and more. I suspect he never had it easy as a child growing up but thatdoesnt excuse bad behavior. Aidans challenge is to find where he fits in lifes grand game of chess and who he can trust and who he cant and who are his friends and who arent and use it all to his advantage.

What a great story andithad me in tears so many times as l felt the hurt anguish and pain they were going through. Life can be very brutal, cruel and terrible so often.

What a good story. I loved it and as usual it had all the usual ebbs and flows and highs and lows and mayhem good stories have.looking forward to the next one.

What great.story again Quokka! I'm enjoying it immensely. Tyler's reaction to his news of being the new Earl was quite amusing to say the least, more so when he found out the size of his inheritance and estates.

Great chapter and very definitely a great cliffs. I wonder what hit kip as it could be any number of things.

Another great chapter full.of activity at; lam somewhat mystified by the change Over of boats as buying and selling like that in my experience one never comes out in front.

Another great read Carlos!

Another great chapter.

An action packed and at times funny chapter. Really good flow in the plot makes for such good reading it almost transports one there and makes one wish that they were able to join in..

Yeah,l definately agree.its is yikes. But it might be more like yikes,yikes,yikes and yikes then hike stage right double quick time out of there!!.

I agree with or house moment. It is indeed, truly, a story of nightmarish demon spawned helish concepts and images.Very much an apocalyptical nightmare.

Carlos, Another great chapter. What Chipper needs to do is to talk the issue through with his friends so that they can be there for him and let him know.all is well and the FBI will the crook get his come uppance. Kevin.

What a great chapter! And what a sticky messy end for a messy ,murky, nasty individual. Good riddance, l say ,to bad rubbish.

Ps. Carlos, My experiences lawyers being 12 or more in different firms locally is that none of them turned out have mine or dads best interests at heart. For some reason my sister want some others were able to get away with loop holes in the law. To do what she wanted even though it was illegal.

Greg Nalbo sounds like the typical hig waoh powered sleazoid promoter that seems to always bearing the edges of such things hope the nail him in his coffin. It is possible Bryce and Zion are both tools or agents provocateurs for Nalbo. I don't see anyone else, in the running to provide, so called material of a dubious nature, to blackmail Chipper, into doing what NALBO wants.

No good story . Not impressed by the parents especially the father. He is nothing more that a lounge lizard. The mother is also problematic by being a feminist which places its own stresses on a marriage.

Quokka where you use the word descendants I think you mean the word anscestors as in the context of how you have used it descendants doesnt make a lot of sense. Otherwise a great start.

A great story and really good read and plot. One that l can really relate to my own experiences at school when l was younger and to some extent even now as an older person. Another definately serious oops moment towards the end of this last chapter where Nick is about to B be unwittingly outed to his mother by Stephanie who mistakenly thinks she knows he is gay. Assumptions are always the mother if all stuff ups and problems. What will happen between him and his mum I can't guess but l have a feeling it could be negative at first and that he might even find it necessary to leave home for awhile. He seems a quite conflicted person when it comes to relationships with others and is happiest ether with Sam or on his own untill he and Rhys team up at the soccer try outs.

What a great story. While Im unhappy about the blase reference.to.drugs as l just cannot.see the.point in their use and supporting the.lifestyle of the drug lords who are criminals..i can see why some would.use them. It never justifies their use. However Chipper like his mates seems not to become addicted to them at least not yet. That might or might not change when he finally tours on the road. It seems to be a habit many entertainers get into along with alcohol abuse. This chapter was great but l think l would have liked Aslan to go through too. But your the writer not me.