Bushman60

There seems to be often cases of seasicknesses in your story's. I am wondering why there is in the medikits some motion sickness tablets. I ALWAYS carry them in my car and ute and brief case and wallet as I get so sick in. Cars and planes. I f other come who get the same trouble I give them that too.

What an interesting and strange chapter. So many things left hanging like questions marks and exclamation marks or even pregnant pauses loaded with so many questions but nary an answer to give or be found.

So they have finally arrived at a consensus. I would like to see Aria try the full on sex thing and not be asexual as I think with Amara and Drew it might be the best healing thing for him. I 2onder what has made aria so stridently asexual as it is not that common and seems so outside the norm of experiences.

Some more important information that Chriton is determined to ignore because he sees it as only useless nightmare dreaming. Even when it his late wife Beth who has for sometime been deceased. This later thing grant grasp or understand and in accord rebels against the idea that his wife can come to him in dreams and attempt to influence the decisions that he makes.

An interesting if strange start with serious premonitions, portents and dire warnings of invasions war and incursions from the world of dreams where anything is possible and anything is dangerous. Sounds like something demonic and evil is about to invade Chriton's world and he alone can stop it, but first he must be trained and whipped up into the first ranks,the becoming the best of the best. I can't see how this can be done in time . The dreamsayer ,my name for the disembodied voice ,was very cryptic about both the who and the how, but he is clear about where from ,the who and that he would do the training. Does Chriton have other warriors to help him or at his disposal? Does he have wizards and powerful mages ,this was an extremely important moment and, are any angels to help fight these dark beings? These are things that need answering. But no answers are forthcoming as yet. I get the impression that once he awakens next morning he thinks it is nothing more that a bad dream the stuff of which nightmares and science fiction fantasy fiction stories are based on.

An amazing reasons the scope is up withe many off the good reads. What the little group is avoiding they don't know yet! We can't make the link or supposition that they do! We don't have a revealing of the reason that the nexus group has for doing this except that they require it. At the same time Keirans group does have an idea why it's happpening? Who is behind it? Except that it is and it is forcing the little group to research and practice defensive and attacking strategies against these mental incursions. I believe that they have found themselves in this other world plane has left them in awe and not only a little bit stunned by where they are Keiran is quickly getting his memories of his home world back but is it quick enough to aid them and prevent greater disasters from occurring,I guess we will have to wait and see.

At the moment Gary seems rather unwilling and unable to face his in net demons. He is in for a shock I think. As in most cases be will find out Mum wont be surprised when eventually he man's up to tell her what the problem is

At least the manipulative old b@×!!%d is finally doing as he is told by no less than his son who has finally manned up and told him to do the right thing and listen to good advice. Where this will all lead to is anyone's guess as it is very early days yet in plot and story development. My thought is that Michael will grow Into the role be is destined for by things beyond his and Anderson's control this will in some ways negate Anderson's attempts at creating and manipulating said events and let them more freely and naturally develops which should be all the more beneficial for all concerned. I think Michael will take to the role enderson wants him to have with the baby wh3n the time comes as Michael seems naturally able to take control when he needs to and everyone lists s and acts accordingly with very little if any argument by just accepting the status quo as a fait accompli.

At the moment Gary seems rather unwilling and unable to face his in net demons. He is in for a shock I think. As in most cases be will find out Mum wont be surprised when eventually he man's up to tell her what the problem is. His biggest challenge I think is Shaun. He needs to give him time And some space but still acknowledge their friendship and not cut Shaun of and step away. I COULD BE WRONG BUT I think Shaun would will step back into it once he thinks thi vs through as at has been a very long and close friendship and this seems to be the first mishap within it. IF SHAUN chooses to reject him then it wasn't as deep as he believed and he is better looking else where. The down side of that is Shaun could deliberately set out too sabotage it by outing Gary which would be the worse outcome for Gary inparticulate and Shaun and everyone else generally.

I so lurrrrve this story and where it is going. Jay, give poor dense, slow Welsh hick Drew a couple of slaps upside of the head to wake the boyo up. He for sure needs waking up quite badly. Everyone around the boys have made them so mixed up that it's no wonder that they are where they are now and are in a mess. But insigbtfull Jay and good old Man know what the two brothers need and that is the safe security of Drew in their lives as he is the only one who has got them. Understood them and in the main let them be themselves and protected them from others who would hurt or use them.

Californias age of consent is 17. Kyle is definitely showing interesting Greg as a potential mate. It is also pretty obvious he is more than a little jealous of the fireworks between Greg and Nate on the one hand and Keigan on the other. I suspect Teresa has added 1 + 1and come up with the same answer as Kyle has. The downside is that the "Feind" as he is refers to in the story is in the area and is interested in Kyle to. Kyle be told about mongrels like the Fiend and given the low down about them as it will not end well for any of them. Kyle interestingly doesn't see the 15 year difference in ages as a problem nor does he seem to be to much worried about the age of consent. I suspect in part TERESA isn't to much worried by the age of consent either as she has just encourged them to keep him occupied in anyway they can to help him not get into trouble with the wrong people to the extent she has even sanctioned the use of Kyle using recreational use of cannabis.

Another great chapter in which quite a lot of things happened that was funny to see.

I How action pact this story is noe getting and what vile creature of evil, dark demonic gargoyle, foul ghoul, stinking lecherous cat,Person of vampiric witch like evil Jullianna is. She is just the arch typical epitome of the ghoulish, soul sucking leach that there can be. The sooner she is bumped of the better.Though she makes a great foil for Henley, who his the exact opposite being cool, sauce and level headed. It is easy to see the boys are images of their father inspire of their evil mothers attempts to make them otherwise. That it all backfires on her she is that stupid and vile and evil that she just cannot comprehend and understand the boys reactions to her. She will learn this very sad and very important ant fact soon of that I am sure. But surely, Henley cannot be that I'll informed about all things to do with his sons that he can't see or understand that in Drew Amara has found the one thing he has needed, someone he can fully trust to understand, know, help and be a trustworthy confident who has time and again stood by him and fixed things so he isn't able to be hurt a certain way anymore ie; Ben. Is it any wonder that he is now in love with Drew even though Drew has had know idea until this moment at the hospital. I am sure that Henley will realise shortly that it has been onesided so far and Drew has done nothing wrong except be himself. This question by Henley shows us that Henley has had no idea what has been going on around and with his sons. And Henley I hope you send Julianna to the ends of the earth after her comments leading up to her saying you won't get rid of me or quit looking after me even if she isn't yours." He sure aught to boot her out because it certainly looks like she has been using the boys and Henley to live the high life which I have no doubt is about to Cole to a flying crashing halt of epic proportions.

I don't think churinga stones work that way. It would be quite wrong to impose a false idea or premise on one as they are distinctly tied to the land, dream time and power of the elders who protect and guard the sacred sites of power and dream time. It is a little like the sacred totems of the north american first nations people. There are of course many dimensions of differences between the two groups however.

I am so pleased that the two elder boys remember who they are and wish to go home soonest. What a good ending in the ending in the end.!

Wow! They don't do things by half plus they do it in the shortest possible time as if their tail feathers are on fire or a volcanoes is coming.

Another great chapter in which Trents lifeis just as hectic and frantic as ever and as ever full measurer of surprises.

Another good chapter to this already very good story. I like the way Trenton is continuing to do what he does best and looking in to how the riverine environments can be preserved and looked after better.

We will just have to wait and see what our funny author decides but reading the story so far that was my impression of where I thought it would be going. Lol Sorry to try and read your mind nephylim. Lol . No not really!

The episode concerning Wallace the Wallypus came as a complete and total shock to me. It literally made me jump and left me in shock at what happened between Trenton and Wallace. Wallace should have been trounced by Trenton in so many ways and hauled before his parents for discipline and removal. Maybe he should have been keel hauled to punish his behaviour. Am greatly looking forward to future chapters and installments of this story.

The makings of.another great story.

If the stage ry goes where I believe it will go the evil vile snit that is Ben will be sacked. This I believe will now happen sooner than later. But It also will let the readers see what a vile manipulator and used Ben is and how he is so bent on destroying aria and amara and all that they have and are.

You mention in your your story about the in moving . I t probablely aught to be somewhere else like the Caribbean or maybe south east Asia. For diplomatic as well as independence and security reasons it would make more sense.

This I s another excellent chapter in another very good enjoyable story.

I poignant story and one I entirely sympathise with and understand,having gone through worse with my pentecostal brothers and sister. They are narrow and bigoted and one actually killed a woman helping with and excorsim that was wrongly done on a woman who was schizophrenic and had gone of her meds. They never even used clergy or had a Dr present. People that knew our family blamed me because I am a Christian. I have never condoned that nonsense . not only that but plenty of those people are quite happy to steal from family given the slightest of chances