Gary L
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Utterly intriguing, rather hypnotic. Definitely not in Rusty’s world. Hudson is in adangerous space.
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A powerful, if disturbing, piece of erotica. Very well written and with content that will get you thinking. Be brave and read!
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Well, I’m about halfway through this most beautifully written piece of prose. The initial premise is well- known. New guy in school meets outsider etc. but is the language and depth of characterisation that makes this seem utterly new and refreshing. I strongly recommend it to be read. You will thank me!!
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Wow, a very powerful chp, as usual in exquisite prose. I’m trying to ration myself but it’s not working. 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
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That says it all. So, so sad.
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The Gospel According To Chris, Part 1
Gary L commented on Sean J Halford's story chapter in The Gospel According To Chris, Part 1
Personally, I really enjoyed this pov as it was clearly signposted. What drives me mad, especially in Netflix “thrillers” and other genres is time jumping as well as viewpoint. I’m getting old and too much cleverness confuses me. Here Sean has not made that “mistake” and I think this chp adds a different cone and texture. This story is, I think, at the level of language, the best writing I’ve seen here this year. Unlike this last sentence! great work mr Sean -
I totally agree. Shades of the poetic prose of Anita Brookner, try her “Hotel du lac”.
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I’m v pleased both with the story and the memories it has provoked. And now to sleep. So tempted to continue but classes tomorrow 👿👿👿.
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The prose is perfect 👍
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A Spy In The Land of Canaan
Gary L commented on Sean J Halford's story chapter in A Spy In The Land of Canaan
“Chris’s house was in Constantia, that beautiful, expensive valley of mountain vistas, city vineyards and Botoxed housewives sipping Chardonnay and Sauvignon Blanc on rotation.” Yes! I’ve been there but had forgotten the name. One memory was all these amazing houses surrounded by high fences and wire. -
A Spy In The Land of Canaan
Gary L commented on Sean J Halford's story chapter in A Spy In The Land of Canaan
100% agree. The writing is so smooth. Great stuff -
Absolutely Dan S.
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Wonderful reminders of a magical trip to SA 30+ yrs ago. Such great people. Such amazing scenery. Great story, as well…hee hee
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Good, if sad, start. I’m hooked.
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You are one hour ahead of Spain, I think, in that case. But I would have thought that Romania is in same time zone as Germany, Italy etc. I might have to get up earlier to catch your posts first and stake out some claims before certain people ( you know who you are!) try to grab your heroes for themselves!! much love, Laura, I so enjoy your work 🤗🤗🤗
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I’m not sure what to say because I don’t want to allow any “spoilers” here. Just an amazingly intense weekend is described which as you read you feel, o, yes, I know how this is going to end. This is a squirmingly good read. So very good and with a coherent and moving ending. Well done 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Research Is the Mother of Learning
Gary L commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Research Is the Mother of Learning
Yes, I’m getting that feeling, I fear it won’t be a laugh a minute. But it definitely keeping me intrigued. 🤗 -
So UK/Ireland/Canaries ?
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I think the sign of a really quality comedy/drama on GA is the way the writing provokes such a great reaction between the readers, Laura, Mrs M, Carlos H are the best examples for me. Laura, I am so enjoying this but it’s now moved from Shakespeare to Italian opera! How are you going to resolve this? I know we must be patient… great stuff, and many thanks, Gary
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Really? One hour east or west of CET is intriguing me, Laura!
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If only J.El would be more sharing with Rusty etc!!!!!
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If a certain someone insists on having all rights to Rusty, at least I can be your greatest “ Brit expatriate living in Spain “ fan! Huge hugs 🤗
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Another great chp and, guys, check out Laura’s new story. the Ugly Duckling 🐥 Intriguing start to it!
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This one is a bit different from the world of Sunny Hill etc. but the early bird readers all say we are intrigued… believe us and follow, this is one to watch from the pen of a really good author. 👏
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Well, well, well, Ms Laura.. This is a tad different. But I’m very intrigued and, yet again, you’ve got me hooked!,, great characters and fascinating start. 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
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