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    Chapter 90

    Gary L commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 90

    Great character development. Travis seems more and more “real” to me. If only I had had the money and/or the nerve to enter the shops in the Via Condotti in the 80s…… Gap Year gets ever more enjoyable. Thanks Mark 🤗
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    Your commitment to our pleasure is duly noted…. And really appreciated. As a weiner dog owner I know how stressed they can get if mealtimes, or in this case chps, are delayed. this was a really lovely read after a 13-hour day. Thank you mrsG and kbois. 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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    I wouldn’t count on it, my friend. Perhaps you should be afraid, very afraid 😱
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    Well, well, well… I’m not sure where there is the most drama, the comments section or the actual, really great, story. As others have said, the serialisation allows readers to really feel involved in the story. A v moving chp, ms Laura. Wel done!
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    Chapter 89

    Gary L commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 89

    As an avid reader, I just love Will’s episodes of rage but felt that here there was a huge difference between today and the chainsaw massacre of Gucci shoes etc. He is raging mad but removes himself to process. Travis has a long way to go………
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    I suspect that when we see the whole story revealed this chapter will stand out as a key turning point. The last chp was just so sad and our heroes seemed doomed to be trapped with no way forward but then came this amazing intervention. A beautifully-written and thought-provoking piece of writing. Thank you ☺️
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    Blind Spot

    Gary L commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Blind Spot

    Totally agree. It’s just me!
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    Chapter 1

    Gary L commented on Hryjknyk's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Ufff that was hot, and not just the weather! I’m intrigued. Nice work!
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    Blind Spot

    Gary L commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Blind Spot

    This one hasn’t captured me like the amazing other stories so I’m going to wait and read the finished product, no criticism, Laura, it’s just me. Your work is really good. Gary. Xx
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    Me too but I can’t think of another.
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    A real pleasure to get the latest installment as you cross the 1,000,000 word count. A truly great writing achievement, Dodger. The story is still as fresh as ever and leaves us begging for more. THANK YOU,
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    Could this be the story with the most sad reactions in this and the previous chp? Pretty tough read at the moment. 😢
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    Wel…. You are the exception that makes the rule. But no one else!!!!
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    Is possible to have any positive memories of Z**?
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    A trip to Spain might cheer him up!
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    I knew trouble was ahead - it always is when you do some nice chps! - but this?????? This is beyond the worst. Great writing, cruel author. 😱😱
  17. Gary L
    Sometimes less is more and this short story is a good example. Set in 1907 in London we follow the protagonist on another journey into his personal hell. This is a very thought-provoking read and makes one wonder how much organized religion still has to answer for. Highly recommended.
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    The Cornishman

    Gary L commented on Stephen Wormwood's story chapter in The Cornishman

    This packs a punch way beyond its short length. Instead of a healthy self-love so many, even today are forced into self-loathing. Well done!
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    Chapter 79

    Gary L commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 79

    We are all in agreement that this was a really good chp with some striking developments. Great work Mark. I too was hoping against hope for a redemption scene for Caroline…. But…. Very enjoyable, thanks ☺️
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    But we are inspired by you and your characters in this story. I mean CJ and Will are an inspiring couple…… just kidding I definitely don’t want to be put outside by mrsG! 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
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    I thought that is what we readers were supposed to do - and as for shit-stirring, the words “pots and kettles” comes to mind kbois! 🤓
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    Thank goodness for that! That makes you pretty unique in these pages…… 🤗🤗🤗
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    Congrats on passing 80,000 points, kbois. It’s seems half are from your battles with mrsG and my friend weiner 🙌🙌🙌🙌
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    Ah. That’s a new one for me. I even tried looking on internet ( not on work computer!). So, thank you, O Wise One for “clarifying” me…. Like butter 🤩
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    I’m completely lost. Where does George come in to it? Im first to comment on page
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