Gary L
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Teenage angst at its best.... Or worst. 🤗🤗
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Some really emotional stuff here, but It is so well told. I know how I will be spending the first day of summer holidays, which start today🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Yes, I agree with all the positive comments. Im really enjoying this pair of "misfits".
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It is over 6 yrs since the last comment but I say, so what? This is a really good piece of writing, if only I could do the same with my professional work. I love the dialogue, it's never stilted like so many stories here; your characters are realistic; and the storyline is superb. Thank you 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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wAnother addition to this amazing saga. I don't know how the author keeps these characters so fresh and full of depth. Easily 5*****
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No complaints from me - I would be happy with even more 😎😎😎
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7,000+ words to cover 24 hours would normally mean an overkill and be boring...... And yet it flew by reading it. Great storytelling as usual. But my goodness, that pastor gives me the creeps. Buy a lottery ticket Dodger so that you can win, retire and devote yourself to the trials and tribulations of Robbie. ***** star.
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never gt that far at 13 but fun memories. Thanks
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A nice tale, interesting 🤗
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Cruelty to readers should not be allowed!! But it's summer so we might be more understanding 😈😈😈
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Great read....but a cliffhanger on last available chapter is v cruel!
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A nice story with v good characterisation. Thank you!
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Im in love with Rita 😍😍😍😍
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Really? Or helped him to find it.... The dialogue is really authentic 🤗
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Some of the above comments strike me as ?.., well, I don't know what to say but let's start with patronising, insulting and ignorant. The characters that I have followed have indulged in "unsafe" sex ( itself a value judgement, perhaps), vendettas, murders, theft, embezzlement, etc etc. why do people suddenly get "precious" about the reality of drug taking as a way of recreational life? This is a (great) work of fiction and should be judged as such. Do we really want to copy the Catechism or create a new one? ps I have never taken any illegal drug in my 60+ years, except for sharing a joint which left me crying for three hours. Does this mean we should have baNned the film "Trainspotting"?
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I recently read a v long story which was v good , except for one thing. there was zero emotional content. Whereas here we can see the emotional damage suffered by young vulnerable gays. I think that this is an exceptional piece of writing. i strongly recommend this and other writings by the author.
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I am really enjoying this story. This an example of what uk families are about - at least my own. A poor maN in the supermarket queue once asked one of my great nephews if he and the other boy next to him were brothers. A simple, sociable question one might think.... The guy wilted as a 10-year-old explained that they were half brothers sharing the same dad.... I think you have captured the new dimensions of being a family perfectly. I look forward to the next part 🤓🤓🤓
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I totally agree. You write really well and capture the sheer awfulness of being a shy person starting in college. Im Completely hooked.
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Such an enjoyable read. The dads hit LA with a bang. I have enjoyed many of your stories but this one has a lightness of touch. It feels like you are really enjoying writing this one. ***** Thanks
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A v sexy read. Verrrrry nice 😀😀😀😀😀
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Mike Is Introduced to 1950s Muscle Magazines
Gary L commented on Tallguyct's story chapter in Mike Is Introduced to 1950s Muscle Magazines
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The plot thickens
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And we all khow good he isn't at controlling "Little Tristan"....
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I was once in this age group - all boy grammar school. It's a v different story you are telling but that's what keeps me reading. I'm enjoying this a lot. Well done!
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Fun Time in Shower and Sauna
Gary L commented on Tallguyct's story chapter in Fun Time in Shower and Sauna
Nice to see an ordInary guy as the centre of attention. I really like the way you develop this. Keep it up, as they say in UK.😈
