Gary L
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Great start! Im intrigued ...😈😈😈
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V action-packed but I'm really lost! The index of characters just made me more confused? Im going to wait till the story finishes and have another go.
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Chapter 141 My Brother's Secret
Gary L commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 141 My Brother's Secret
Another good read and, of course, cut off just before he gets to Nathan's bedroom. Be careful, mrDodger, your soon to be isolated agian, number one fan in Spain needs no horrible cliffhangers....... 😍😈😈😈😈😈😈😈 -
Having spent two hours preparing lunch, I open my tablet and there is the penultimate epilogue of a great story 👏 And now to doze thinking of those Californian hills.....💤💤💤💤💤 and all that wealth....... I want to reincarnate as one of Mark A's characters......
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Great read, excellent character development (as if more were possible), and a cliffhanger as well? All in a day's work for our Dodger 😈😈😈
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Dont think my life will ever be the same after meeting Nan! A very tough tale wrapped up in all types of humour:dry, blue, ironic etc.. Fantastic read.
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We stayed in my first motel near Hearst Castle. Next morning my lawyer friend asked me if I would be upset if that night we sped to the Fairmount hotel in SF as he didnt feel safe in a motel. The motel had seemed fine to me but uk lawyers need 5***** treatment!!
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Struck gold with this author. Im not really into horsey things but this is written v nicely. I can almost smell the hay and feel their coats.. 🌈🌈🌈🌈🌈
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I know even less than JeffreyL about American football. Im a Brit whose school sports were rugby and cricket. Nevertheless, Carlos has kept me intrigued with this tale.the ending was a bit abrupt but it left me wanting more. As ever, a great read whilst hiding form a heatwave here in Spain.
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Another fine piece of creative writing. How does this guy keep pulling it off, again and again? Asolid, 5***** tale. Thanks
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I continue to be in love with this story. Teenage angst on speed.
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Around the world in 77 chapters. Great story telling. An addictive read.
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Great chapter - timeless story 🤓
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Another great read. Mr Arbour has great skill in presenting 3-dimensional characters who grow and develop naturally. My only regret is that Im not lounging about in a sunken bath as I read. Excellent story
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Great tale, excellent development of characters, especially Granger. Easily a 5***** read.
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Great storyline, well executed and such fun to read. Thank you 🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Totally agree. It gives us a real sense of the horror of naval warfare.
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SLooked in vain yesterday for a posting. But today.....🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Spot on comment. This is a v enjoyable, If at times tough, read
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Are US schools still like this? I was in an all boy UK Grammar School in the 70's. There was never any bullying. I feared I was gay (as a Catholic lad) but apart from the odd Insult to which I replied with interest, there was nothing to fear.
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This is aNother really good episode in the long naval saga. Exchanging naval battles ofor struggles onshore, this adds a nice twist and allows the author todevelop some characters even more. 5. ***** read. But read the series in order. You won't regret it.
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Another great read from mr Dodger. As ever, he can take a hacknied theme and reenvigorate it. Short and sweet and to the point. 🤗
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Teenage angst at its best.... Or worst. 🤗🤗
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Teenage angst at its best.... Or worst. 🤗🤗
