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Gary L

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  1. Hey, that photo of me was supposed to be private 😜
  2. Yep, you’re spot on! We are taking 001 and 002 to uk in Sept. 5,000km, 8 hotels, canine border controls ( last year 001 was refused entry and we had to get a French vet to issue her with a French passport…..) we are mad but at least they are v well-behaved in the car….. so far
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    Chapter 3

    My toga is already on!
  4. A great short story about visiting a normally quiet gay bar to find it heaving for a special event. It is really well written with humour and repartee bouncing around poor Zach and then he spots…. It all goes downhill.. An enjoyable, fun read. Loved it.
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  5. A joy to read. A new favourite
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    Chapter 1

    What a lovely comment, thank you!
  7. A very, very useful exploration of what readers are going for and an excellent checklist. Thanks
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    The Right Fit

    Soren is almost playing with the readers, almost, but as @dboggs9700 says, it is the pacing of the story that is so, so good. I’m thoroughly enjoying being taken into a world I know nothing about. Well done, Soren, this is excellent stuff. Thank you
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    Chapter 2

    There is so much to enjoy here. The writing is an utter delight and the story is told with perfect pacing. And like the best of meals, it leaves you wanting more... A joy to read. Thank you!
  10. Nicely said. I totally agree
  11. Travis’s meltdown continues at a pace. Will is evermore like his father was, win at all cost. Not a hopeful situation.
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    Chapter 1

    Totally agree!!!!!
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    Chapter 2

    For me there is a surfeit of adjectives that makes it ‘over rich’. I began to tick off just how many there are. In the world of AI there is space for mere humans! a v interesting experiment. The next could be setting a test in a blog, for example, to see if we can identify human or AI. thanks
  14. Yep. Rejoined HMax for a month just to see it!
  15. I’ve got the spreadsheet prepared and awaiting the stories. Meanwhile binge-watching “the Pitt”….
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    Chapter 1

    Stunning. Beautifully written. The agony and ecstasy of Ancient Rome are captured as if in a photograph.
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    Prologue

    Intriguing 🤔
  18. Have my excel sheet ready, dice, voodoo dolls etc etc. I will know who you are..........
  19. Regards, Gary
  20. Whoops. It me again arghhh
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    Roses

    Many, many thanks Mark. When one stops and looks over the totality of this book, it is so impressive. Yet again, our greedy demands as readers are met handsomely. ps I hope the cruise went well xx
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    Roses

    And the perfidious French have just lost their football semifinal to Roses, whoops, sorry Spain! Can England deal with the duplicitous A……. ? I doubt it. 😢
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