Gary L
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I knew trouble was ahead - it always is when you do some nice chps! - but this?????? This is beyond the worst. Great writing, cruel author. 😱😱
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Sometimes less is more and this short story is a good example. Set in 1907 in London we follow the protagonist on another journey into his personal hell. This is a very thought-provoking read and makes one wonder how much organized religion still has to answer for. Highly recommended.
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This packs a punch way beyond its short length. Instead of a healthy self-love so many, even today are forced into self-loathing. Well done!
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We are all in agreement that this was a really good chp with some striking developments. Great work Mark. I too was hoping against hope for a redemption scene for Caroline…. But…. Very enjoyable, thanks ☺️
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But we are inspired by you and your characters in this story. I mean CJ and Will are an inspiring couple…… just kidding I definitely don’t want to be put outside by mrsG! 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
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I thought that is what we readers were supposed to do - and as for shit-stirring, the words “pots and kettles” comes to mind kbois! 🤓
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Thank goodness for that! That makes you pretty unique in these pages…… 🤗🤗🤗
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Congrats on passing 80,000 points, kbois. It’s seems half are from your battles with mrsG and my friend weiner 🙌🙌🙌🙌
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Ah. That’s a new one for me. I even tried looking on internet ( not on work computer!). So, thank you, O Wise One for “clarifying” me…. Like butter 🤩
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I’m completely lost. Where does George come in to it? Im first to comment on page
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Crusoe is great. A Canadian super weiner!
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Especially when referring to mrsG’s plot twists and turns! A very nice post holiday chp with a great one-liner at the end!
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A very powerful chp which caught me out completely. I think it is one of the best that Laura has written. And now, how do we get the lovers back together? great stuff !
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London Underground should use some of you guys in its publicity…. 🤓
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My memories are tarnished by travelling daily to King’s College and getting trapped in smoking carriages, plus the lack of air con. Frequency etc are fabulous but access for limited physical ability is dire. You need to try Valencia’s metro! I’ll treat you to a travelcard 🤗
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A tense but fun chp showing, Inter Alia, the horror that is the London Underground and the joys of Eurostar. It all appears to be going a bit too smoothly and I’m a bit nervous of what might happen next. I agree with privatetim that it’s possible that Steff etc., might be buying up Buck industries…. another intriguing chapter. Thank you maestro Mark. 🤗
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Thanks. I missed 7 pages of comments. Start of my last school yr has kept me busy!
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I don’t think creeping to mrs G ( or her nemesis) ever works…… flattery, yes 🙌
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FANTASTIC!!!!
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Not sure about the eyes…
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Where are they???
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Single Day and the First Real Concert
Gary L commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Single Day and the First Real Concert
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I would have walked the plank myself!
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I was there in the 80’s and this was such a cool song for late night listening. Thanks for the memory g
