This is amazing.
I can't wait to see what happens. Charlie seems kind of stuck up, maybe that's not right. Cocky?
Hmm. You said it's done, What's the posting schedule going to be??
Stark. That's the word this gives me. At first anyway. But by the end it's a tiny seedling of hope. Like the scene in The Never-ending Story where the childlike empress shows Bastian the single grain that is all that is left of Fantasia
Sorry.
I do like this. Its so different from what I've read of yours but I suppose but taking the time into context that makes sense.
Also. I totally understand the drowning feeling of desperately wanting to not be who you are. It's a deeply horrifying sorrow
I hurt for Becker. He deserves better. But maybe also he deserves more from,himself.
Kevin is a dick for playing games though.
I have truly loved this story. Can't wait to read more.