When I read the first three chapters of the story I can't say that I liked it a whole lot because wrestling just isn't my thing but after you had posted like 8 of them I started to reread and I'm really glad that I did
I feel really bad for Diego he's kind of a dick and dumb and I've never seen anybody with less awareness of how he moves around the world but I like him. he's nice and he generally tries he's just really bad at life
Sean wow that was disappointing I get that he was stressed and had a guilty conscience and he was grieving over the loss of his animals but.......... that was a dick move and now what's going to happen??
how are they all going to work together
Is su yin regretting his choice? So quickly?
I'm happy to see this continued, though confused about the time. Su yin seems like he is from a more feudal era, but if atoki had been there that many years..... And yet before su yin.......
I'll just reconcile it to being that hell exists everywhere and everytime at once.
:nods seriously :
I'm really wondering how truthful the twins are being
And it's gross to think of therapist for children not letting them have any kind of privacy or confidentiality having done that work I know how important it is and I can't imagine telling everything a child told me to their parents
that's not helpful and it's not going to help a child fix anything
It's true somewhat while kells isn't to blame, that whole episode can be thought of as the straw that broke the camel's back.
And it was painful and frustrating to write too, hence the month long wait lol
I appreciate this. I worry the story is pretty slow, and that they're too emotional for grown men. But. I think maybe part of the issue is that they aren't emotional enough, with each other, hence the misunderstanding and standoffs.
I'll keep trying to write something worth your attention.