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Mrsgnomie

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  1. STOP WITH THE CLYDESDALE REFERANCES!
  2. I'm glad you're liking it. Even if you're stroking @kbois ego by saying the word Clydesdale, twice. I write 4,371 words but she gets the glory for 1 word. Ain't that a kick in the pants... lol
  3. Valid point @manhandle. A kid who we can assume has been in his position since his teen years probably has a differing view of how things (relationship/sex) are done. It could take a minute to break that mind set. Or maybe he doesn’t need much convincing at all…? Or maybe there’s still more to learn and understand.
  4. C'mon, their ship name is clearly JayLoe!
  5. Thank you for this. I've said it before and I will say it again, you guys don't miss anything. I appreciate your comments.
  6. Who doesn't like a little sexual tension?
  7. I laughed so hard at this. I bet Jay does give the best blue balls!
  8. Because I'm a genius... *Slowly backs away...*
  9. chapter six jay Loren holds his phone up and looks at me impatiently. “It’s a TikTok video. They’re not supposed to be life changing. Now do what I told you to do…and careful with your knee.” “If I’m cleared to play in next week's game, I think I can manage this little two-step video clip.” Loren looks unimpressed. I think it’s sweet that Loren cares. If I had known a minor injury, one that barely kept me off the field, was going to elicit this kind of reaction from Loren,
  10. Thank you for taking the time to read it, to like so much of the content, and leave comments. I really appreciate it!
  11. Really is a fun read! If there’s two things @kbois does well, it’s drama and attraction.
  12. Can’t wait for you to see start the next tell! Only a few chapters left here!
  13. I think he THINKS he is living his best life lol
  14. This comment made me sit back and think. I think it would bring out my insecurities to be around someone who had his level of certainty and patience. It would be hard not to feel inferior. You have someone like Loren, who is confident in his every day life but seriously inferior compared to Jay…I’d be running away so fast.
  15. I will write a strongly worldly email to the author. This should be explained.
  16. There was a completely different GIF I was going for but after ten minutes I gave up and grabbed this. Not my best stuff…
  17. Only one way to find out where we’re going and how we’re gonna get there…
  18. No idea what’s happening. I read the comments and end up seeing the story in a whole new light!
  19. I believe it’s next chapter when things really start to pick up between them. Loren presses the physical issue And Jay presses the relationship issue. It’s fun!!
  20. Everyone knows how it ends up but they don't know how they get there, which is the fun part.
  21. He really does! Jay is a 10 and just what Loren needs
  22. Makes you wonder what Jay saw when he watched Loren for over a year...I ask this, not even knowing the answer as the author lol
  23. Pretty much. I think it’s common to think you’re happy until something comes along and proves you otherwise. Jay is proving him otherwise
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