Mrsgnomie
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I'm glad 2nd person is not common in fiction. I've read a few and always feel like they're trying to brainwash me with mind control. "You walk through the carnival gates, excited about what's ahead. You think to yourself, maybe you'll get two lobster corn dogs instead of one." No, Jerry, I'm not excited for that. Not at all. It think omni can be so difficult to do well. There are stories out there but it's a craft in and of its own. Personally, I try to rotate between 1st/3rd past/present to try and flex my writer muscles, but I'm not ready to venture out. Not for a long story, anyway.
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Also, I want to add that the original didn’t suck, but the revision is definitely a better fit to end this wonderful story of @kbois
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I think this was huge for Reilly. As someone who doesn’t seem all that outgoing, facing your father like that, and inflicting pain like that, it has to take a lot for him. I’m not sure I could! No doubt there was some vindication there.
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How dare Reilly’s brothers call out his name in help. Seriously. F**K them!
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I don't know...the only contribution I have to the comment section is regarding Caleb. That stupid, beautiful idiot. I think Sebastian should force him to wed another alpha. That way he can have constant supervision. If I was an alpha, I would volunteer. I think he's a good guy who made a really, really stupid decision. Kill the rest but don't kill Caleb.
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What about future perfect progressive? I will have been walking to the library? ???????? I can’t even.
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I'm still upset about Caleb.
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Chapter 1 Getting It Together
Mrsgnomie commented on Ancient Battlecry's story chapter in Chapter 1 Getting It Together
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shenanigan - Word of the Day - Tue Feb 8, 2022
Mrsgnomie commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
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With some of the edits coming down the line, it might be Thursday!
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It's like a blind spot before the action picks up. I can see it going down like that.
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Chapter 1 Getting It Together
Mrsgnomie commented on Ancient Battlecry's story chapter in Chapter 1 Getting It Together
I agree. I cant wait to see where this goes. There’s potential for a good back and forth between these two. -
What a chapter indeed. Will probably read again, to pick up more details.
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I am not lol. I'm trying to finish my story, too! I'd like to post before the one year anniversary of my previous story. Tick Tock, Tick Tock.
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It's got a lot of green lol. I'm having a good ol time.
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Undying yet very conditional love. I see. I see.
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I simply saw an opportunity and took it.
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@kbois is drinking whiskey so she was ripe for the picking. Also @chris191070 must have insomnia because he's definitely reading this!
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I had to eat a dozen cookies because I made the mistake of not eating before hand. It's you're fault.
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She really does love food. I always need to eat before I read a chapter.
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I mean @kbois likes to ruin my picture perfect day dreams. How dare she create such a lovely character and then muddy him up like this. I’m so sad. I need to step away for a while… come to terms with this loss.
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