GanymedeRex
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I agree. It was an appropriate ending - it was still quick but it at least resolved things. The characterization of Jake was as excellent as it was disturbing.
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Enjoyed the ending. It was a great ride and introduced me to things i would not otherwise have read about.
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I enjoyed the story except for Nohr. He was a cipher - wish he would have been flushed out as a character. Loved the happy multigenerational epilogue.
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People like Corey seem to be perennially attracted to jerks. They like being controlled. It's really sad. In my experience only a minority of people in relationships like this learn from the experience and change course. It's not like there weren't a thousand warning signs along the way. Most people would have shut the door on Sebastian's face permanently many times over. It's like people who answer Nigerian prince emails - the reply is a form of screening.
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From kissing a third time and then... straight to anal. Not the most romantic progression. I'd like to know more about Simon and what he is hiding in his past and regarding Andrew.
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This chapter ends on a gorgeous note. The story could end there, but apparently there is more.
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This was a powerful story. I've mixed feelings about the ending. On one hand, it was abrupt and a lot of dramatic attention could have been milked from this story as well as a powerful climactic episode. On the other, this abrupt ending and distant, clinical revelation to Corey was also an interesting way to go. Corey has not only to account for his relationship with a killer, but his failure to report it would make him feel complicit and leave him with numerous complex feelings. I greatly appreciated such a well written, dramatic and gritty story here on GA.
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As a medical doctor who works with teens, I've never had a couple that age come in for STD testing at that stage of their relationship. It was a good element to include in the story.
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It is amazing how people behave towards those they feel superior too. This rings of truth (although it is extreme) and makes me think of Frederick Douglass's writings about how owning slaves changes the master for the worse.
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"Kelari" might make a decent title.
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I hope Corey gets out of this alive.
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What is so great is that this story has a lot of great realism. Not all high school gay boys are nice people. It's not all roses and sunshine. High school kids lack life experience and don't recognize dangers as well as adults do. Great story.
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I sure did not expect that. Good job on suprising me!
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Sure, but there are 4 factors here that are ridiculous. How many 7-8 year olds 'come out' - ? Even one saying things wouldn't be taken seriously. Have you talked with a 7 year old recently? The author can write anything they want but I still think this chapter flew off the rails, badly. Like I said earlier, the idea of Michael calling them to go and help the child is a super awesome idea but the follow up didn't work for me and I don't think would work for many others. I guess we will see where this story takes us next.
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Uh, they just kidnapped a child. I'm pretty sure that's a felony in Germany. Also, child at death's door eating ice cream 15 minutes later? Also, 8 year old being thrown out as a gay? Hard to believe. Also, Germany has child services and would not return a child 'to be sold', nor would any modern country. This is just not believable. Consider a revision? I really liked the Michael parts and the first half of the chapter.
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I'm liking the story but for the fact that I know little about Nohr as a person. It's like he has no personality or anything. I loved the trajectory of this chapter, however.
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Good for Shawn. He came through as a pal for Bailey.
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This was a fragment, not a Chapter. I think things are happening too fast now. I like Nohr, but no time has been spent describing him and sharing the evolution of their relationship. This is often the most enjoyable component of a story.
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enjoyed this chapter very much.
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I like the Michael element. As a medical doctor, I always find it super amusing to read stories and the things people write about happening in hospitals. Don't worry about it. It's all good, but it's still amusing.
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Happy ending.Thanks
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that's cool. It is surprising he has so much sex considering where he started.
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Nick should get a sleepover night each week with the other boys.... Just saying....
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Thanks for writing this story. It was great to get a conclusion. Danny was an interesting character. If you look at durable surveys of the adult population, there are as many bisexuals as homosexuals, yet bisexual characters receive far less attention. Thanks.
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wow. you are cranking these out. Lots of spelling errors relating to mentioning Skype in this and the prior chapter. You can say "Skyped" or use a connecting verb in the appropriate tense. I like these characters and am looking forward to see the story progress.
