GanymedeRex
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4 chapters without any character development at all. Pulling the eject lever now..... Grand vision is interesting but would like to have had a character to relate with along the way.
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I'm looking forward to the Baltimore visit. You mentioned August living in a town near Baltimore. If you haven't already chosen, I recommend Frederick (45 min west of Baltimore). It has a cool downtown with lots of 18th & 19th century buildings. There is also a military biological laboratory. Camp David is just north along with Site "R", a 'secret' underground backup of the Pentagon. Baltimore itself is a cool place for a story as well.
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About time. Looking forward to more.
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He may have given something away in an obvious manner by now. I've noticed that the editing for this story has gotten very solid. The writing is at a professional level.
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Excellent story. It's been enjoyable on many levels, not just as a romance. I like how the supernatural elements are essential to the story.
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okay. That's a dramatic moment to stop a chapter on...
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"the class being full" doesn't sound right if this story is in the USA. Although there are private schools, most people attend public and you almost always go to the school assigned to your area. It if is full, tough, they make room for you. I'm enjoying the story so far and like how it is moving forward so quickly.
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Yay. This story is such a happy one...
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Interesting so sad to see where he is. Everyone gets a public trial in America, even if it is just to plead guilty. Their crimes are part of the legal record, though they will seal the name of a minor.
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Something like this would be super-duper improbable in a Virginia community like the one described in this story. Oh well, we need dramatic things to happen to move the plot forward so I guess I understand. I guess these guys are going to be in for a woopin'.
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Wow. This is an interesting development! I'm so curious. I noticed the writing is very clear and the dialogue flows naturally. It's hard to make a story intriguing like this.
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Interesting. Could there be parallels between hiding as a gay going back 2 1/2 centuries as well as hiding vampirism?
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Your storywriting art is very good! Spelling, not so much. Have someone proof for you. The most common errors are typically corrects spellings but for the wrong words. Example: Chocked (thrown) instead of Choked (strangulated). Gonner (misspelled) instead of Goner. To/Too misuse. 2/3 of these examples won't show on spell check. I've noticed these over the last 5 chapters. As you get used to recognizing them, they should go away. The grammar is very good and your writing flows nicely.
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Frustrating. That's what it is like dealing with an abused person. They are conditioned to think a certain way. Quite realistic - 2 steps forward, 1 step back.
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Chapter 28 - Out of the lake
GanymedeRex commented on albertnothlit's story chapter in Chapter 28 - Out of the lake
A nice continuation to a dark story, which is lightening quite a bit! Definitely can relate to the struggles of being depressed and finding victories & dignity in small accomplishments like getting dressed properly and making it to the gym. -
Chapter 27 - The pressure in my chest
GanymedeRex commented on albertnothlit's story chapter in Chapter 27 - The pressure in my chest
Got a DM from Albert today! He sounded to be in quite good spirits! -
(Full Story) - Revised
GanymedeRex commented on D.K. Daniels's story chapter in (Full Story) - Revised
Nice story. Ive been in this exact position with my oldest son. He tells me I have no idea what its like to be a gay teenager. Hahahahaaha! It made me feel warm to read it. Thanks for writing it. -
Interesting. I'm assuming these were-people can exist in states from full human appearance, partial animal appearance and full-animal. It was confusing at first but that seems to be the impression I'm settling on by now.
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Have you heard how they say the ambiguously incestuous Japanese twin thing is getting old? You haven't because it never gets old. Right on!
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Writing quality is very good. The story has my interest and I want to read more. So far, so good.
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Something about Jordan's reticence and encountering the wolf lodge reminds me of the first time going to a gay bar. I was really nervous the first time and underage. Once inside, I felt like I was in an alien world, but also marveled that it was my world with people like me. It was a special feeling - I kind of get a sense of that in this story.
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Ball catching station? I'm cracking up! Wonderful Chapter.
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Once you get over the ridiculous premise, this is a very fun world. The idea of a werewolf civic organization having a recruiter and interspecies politics really works! There are lots of possibilities and I would imaging that a Neko boy would be very cute. Here is an example of a universe premise that opens up a lot of creative possibilities for the author. Well done!
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iPhones & iPhone accessories? Hilarious.
