GanymedeRex
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Welcome back! I highly recommend this excellent and captivating story. Probably Daniels' best!
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a well written chapter
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Uh - like what Freshman would ever show up for this? Someone would go to the police? People who undergo hazing rituals do it because they want something - usually to join a group. If they were beating new members of the team, I'd get it. Why would Sam ever want to be on a team with these jerks? I liked the freshmen.
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the prologue and new explanation now make things much clearer - reading this a second time...
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Such crazy parents wouldn't have let him go to public school. The dialogue, which is well written and easy to follow, sounds late middle-school to early high school so I was surprised he was supposed to be 18.
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Interesting frame of mind - his mind is his prison. Not sure the parents are that believable. There are very few people this extreme - so they look a bit contrived and cartoonish.
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I quite liked Seth
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Things that mean nothing
GanymedeRex commented on DomLuka's story chapter in Things that mean nothing
Rory is kind of a slow and passive bitch. He needs to grow a pair.... (but without this, where would our story be? Of course.) -
Petty annoyances and a silent celebration
GanymedeRex commented on DomLuka's story chapter in Petty annoyances and a silent celebration
If there is that much drama just before you know a person, you really shouldn't want to get to know them better... -
This was a very cute, fluffy and enjoyable tale. It was bit predictable but I loved it anyway.
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That was cool
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that was interesting and unexpected. I like surprises.
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I'm pretty sure families don't adopt kids without them getting to know each other first. Sam is an interesting name choice - I wonder where he comes from. Looking forward to learning more about this orphan.
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Interesting setup makes you want to anticipate the new arrival and how they interact. I don't really like the Ferrari thing at all, even if there is an explanation. Its too extreme to be believable. But, I will read on and see....
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pretty funny. Didn't see where this was heading.. hehe.
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That was intense and interesting - you really got into the mind of the main character. I'm looking forward to the next chapter so much...
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The Firework Committee
GanymedeRex commented on Richie Tennyson's story chapter in The Firework Committee
I enjoyed the story - it was different and broke from the typical mold. -
beautiful chapter ending
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This story just became really fun.
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I stumbled upon this story on Nifty and checked to see if it were here before emailing a recommendation that it would be better suited to GA. Your writing is most enjoyable and your technical skills are very good. Not only am I enjoying this story, but this chapter in particular made me feel wonderful. It evokes those wonderful memories of first intimate exploration - way before the sex, but those first tentative touches and how we handled them. Bravo!
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Chapter 27 - The pressure in my chest
GanymedeRex commented on albertnothlit's story chapter in Chapter 27 - The pressure in my chest
I DMed Albert today without a reply or indication he read my message so far. His last post anywhere - on GA or Twitter was May 20th. His absence is most concerning. I hope he is safe and doing well but I fear for the worst. -
I didn't recall the mother getting charged with child endangerment, but it was alluded to here. Technically, he kidnaped the child since he doesn't have custody during the weekdays. If I got that wrong I probably glossed over that part of the story.
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You tend to have antagonists who are just completely unreasonable jerks for no reason whatsoever. I would try to temper this in the future. Nice to know the child is a safely back. It may have been nice to hear details about his week away.
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that was hot.
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The discussion at the end of the chapter was pretty good, though outside of sexual interests, I don't really know anything about these characters. I don't know what they are a like as people or what else is happening in their lives except for being in high school.
