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  1. GanymedeRex

    Chapter 6

    This is an enjoyable story! I like it but with the pace of updates, I don't want to have to reread the whole thing every time a story comes out. If you can't pick up the pace, I recommend completing all chapters then release them on a schedule. You can still get input and revise along the way. If an update happens so rarely, I can't follow because the details of the story will be forgotten by then.
  2. Assuming Bailey received his injury in the Navy, he would be getting ~$40,000 tax-free a year in disability payments which could go up to $60K depending on other factors. He would also have free healthcare & adaptive devices.
  3. GanymedeRex

    Chapter 20

    If you get Global Entry from the state department, there is a border ID card you can carry that lets you go to Canada and back. I think its good for Mexico too. There is usually a special line for cardholders. I miss driving across the border for high school dates and similar activities.
  4. I appreciate the conversation on this topic and the variety of viewpoints which have been expressed. I'm surprised and delighted by the above quote, which is my favorite response so far. How unexpected and creative!
  5. GanymedeRex

    Chapter 16

    Those darned Russkies!
  6. GanymedeRex

    Chapter 12

    I see your point. I like it when relationships develop slowly and take their time. For me, that's the most exciting part. For Jimmy, he has a lot to get used to and its nice to see Rich letting it happen at a comfortable pace for him.
  7. GanymedeRex

    Chapter 10

    I agree. I always enjoyed sleepovers with friends in high school and even college - even the straight ones.
  8. GanymedeRex

    Chapter 10

    I like the three of them in bed. It makes me feel good to think about it...
  9. GanymedeRex

    Chapter 9

    This is a fantastic chapter. It moves well and further develops the characters. You are growing quickly as an author.
  10. GanymedeRex

    Harmony

    This was a really nice chapter. To be honest, I think Kyle is boring.
  11. GanymedeRex

    Chapter 2

    double extra long cliffhanger...... . . . . .
  12. I'm enjoying this, but at the pace of new chapters, I had forgotten the original story. I ended up re-reading the whole thing over the last two days. Can't go through that again.
  13. I was in Ryan's situation once and literally had no idea. So this isn't that unrealistic.
  14. I'm reading this a second time cause I lost track w/ recent updates. This was a perfect place to end! that "one more chapter" is now 30! Reading on.....
  15. GanymedeRex

    Chapter 6

    best written chapter so far. im getting into this story
  16. I think it can work , but it rarely does in actuality. I'm married to a wonderful wife. She knows about me and would probably let me go have fun with a dude, but to me, my family and her are more important. My desire for family stability is greater than my (majority) sexual desires. Part of being grown up is sacrifice. For me its worth it. As a kid, its different - then I'd tap everything in sight!
  17. I'm enjoying the story but have a question for people. Overnight, our Prince and Victor 'went 4 rounds'. Are people happy or impressed that the pairs in these stories have repeated sex a high number of times? I never take it seriously myself and don't think it really does anything for the story. I guess you could say that Vampires are sexually voracious.
  18. GanymedeRex

    Perfect

    Kyle is right about today's music. Going straight to anal in high school is not cool. Our protagonist better watch out.
  19. Enjoyable interaction and great setup for public trouble
  20. GanymedeRex

    Chapter 5

    Nice. The extra detail made a difference.
  21. I really doubt much bullying is going to be happening at the end of senior year. Kids are happy and thinking about leaving. Otherwise, I'm really enjoying this.
  22. I like these fellas and am pleased they are becoming friends. It takes talent to set something like that up.
  23. GanymedeRex

    Chapter 3

    This is on the right track in a couple places. I liked the discussion with the grandfather and the apartment. The part of the car seemed a little too good to be true, kind of like getting a bunch of Christmas presents. I did enjoy reading more, especially with a bit more detail.
  24. GanymedeRex

    Chapter 1

    this is really different. there are some unique and appreciated elements about the various races. refreshing
  25. GanymedeRex

    Chapter 1

    This chapter was rather confusing (I've read all the Riding Lessons) and felt there was a lot of information being thrown my way. The ending made, darn it, made me want to find out what happened, though.
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