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Etotsira

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  1. Etotsira

    Chapter 1

    L'histoire de Rimbaud et Verlaine était vraiment intéressante, j'ai de grands espoirs pour cette histoire!
  2. Etotsira

    Chapter 10: Pain

    If you getting a veggie pizza gives us this, then I see no reason why we should give you pepperoni!
  3. Etotsira

    Chapter 10: Pain

    Pain!!!
  4. Also a wonderful twentyonepilots song.
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    Two: Puppy

    Awesome chapter!
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    Building Blocks

    Awesome chapter!
  7. Etotsira

    Chapter 24

    I hope you’re okay!
  8. Etotsira

    Chapter 33

    I liked this. Thank you.
  9. Etotsira

    Chapter 14

    I like this too. Well done
  10. Etotsira

    Chapter 2

    Ok keep this coming I like it
  11. Etotsira

    Errors

    You’re doing great! Keep up the good work!
  12. Etotsira

    Errors

    You really suck, y’know. I had plans for a nice evening and an early bedtime. Now this chapter makes me want to reread the previous two books. Shame on you for writing a story so captivating!
  13. I think this might be the first Philip Dick reference Ive seen on here.
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    The Talk

    Joey deserved this. He deserves at least one person he lives with to be dependable and trustworthy. Unlike the snakes Jack and Roman. Also good on Joey’s mon, not a lot of parents have the opportunity to correct their mistakes like this, she makes me happy!
  15. I miss Toby, he wasn’t problematic. What’s up with him, let’s find him a nice girlfriend/boyfriend, and a good job, and a car, and maybe a cool pet!
  16. Y’know, a brain tumor could hypothetically be the cause of Joey’s “moods,” for lack of a better term.
  17. Ok. On further review. I’ve decided that everybody in this story is broken. The only solution is to punch roman in the face, chastise Jack, give Olly self confidence, give Joey a free doctor’s visit to a psychiatrist, and give Toby 100£ for being the best character.
  18. Yikes. I’d beat the crap out of Roman and Jack if I could. Also well done in writing a story that’s made me genuinely angry on behalf of a character, not a lot of stories on GA have evoked that from me.
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    You Did What?

    Screw you for getting me hooked on this story while I was at work!
  20. Etotsira

    Eleven

    Hold the hell up. I had no idea that this story was yours. How didn’t I recognize this wtf? Anyways great chapter, per usual.
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    Chapter 29

    Nope. Sorry. The story doesn’t end like this. I’m vetoing this story ending. Jihan wakes up a few days later, to a worried Kastan, who proceeds to tell him all is well and they live happily ever after.
  22. Etotsira

    Emotion

    Great chapter!
  23. Etotsira

    A New Nightmare

    Yes!! I’d love to read some of your side stories!
  24. Yes! Very much so!
  25. Etotsira

    The Accident

    Well, I’m hooked.
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