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    Chapter 1

    Etotsira commented on Wolffang's story chapter in Chapter 1

    An impactful first chapter, I eagerly await more.
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    Prologue

    Etotsira commented on Wolffang's story chapter in Prologue

    An interesting prologue, the story is interesting, but what drew me in was your command of the English language which you more than clearly showed off through the imagery you conjured up. Can’t wait to read more!
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    Let’s hope he does so soon, interesting that the dinner plans were brought up in front of him. I wonder if Taran is in the mood for a +1 🤔
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    Awesome chapter, also Maya isn’t slick LOL. She’s lucky Ronnie is naïve or else she’d have been in major trouble with Taran 😂
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    First Surge 1

    Etotsira commented on gabz2000's story chapter in First Surge 1

    Crap! I didn’t think about that last part 😞
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    First Surge 1

    Etotsira commented on gabz2000's story chapter in First Surge 1

    Excellent chapter, since Chris is half-elf and he gets their ability to manipulate elements, their speed, their strength, would it be fair to assume he gets their longevity as well?
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    As much as I feel for Hank, he’s being really unfair to Chase. Hank really should let Chase explain himself, but it’s his loss if he doesn’t (maybe Chase’s father will give help smooth things over). While a little part of me is holding out for Chase and Hank to find each other, the rest of me is anxious to see what Chase does when, or if, he moves on. Excellent chapter, as always! Etotsira
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    Revolving Doors

    Etotsira commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Revolving Doors

    Reading this story and ‘Ash and Ember’ I finally and truly understand what people mean when they say “the duality of man.” Excellent chapter, I just hope Gail has a plan for what Terrence is planning also props to Frank and Ben for being so cordial to their exes I, however, delight in their pain.
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    Regrowth

    Etotsira commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Regrowth

    The suspense is killing me, you monster! Something tells me Troy will stumble on to it though 🤔
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    Regrowth

    Etotsira commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Regrowth

    You’re building this up, and it feels like it’s only going to implode when Grant reveals that he read the journal if he ever does so. He really needs to say something now or, quite literally, forever hold his peace! Excellent chapter as always, can’t wait to read more on Thursday(or Wednesday as has been the pattern). Etotsira edit: I forgot the word he
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    Battle Lines 2

    Etotsira commented on gabz2000's story chapter in Battle Lines 2

    Il y a beaucoup à réfléchir, je suis d'accord 🤔
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    Battle Lines 2

    Etotsira commented on gabz2000's story chapter in Battle Lines 2

    Very awesome fight!
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    Gaining Strength 2

    Etotsira commented on gabz2000's story chapter in Gaining Strength 2

    Excellent chapter!
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    Yes, I really did think you were gonna kill him.
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    Chapter 6 Contact

    Etotsira commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 6 Contact

    Another wonderful, if heartbreaking, chapter! I eagerly await the next one, who doesn’t love a good mauling of the heartstrings!
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    Nate

    Etotsira commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Nate

    Same
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    Excellent.
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    Ok ok so after reading the last few chapters, I’m gonna go ahead and say that Laneer is the spirit sailor.
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    Good Intentions

    Etotsira commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Good Intentions

    Oh boy, I’m glad I reminded myself to exercise caution when reading this. I’m not sure I’m ready for how Troy will react 😓
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    Your posting schedule for this story was dissuading me from reading it, but after forcing myself to read the first chapter I have to say that I’m really like this! Excellent work so far. Hope to see more soon!
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    Reciprocity

    Etotsira commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Reciprocity

    I’m happy that things are finally looking up, however I am proceeding with a healthy amount of caution. I still don’t think Troy is gonna like the fact that Grant read his journal. All in all, excellent chapter!
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    A Wall Falls

    Etotsira commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in A Wall Falls

    Uh oh...if Troy were a gamer I wonder how he’d feel about cheat codes. 🤔
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    A Wall Falls

    Etotsira commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in A Wall Falls

    A great chapter, and I’m very glad that Troy‘s situation is, slowly, starting to improve. However, it kinda feels like Grant is cheating though, because if this were a game, where the end goal is a happy Troy and Grant, then Troy’s journal would be the cheat codes (although I suppose the end justifies the means).
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    Guarded

    Etotsira commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Guarded

    Ok, holy crap, first let me just say that I’d be kinda upset at Grant if I was Troy and I found out about that. Secondly, there’s this feeling that I get while I read this story from Grant’s perspective like something’s gonna go wrong at any moment and the feeling I get from Troy’s perspective feels closer to resignation, with a twinge of heartbreak, and holy crap you’ve got me hooked! Great work, so far, can’t wait to read more! À bientôt -Etotsira
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    From the Ashes

    Etotsira commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in From the Ashes

    Excellent first chapter! Can’t wait to read more
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