You really suck, y’know. I had plans for a nice evening and an early bedtime. Now this chapter makes me want to reread the previous two books. Shame on you for writing a story so captivating!
Joey deserved this. He deserves at least one person he lives with to be dependable and trustworthy. Unlike the snakes Jack and Roman. Also good on Joey’s mon, not a lot of parents have the opportunity to correct their mistakes like this, she makes me happy!
Ok. On further review. I’ve decided that everybody in this story is broken. The only solution is to punch roman in the face, chastise Jack, give Olly self confidence, give Joey a free doctor’s visit to a psychiatrist, and give Toby 100£ for being the best character.
Yikes. I’d beat the crap out of Roman and Jack if I could. Also well done in writing a story that’s made me genuinely angry on behalf of a character, not a lot of stories on GA have evoked that from me.
Nope. Sorry. The story doesn’t end like this. I’m vetoing this story ending. Jihan wakes up a few days later, to a worried Kastan, who proceeds to tell him all is well and they live happily ever after.