Etotsira
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Perfect thing before bed!
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If you’d like an editor, I could give you a hand. I like this story, and I wouldn’t mind being more involved with it
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Crime and Punishment
Etotsira commented on imperfect _pisces's story chapter in Crime and Punishment
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Never thought I’d be reading what was basically my high school experience on here. If I were Jake, I wouldn’t have taken that call tho.
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As soon as you said “Sony Walkman,” I knew this was gonna be an interesting story. Looking forward to more, can’t wait 😊 Etotsira
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You’re still a huge bully, but excellent chapter and I’m always happy to help!
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You’re bullying me!!
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I just want it on record that he’s bullying me
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Can’t wait for more
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It skips from 48 to 50, what happened to 49?
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I hope you’re okay and staying safe! Can’t wait for the next chapter
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Another great chapter!
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American English was annoying to learn and I actually had an easier time learning French, as a native Spanish speaker I relate 😂
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A wonderful chapter, but what truly captivated me was your description of the Boltfort. You have quite the grasp on the English language, and I can’t wait to read more.
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I wonder who Carl had in mind 🤔 Excellent chapter, when you uploaded chapter 3 and I saw that this story was third in a series and I eagerly read the first two books! I can’t wait to read more.
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Wonderful chapter! I can’t wait to see how this date affects Ronnie, in terms of his training and powers. My heart breaks for Taran, I truly hope that he’s simply misjudged his parents and that they turn out to be happy for him.
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Yes! I’m so glad you’re back! Great chapter, I’m glad Ronnie and Taran are bonding outside of training! Hope you’re staying safe, social distancing is key!
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Excellent chapter, I can’t wait to read more
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I’ve been surfing stories lately and I’ve seen your comments on stories I enjoy. You have good taste, sir/ma’am.
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She’s a force to be reckoned with that’s for sure 😅
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Sandra reminds me quite a bit of my mother, except mine loves to hug me 😂 Excellent chapter, by the way, watching Troy stand his ground was awesome to say the least and I’m glad William accepted Troy’s and Grant’s relationship.
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Excellent chapter! I can’t wait to start “slave driving” you again, even though I call it encouragement.
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I am not a slave driver! If you’re gonna keep calling me one, maybe I should start living up to the name then 🤔
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Thank you!!
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I’m not the author, but I’m gonna try to answer your questions. 1. Chris has a range on his abilities, as shown when he knocked out the rogues in the area around him not around the entire estate, so we can assume that they rounded up the unconscious enemy agents and after he got the information he incinerated them then. 2. I’m sure it does take time, but remember from Chris’ 3 month long vacation that he practiced energy manipulation. 3. I don’t think so. 4. Chris wouldn’t hurt an innocent and while I’m not sure how feels about his enemies, we’ve seen that he can do what needs to be done to protect himself and those he loves. As for the rest of your questions, you’ll have to wait and see @gabz2000 by all means, correct me if I’m wrong.
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