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Wednesday and Saturday eh? Just like @kbois coincidence🤔? Approximately what time will you post .I'm in PDT like @Mrsgnomie will it be zero dark thirty like @kbois? And since she will be editing this there will be absolutely NO mistakes whatsoever.....Why do I think spellcheck is going to malfunction a lot suddenly?

I have been meaning to start reading @Mikiesboy stories and now is the perfect opportunity to do so and this looks really good.And edited by @kbois no less who will say otherwise but will be thrilled to see that I'm reading this because she have a lot of snarky comments saved up to use on me.

The main reason I am writing this is because this author had been on a little bit of a hiatus and is therefore unfamiliar to many GA readers . I hope these five stars draws some attention. As far as the story goes I'll refrain from giving too many details you probably wouldn't believe me anyway. There will be things here that are impossible but because there are some not of this Earth aliens in this its somewhat plausible. What makes this author unique is every character is a varying shade of grey (even the villains are not totally evil) since these characters have some flaws it makes for a lot of sarcastic dialog which I love when it's done right and this authors does it right. This story deserves to read and has my recommendation

Very well done Thank you❤️ Now a few observations which will have no rhyme or reason. "What's it going to be? Another girl?" Nathan asked with an eye roll. "I'm sick to death of all the girly shit. Pink everywhere…" I'm glad Nathan and Jamie are doing well but in some ways Nathan is still........Nathan. One small detail you didn't mention now M has gone to school and is working what name does he go by. I'm sure on the school apps he didn't put his name down as M. I'm disappointed they didn't name one of the girls Hannah. The way Bradley was speaking of Beth it sounds like Mother-in-laws in same sex marriages are the same as Mother-in-laws is straight marriages. Speaking of Bradley how's this for a story idea.She is now a P.I. have them move to Florida (Although they'll be closer to Beth) And have Bradley work on a odd case where all the characters are in someway involved ala Magnum P.I. Great story

I'm not finished reading the chapter yet so perhaps this will be answered but my first reaction is why Disneyland instead of Disney World which is right in their back yard? From what I understand I've been to Disneyland but not Disney World I have heard Disney World is cooler.

I can relate EVERYTHING is faster than my brain

Well this time @Summerabbacat beast me to the punch on something I was going to say. Of course where I'm located it was zero dark thirty when it was posted by @Lee Wilson......wonder if he did that on purpose🤔.....anyway I digress . I was thinking the same thing when @Summerabbacat mentioned Bruce himself might have been abused.At first I was in favor of as a ruse put Bruce in a cell with a huge teenager and have the teenager imply he was about to have fun with Bruce but if he was also a previous victim that would have been way too much even for Bruce. So Manny and Bass now realized Rocky knows about his stepmother. Apparently they also don't realize Rocky knows more about what business his dad was in also. This might blow up in their face. Next up - "Return to School, and a Confrontation or Two" What I worry about is now that Rocky remember's Bruce the next confrontation might result in Rocky's builted up rage pouring out and he might go overboard in beating up Bruce🤞

This is from @Zuri when he quoted @Lee Wilson" I think there may be a slight delay in chapter 18, going to have send another update to my deitor" It's fixed now but that's how it originally appeared. Look how he spelled editor no wonder he needs an EDITOR😄(kidding)

Well I'm glad there is going to be a epilog .We still need to find out what happened with Hannah my guess is both she and Jamie woke out of the coma when the agent died. I guess Liam isn't going to have an official birth certificate besides who would you list as the the mother?🤔

Yeah that's possible I can see another evil alien making the trip for whatever reason. M is going to try to fix mother perhaps this time he can make it more formidable

If a bully had any ability to emphasize they wouldn't be bullies in the first place

Ah jeez just as the confrontation is about to begin the chapter ends. !@#$%^& cliffhangers

"Bass, you're an Italian buffet. Nothing there, I wouldn't try." "I know, I don't. I'm not going to hate you because you like pickles and I like tacos, but I don't need to hear about your pickle eating." “So, you want to taste my cannoli?” Bass chortled, “Yes. I want to see whether it’s creme-filled, or custard.” “You know, I’m going to ask Sandy if she can make cannoli, just so I can see your face when she puts a plate of them on the table.” “Hmmm, maybe I’ll ask her to buy ice pops.” With all these innuendos with sex and food I have come to a conclusion.The highest percentage of people partaking in buffets are bisexual and pan.Hmm🤔pan? also used to cook and serve food see more evidence

We’ve gotten through the worst thing that is ever going to happen to us.Well I would hope so but just the same no one should never ever say that life bites you in the ass when you least expect it. This is indicative of my pessimistic side don't mean to be a downer. I really hope Luke gets into SSU🤞 but you can't always get what you want (The Rolling Stones said that😄) But the way they were speaking about their relationship and then later after seeing the gravestones and Luke thinking We both now knew that we wouldn’t live forever, so we needed to make sure that we lived every minute we could. I think they are preparing themselves for SSU not happening

Well I'm now caught up.If you think @Mark Ponyboy Peters that my few comments I left were weird just wait to see what they are like after I just read a new chapter and give you my first reaction. @Summerabbacat pretty much covered everything I wanted to say about the Monolith. After what we seen of her so far she would be the kind of person who would kick Tony out of the house for him "betraying her". If so could that mean Tony living in Luke's parents house?

I don't know if they have this term in Australia (BTW I have relatives in Mt.Gambier and Adelaide) But in the U.S. I see what is called Jumbo shrimp. I always thought that contradicted each other.

Well it happened to me and I tried to reuse it a few times but The same thing happened those times alsoKidding HA,HA,HA

A pain in. the tooth is the worst. My friend's Mom was misdiagnosed she died a year later they found out if it had been caught at the time she was diagnosed she wouldn't have.Doctors shouldn't jump to conclusions

We are assuming that Jamie's and Hannah's seizure's are because of the agent and that is probably true but it could be something Mother did to counteract what the agent did. So the baby is close.While M is using Micheal's body could the baby have some alien abilities or even appearances. My guess is the baby. would resemble Micheal.And since it was hinted Micheal is using the baby's body perhaps this could be Micheal personality and everything

I had a thought Greg was the MIB making himself look like Greg @drpaladin

Connor mentioned the two other aliens he saw earlier in the story they are in each corner of the backyard Connor gulped. He stroked M's hair soothingly for a moment, then he got up and went to the window. In the backyard, two of the agent's cronies stood in the grass, one at either corner of the house. The thin, zombie man and the pig-like police officer we're watching the house.

I just got done reading this chapter and here is my thinking at the moment.You'll know of course if I am wrong or right. While Davo was certainly acting like an ass before and it's reasonable to think he sprayed the car after hearing Chris tell them that Davo had a message for them but to me it seems too simple. Perhaps Davo heard about a couple of people wanting to spray Matt's car and THAT"S the message he wanted to give but before he could the possible other perpetatrator(s) got wind of it and gave Davo that black eye and threatened him not to say anything.Onward to see if I'm wrong or right

Makes perfect sense they met at the dog park.When I took my dog to the park pretty ladies who would otherwise never give me the time of day would talk to me. Hmmm🤔 perhaps we can start a gay friendly dog park

I don't think the chapter felt. out of sync at all it was your usual excellent chapter. Nothing to blame on the medications.Maybe I didn't recognize any. difference because you're on something with every chapter you write (I'm kidding,I'm kidding😄) I have theory why Judge Crustypants agreed to what was pretty much a slap on the wrist to Bryan.The Judge could relate because there were many times HE wanted to throw a glass at Calvin In all seriousness I thought it was a plastic glass until it was revealed it was an actual glass.Wow that is MUCH more serious and never acceptable even if it was aimed at Calvin. “Have you told a teacher or other adult?” Steve asked. I love Steve as a character but he sounded naive there.He's attended public school and now has a job where he is an insider surely he should know more often than not telling a teacher does no damn good. Has Calvin and Luis ever interacted? I ask because If Calvin doesn't know Luis I really hope he crosses paths with Luis while he's working with Caleb.Please Calvin F with Luis please. It might be the last thing thing you do