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I just noticed We haven't seen a comment from @Howzat for about 2 chapters I hope he is all right🤞

You know something I beg to differ on That saying about doing the same thing and expecting a different result gets used a lot in politics.I know of examples where the same thing was done with different results but I won't be going there I'l give an non political example instead. Say you have an NFL team with the number one passing attack playing a team with the worst pass defense and they light them up for 50 points the next time they play. the team that won would likely do the same thing.But what if it was wet and very windy then doing the same thing WOULD have a different result.Now Asa and Caleb would be doing the same thing but with different conditions they know the layout of the place now and Asa when he escaped may have not only seen the monsters but also in his memory in might have seen some of the traps Huntington set so if he concentrates he might be able to identify them. This would be tried in different conditions, Having said all that I do think this is too risky but this is @kbois idea so I'm on board with it.

That was a great gesture Armand and Colin did for the three old men although tinged with little sadness with Armand saying they won't be coming here anymore. I guess next will be some kind of confrontation with Christian

Do they actually have an idea what was happening and why when that snow and ice started on the kitchen floor and counters.?

This didn't happen of course But I though of something If Judge Ridge overheard any of what happened between Mrs Linden and Jeremy could she have done something? I hope Jenny Perch or Mr.Garrett get a sudden promotion at CPS. I'm sure Prescott heard about the phone calls(Although I can picture her co-workers "forgetting" to mention that to her)

I'm about to read the next chapter and I think you're right.

First there's a beta reader @Danilo Syrtis who hardly ever gives good advice and now there's an editor who's an idiot @Mrsgnomie what's the common thread here🤔.........OH YEAH @kbois has them working for her.

I wish you had have them go to Adelaide I have some cousins there it would have Interesting other that described since I never been there.I have other cousins in Mt.Gambier but I understand thats a long way away from where Sebastian is. It wasn't mentioned but were there no adults with them on the flight back? you would think there would be after what happened.

Up to you BUT!!! Do you really want MY advice?

Yet you keep sending him the chapters🤔

You're not suggesting that's what they should do with Huntington do you? 🤔....Don't think it will work

Now you done it you ticked @Danilo Syrtis off

Very exciting chapter .So an act of God (lightning) helped Asa escape. Although it wasn't the soldier who open the slot fault I bet Huntington still killed him for "failing" .Huntington also thought Asa was alone so they were unaware of Caleb another miss someone will take the blame for. Huntington can make mistakes that will be the difference when the two sides finally battle. either a sandwich and fruit or another hand-held option such as the burrito he’d been given last time. They were in Russia right? I bet there isn't a burrito anywhere in Russia especially these days

Well I'm here if Gnomie is not......Because I just HAVE to be on page 1What do I do now?🤔 .....Oh yeah read the chapter see you in a few. BTWAuthors don't count

You called it.

Is there another relative like an Aunt who might cause trouble?Granted Lacey used the f-----t slur under the influence of a tumor but she still used it would a sibling feel the same way.?

At best I'm guessing the younger priest was thinking the old priest was senile and thought he was saying was nonsense. AT worst he was embezzling donations I guess Armand will find out with more investigation

A chapter of just being normal everyday people without shifting into anything.And Devin And Mac made a couple of friends in Rory and Jaxson (Not to mention the eye candy treat they got) So why the secrecy from Mac's parents are where they are going tomorrow?

Geez Cindy manages to be a kill joy from states away.

No one in South London would have believed me, but I couldn’t tell anyone anyway. It made me wonder why Tristian had insisted on bringing me along in the first place. I was a loose cannon and prone to making mistakes. With so much for him to lose, it seemed like an unnecessary risk to take. I was thinking the same thing so the only explanation for this is Tristian is really into James.Besides there would no point to this story otherwise “There you are. We were getting worried; I thought the hounds had got you.” When I read that line I immediately thought of a female Mr. Burns

I have heard stories of a triplet finding his brothers later in life that would have kept the story going but then there would be a third Franklin we already had two too many. great story

The title of the next chapter suggests somebody is going to some how try to mess with Derek and Jeremy legally what else would set off Judge Ridge ire. $14 a head? No way you can find that In California. I hope the dreams are not an ongoing thing with Adam

Very interesting first chapter to say the least.It was all because of @kbois editing right? (But we know better)

I am in no way qualified to speak on this topic so as far as I know what I'm about to write may be nonsense. I would think having somebody who had been through the same thing Orson is going through would made sense.That person could tell Orson that he/she made the very same mistake at the beginning and that it will get better but perhaps I am being too simplistic. BTW unlessI missed it are you going to tell us how Jeremy got his guitar back?

@chris191070 and @Danilo Syrtis said it right when they said it was only a matter of when Jermy's Dad was going to die because of the bottle and it just as easily could of happen he Jeremy was at work or shopping he couldn't be there 24/7. Clay is almost as hard on himself as Jeremy is on himself perhaps they are more alike then they think