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  1. weinerdog

    Prologue

    But beneath the patched tunic and the worn leather coat, there was muscle. More than Shem had, anyway. The Twins had seen to that.Lets see Val from the other story and Rob. Lets compare.....Both can kick. ass...both have three letter names that could be a guys name....No I don't see any similarities at all
  2. Stupid sister is WAY too kind. Felony stupid is more accurate
  3. weinerdog

    Prologue

    This looks interesting but I have to go to an appointment now .SEE you in the afternoon when I get back
  4. This story had the perfect combination of a interesting and thought provoking topic and the emotional human element .Thank you If there ever is a business like Halcyon it would probably be a disaster. While some reasonable regulation is called for both the company and the government will put in some rules that will F everything up
  5. weinerdog

    Shadows

    Kyle has taken it upon himself to try to be a mediator.I'm tempted to say something about the road being paved with good intentions but I guess we have to give Kyle a chance. Could the situation decline so much that Mr. Reilly might threaten BOTH Jake and Danny to be out of the band
  6. After what they went through with Marcus it is so good to see the kids reacting normally to a hockey game
  7. Close to a 4 and a half hour difference from todays post and yesterday,Must have had that Jumbo espresso
  8. weinerdog

    Chapter 7

    Saving MY!!!! postI'm honored(though maybe not after I see what you did)
  9. weinerdog

    Chapter 7

    Geez take 3
  10. weinerdog

    Chapter 7

    Take 2
  11. weinerdog

    Echoes

    I told myself the nightmares would fade once I grew used to the sounds, that each patrol would become a little easier than the last, that eventually the explosions, the gunfire, and the names carved onto memorial boards would stop following me back to my cot at night. If that actually ever stops happening thats when someone is damaged
  12. weinerdog

    Chapter 7

    Unless this story stretches until they are 18 which I don't believe you done before (could be wrong) We want a one-off update for when they turn 18. @chris191070 after he sees this will start calculating the days, hours and minutes until that time
  13. So did Croft do the "hex"
  14. Breaking NEWS: Unauthorized Tart consumed Government orders shutdown
  15. weinerdog

    Chapter 26

    I was thinking the same thing.If Casey and his gang of morons leave it at that while they would be still bad but they wouldn't be that bad. But I fear they won't leave it at that.
  16. weinerdog

    Chapter 26

    For some reason I wasn't aware of this song with those four in it,Thanks for that
  17. weinerdog

    Chapter 26

    Levi managed a small smile at the sight that was revealed, of Father wearing a plain black t-shirt – with the logo of an old rock and roll band on it – and black pants underneath You could have thrown @Summerabbacat A bone and made it an ABBA t-shirt
  18. weinerdog

    Chapter 7

    For the record I had to do the same thing for my step dad that @kbois and @drsawzall did for about 2 years. Although I always recognized what a selfless gesture it is actually experiencing it helped deepen my empathy for people who do this
  19. This could be grounds for firing Tessa. In the epilogue please have her land a better job
  20. Look at it this way Ben will transition from being a lover to a Sugar Daddy😄 BUT!! a Sugar Daddy who loves Julian
  21. Wren acted more like an AI companion operating within the parameters than Julian ever did. Wren is the one that needs "Corrective action"
  22. Every moment of this chapter was gripping
  23. Dude must have had a jumbo espresso with a couple of vivarins crushed in
  24. This is usually @chris191070 line but not only back to Jail,Seeing why he's there he's going to get introduced to Bubba
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