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We could ask Paul McCartney ...oh wait that was came IN through the bathroom window
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Tune in? I've been reading instead.What station is this on?
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What a predicament they are in I would like to be alone with either of them in a bathroom but not like that. Here's thought Jacy showed a real interest in the artifacts if McClain confronts them maybe Jacy can say "I know some of those artifacts were stolen" That nightmare Killian had is very disturbing
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Invite Jacy to the cook out Killian
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I love your scene with Scott and Willie but maybe I had a better one "Hey Willie I'm so sorry I didn't notice a couple of your teeth were imbedded in my fist I didn't mean to walk away with them. here you go"
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Lilith, now dressed in clothes that Chloe had helped her with (a process that had involved much swearing, one near-breakdown over the complexity of buttons, and a brief existential crisis about the existence of zippers), Lilith should be thankful that in this case she's not a guy if she is having trouble with the concept on putting on clothing imagine the tragedy of zipping up pants "How do we shield?" "You think about the least romantic things possible." Give them all a picture of me in a thong problem solved
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How do you do that? I can't get my coffee creamer to spell Good ❤️Morning
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Hope everything goes well🙏
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Okay I'm confused (I know nothing new) It seems like like it should be one more chapter coming but there's a Share Your review now link as if the story is over. You said it was 20 chapters and this is chapter 19 but the prologue is also being counted as a chapter so I wonder if this is a GA thing?
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What the children did was very cool. And its good people around him remembered Kitt's birthday.So what will be the thing that will make Kitt ready to really talk to Matt?
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Very well done❤️ . In most GA stories Xavier would be the biggest a-hole in this one I'n not even sure he's in the middle of the pack. Come up with something really good for him in the epilogue....something like he found out his GF is really a Man😄
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Ben had come back an hour ago with three bulging McDonald’s bags and four drink carriers of Coke, Well thats enough for me what is everybody else having? Actually in my heyday that isn't that far off
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Oh yeah I forgot about that.....The U.S. sucks
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That looks a lot like my first day at Drivers Ed....I not exaggerating by much
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I don't like that .That means everybody is illegal and jailbait
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I love Satchmo's rendition of What A Wonderful World(Along with others songs).He is a perfect example on how passion can overcome a limited voice Wow quite a revelation for me about Perry Como😭 Totally agree about Sinatra I think Dean Martin was way better But I will say this about Sinatra while he was soooooo overrated as a singer I think he was underrated as an actor.He was a damn good actor
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Seven-eleven had the super big gulp and then the double gulp what would this be? Starbucks has the tall size I guess this would be The obese(limited time only)
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Matt did the right thing not telling Stephen anything and apparently Eva and Michael agree. OK I guess after this chapter Stephen is finally out of the jackass category but he still has a LOT to fix
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When you were writing this did you foresee your character being called Arsehair @Josh Aterovis? I bet when you write you next story and you are thinking what to name characters you're first thought will be "Okay what can @Summerabbacat do with this name?
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For the same reason there are explosions in @AquariusGuy stories😄...whatever that is. At the end @AquariusGuy asks "Is Noah in a coma?" He had a story TJ's Road To Recovery where he was recovering from a coma. Guess what happened in that story?....He had another coma
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The Quiet Summer Before Everything Breaks
weinerdog commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in The Quiet Summer Before Everything Breaks
Like I said be patient stuff does happen eventually and you'll notice more and more readers saying similar things.The Author himself addresses it in a chapter comment down the line -
That picture you have at the top Charlie is certainly a cutie. Somebody who's above drinking beer?....Gee what planet did you think he was from😄
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Taine already did this with teachers but I wonder what kind of stuff Lynix could say in a class Simon is in Thankfully you didn't write a scene where Kearns or Mrs. Simms are affected by the spell.....Or are you going to
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I was going to mentioned that in my follow up comment but you stated it better.Asher on the other hand says this "I could transfer to Pemberton, like we originally planned." "You'd do that just for me." "In a heartbeat." That sounds desperate and hasty and contrary to what Asher said not very mature. Bottom line Asher has to stay in town for his still new family who he has gotten close to and also for his P.I. career with his mentor. Of course as I said before I'm rooting for Jacy. Speaking of I'm picturing a conversation with those two where they talk about the situation with Micah and Asher
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"Where are we going? Am I dressed okay? Should I change my pants?" "You look fantastic. That is a big difference Asher and myself(Well anybody and myself really) Where Asher said "You look fantastic" I would have said "Hmm maybe you choose a different pair of pants" Let's go to your room and I'll help you pick the right pair"
