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So all it takes is a kiss to have a line across the name on the list.If it turns out all 9 guys are going to be interested in Q at the same time then there's no way his studies could keep up .I don't even think Einstein could hang in those circumstances

Just discovered this story loved the first chapter it's really late where I am so I have to stop now but Tomorrow I'm definitely picking up where I left off BTW my name is Ken also (I've only said that in a few other comments on stories) so you just have to be a good writer LOL Wow if I had a list like that it would take me all night to fill out if I used a pencil I would write the names down then I would think of someone else an go "oh wait, wait,wait" and erase a name and replace it with another.I would probably wear out at least two erasers but this has a quill pen so I would have to really think hard about it (pun intended)

He just stopped just like that something must have changed in his life because unlike Circumnavigation he didn't comment along like he did with the other stories.There were still some things left unresolved like did Brandon reconcile with his parents?Was Joe Klump left anything that belonged to Scars?How much longer was Instinct popular?Maybe things will again change for him and he'll be back.🤞 Another author like C James who wrote great stories then just stopped was @DomLukahis stories are mostly about gay highschool romance The Long Way IMO is a must read

Depending on how he lands they might not find the body he might be mistaken for a KLUMP of ashesSorry best I could do

I figured there had to be casualties on the good guys side and guess while Jim Linda and Johnson were liked characters by the readers they were not as liked as the others if C James killed any of the band the readers would have revolted. This will hit Brandon especially hard

Say what you want about Instinct and Helen they are fiercely loyal

Before I get to what happened in the chapter I noticed Loe's comment about paying $17.00 to attend the practice.Back in the the early 2000's was the last time I went to watch NFL team practice when the city I live in still had a football team😠(you can probably guess where I'm from with that comment)At the time practices were free so I guess I'm really out of touch.The NFL at the time still had a rule that if they charged for practice they could not refuse to not let somebody in to observe which included scouts from another team so teams didn't charge for that reason. Then one year Washington did and they then found about that rule.I guess that rule changed.I'm a NFL fan but I wouldn't pay $17.00 to watch practice As it was said in another we know they stay together but it will be interesting to see how it plays out. The fact that Lars got mentioned the way he did tells me we'll be seeing him soon and I'm looking forward to that. @Mrsgnomie mentioned how holidays are tough on Loren so I could see while Jay is with his family on Thanksgiving I see Loren alone in his house and he gets a call saying Lars is outside in front of his property or something along those lines .Christmas would be another day for something like that to happen

You mean it wasn't your line😳

You know Murphys law? well there is Eric Carlisle's Law anything that can be said wrong he will.

The Scar knows how smart the General is but Scar is arrogant enough to think he's smarter then the General and that will end up being part of his downfall. Right now it's subtle but I get the feeling The General and Felisha are going to fall for each other but too soon to say

The weekend will be awesome . We still have a lot to find out we know they have names only for each other that implies they are not out at school yet but we do not that yet so my comment might be irrelevant

Just discovered this like what I'm reading so far

Like in Circumnavigation would a natural occurrence like a possible earthquake timed just right stop the Scar from doing whatever it is he's going to do?

Here's what I think and I haven't read ahead so I'm probably wrong.Did the Scar still have enough resources to keep track of the General movements? If he did then I assume he knows about the General's son AND his contact with Helen .I think he arranged for the Son to be captured and anticipated the Generals need for mercenaries the Son's rescue might already be prearranged.I somehow see The General and his Son making Brandon and Chase wedding which means the Scar will follow.The Shadow will be at the wedding so that mean Joe would be there.Father and son cross paths and maybe circumstances will have Joe be the one to deliver the fatal blow to the Scar. I probably got all this wrong.If somebody who's read the story wants to tell me how much I got wrong feel free

To use a military term although I'm not sure I'm using it right I see a SNAFU happening with the plan on using the charter plan something unforeseen will happen that gets Eric involved in this hope I'm wrong

Pretty ambitious goal Rafe has there I can't even begin to think how he would go about this

I assume you talking about the General but you can very well be talking about Eric...on anything he does

When I first starting reading the other story I had thought The brothers and Brandon had the worst parents but needless to say it was Lump who had the worst parent but the gap between Jerry and J.T. is much narrower than I imagined. While it can't be as dangerous as what happened in the last story I get a felling General's plan for his son will have dangers of its own And I see the guys helping the General and being in that danger

You know doing cliffhangers and then denying it is one thing but to have us think a loved character died at the end of the previous chapter only to find she didn't THATS EVIL. Our Author is brilliant and entertaining but still EVIL.But you know what? I love it

No that wasn't a cliffhanger because C James says he doesn't do cliffhangers

I implied something like this could happen but I didn't really believe it.

I'm envisioning a scene in a upcoming chapter(remember this is me guessing so probably wrong) where Lump will similar to what people do in a 12 step AA program approach the guys and apologize for his actions.We are seeing gradual signs of him changing he might without intent say something about his father that will fill in some blanks in the guys mind. I agree with @NimirRajThe Scar killed Lump's mother

Because they do their Jobs with so much humility

Well we find out the bad guys are bigger POS then we realize.And the Morterero's are really dumb asses.Neil knows how evil they are does he know about this specific incident? The way Neil didn't want West to be snooping around makes me wonder if Neil thinks they are untouchable.I think their only chance is to set kind of trap for them but does a plan like that exists or is even possible

If anybody deserves to be happy it's Dylan and Mark .I'm glad also for Sammy and Rob.Pierson followers act a lot like followers or another well known person I'll leave it there but I'm sure most of you know who I'm thinking of I know this was your first story on GA. Is this you're first story story overall? If it is I have to say the story reads like a more experienced author wrote it