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Everything posted by weinerdog
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All that stuff you said that is still to come it sounds like this story has a decent chance to be the longest story nn GA (along with the best) I hope I stay alive long enough to see it end.
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With all those enormous new duties they have I can't see J.J. continuing his A.I studies and Henry still going to M.I.T It was mentioned that as far as the public knows J.J. wasn't abducted and obviously his Parents and Franklin have been briefed.I guess we"ll find out but did the C.I.A lady also speak with the Rodriguez and Gonzales families also and do they know what happen to J.J.? The Gonzales family would know J.J. was missing but not necessarily that he was abducted
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The leak from the DA's office is not only about protecting Bruce there are other big time movers and shakers that might be implicated I would think. Tim is afraid Judge Howard would think Tim is nuts if he told him about Donnie.How about having Donnie tell Tim to say a certain detail to the Judge that would make the Judge believe him Donny would know what that is. If Bruce does indeed die could they still get monetary damages from Bruce's estate?
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OH YOU!!!!!......ending the chapter just as Donnie visits nice cliffy. I liked it when Stephen said "Hogwash" I think if they weren't in mixed company he would have said another word instead
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After reading about what Seth's dad did to him I thought he easily had the worst father out of he and Noah but after finding out more about Carson the gap has narrowed considerably. As young and inexperienced Noah may be he is way more qualified to run the company then Carson
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If I were Brock I would definitely think twice before messing with Noah.
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I'm sure this is not the first time this kind of Doctor-Patient thing has happened but you can't deny AM has made progress it may be a bad idea to change Doctors because of that. I'll be interested to see how AM reacts to Eva Marie
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I guess he can thank Amy for that for it probably doesn't happen if not for her.Keith should sent a thank you note.... on second thought no
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He never looked in a mirror all that time ?If he was growing facial hair you'ed think he would know it when he scratched his chin etc. I'm a dumb ass so I would have never though about J.J. being kidnapped but I would have thought Jeff and all the higher-ups at Applezon the Federal government and even J.J. himself as smart as they all are would have considered this possibility..J.J. and Henry better have bodyguards now. Looking forward to all the reunions .
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The situation sucks but it is a hell of a lot better when you have guys like that being there for you
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The way Blake was reacting to Aric's house it sounds like he comes from modest means even before he was on the streets . Comsie have I met you under a different name?The way you are writing Aric you could writing about me especially when I was 14 .I also at times wished I had a perv cam(I never did that I promise)And yep I would probably do the sweatpants thing also...I think I said too much already I better stop before they ban me from GA
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With Eva Marie arrival I'm thinking Stephen and Tim will be adopting sooner rather then later. There's a extradition treaty with Canada Bruce had to have known that but perhaps because he doesn't know about Donnie he wasn't worried.Has anything Bruce done be considered a capital offense? .I only ask that because in the past Canada has refused to return Americans because of the death penalty. What kind of school district doesn't offer Spanish in this day and age?I know the town is small but the district covers a wider area it looks like they are as backwards as the town is.
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I have to admit they know how to put on a show. I don't patronize these kinds of sites but for these guys I might have. As for Sasha will one thing lead to another and then want to start making appearances with them on FF?And could that cause friction with Sammy and Jake?
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I just got notifications from the last 6 chapters that's been posted this is happening with few other authors who I wasn't getting notifications from.Is this GA way of fixing it?Has this happened to anyone else?
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Fredo from The Godfather wouldn't agree with that
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So AM may feel responsible for her husbands death it was unintentional but still.I'm curious if she told the doctor about that. While Mom should have told Dad what happened I do appreciate her concern that Dad would have tracked down Bruce and kill him.
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Cindy lifted Luke being grounded?Timing doesn't make sense even for Cindy.Now what is she up too?
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I'll go you one better if you believe that kind of behavior is hereditary.Maybe Bruce is a product of a rape ...Mum's rape I sure hope not though it would explain a lot. I came back to edit this after thinking about I don't believe Mum would have allowed Bruce to do therapy if that's the case but I suppose it's possible if that happened she put him up for adoption and didn't know the name of the baby .
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I don't how I did it what was meant as a chapter comment ended up in the user feedback section me and technology are enemies LOL. If you're interested in my chapter comment that's where it is🙄
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This chapter brings up questions that I hadn't really givin much thought 😄 is do a higher percentage of home schooled kids have trouble socializing? Say what you want about ours school but it a good place to meet people .Many a__holes to be sure but also many good people I suspect Finn is one of them.Alec from his time on the internet seems to buy into the stereotype that all jocks are jerks In my town in California(and school) seeing someone with Alec's appearance would just get some rolled eyes nothing worst apparently its a lot different in this farm town.My guess is one of the kids at the lunch table Finn tried to get Alec to sit at will try to start so s__t with him and Finn will step in.ALec through those limited encounters at the bakery must have somehow made an impression on Finn. This is the second story of yours I'm reading in both of them a character has blue hair what is it with you and blue hair?Kidding LOL.Loved the chapter
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Well that community has its priorities. Rape?..eh but two people being gay?THAT's different
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So Bruce is in California(why did you have to pick the state I'm in?) Perhaps Tim should ask Gramps if he knows the right kind of people close to Mexico because that's where Bruce might go after he's been served. If Donnie gives the right heads up perhaps they can contact law enforcement and tell them where he will be
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Oh My.I'm thinking he's been kidnapped by foreigners I'm guess his knowledge can be valuable maybe have even have military uses but that is my first thought. I'm guessing Jeff will be contacted by whoever did this because I think this involves the stuff J.J. did at Applezon.Is J.J. important enough for the Federal government to be involved? I think you can blame me and my big mouth I made a comment in a previous chapter comment that after J.J. killed that pedo that he has had a good run meeting the right people personally and professionally so I should have known something like this was going to happen.I see J.J. being in captivity for quite a stretch .Henry being alone in New York as a sixteen year could be a problem also.Oh man so much to find out
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It looks like Ophelia is very perceptive it might be because her Mother is a psychologist .She is doing this for Noah but there is also a legitimate concern for Seth and Lilith.
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While I appreciate Seth's frustrations I would say it was a overreaction Noah meant not offense
