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Out of Parkers close group of friends I was hoping their would be a mix of reactions.I figured Dan would be extreme but I thought it was possible the others might have prejudices based on being unfamiliar with black people and never having interacted with them but would come around and moderate their thinking after some thinking of the issue.But sadly this group are just hateful bigots.Looks like Natalie is Parker's only friend. Now that there is a counter protest planned it doesn't take that much of an imagination to see angry volatile people on both sides losing it and something happening.You would think since its in front of a police station the PD would be able to control things but I think Parker's Dad is right the PD will look for a reason to blame the protesters for something happening.While there would be people with smartphones in the crowd the PD would do it damndest to confiscate everyone of them or at least the ones they noticed.Some videos of police misbehavior have been recorded from a person who was not seen.If I were Parker's Dad I would find a way to record what's going on without being noticed like from inside a building or something like that because the Somerset PD have given ample reason they are not to be trusted.It would not surprise me if Parkers Dad is thinking along the same lines.
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One thing I neglected to mention in my previous comment the line "There’s no sweet talk or eye gazing. Once Jay is in me, he’s thrusting. It takes a minute to adjust. He’s a fucking horse," Jay was a Clydesdale earlier in the story you'ed figured he would be at least that on his wedding night....especially after it's been a year🤔
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Calling this a must read is an understatement as any other superlative you can give this story For those readers who look at reviews before deciding to read a story I urge you to read Boss Nanny first while that is not totally essential it does make this incredible story that much more so. Another bonus you get from reading this is the chapter comments are ALMOST as entertaining the story itself just pace yourself it can get exhausting.
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Somehow I just knew somehow this would be the first Gif
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Just Awesome Get the negative out of the way first.What Planet are those parental unit from??/What the hell did they think was going to happen having the nerve to say"'Our sons"had to have violated some law.Enough of that they are both💩 Cousin camp was was everything it was advertised to be and moreThere absolutely nothing to add that's how perfect the chapter was. Does "stay tuned for more.." mean what I think it means 🤞
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Alec has no idea what a referee does in baseball
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That went really well maybe too well. My cynical part of my limited brain is thinking OMG what's going to happen it can't be this easy can it. Finn forgot to mention he has buns.He definitely has those too.(sorry best I can do)
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Chapter 2 - You're not Weak
weinerdog commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 2 - You're not Weak
The stalker was mentioned again so I guess he's an important part of this story.On one hand if he were dangerous he would have tried something by now but then where would the story go?Blocking him from sending texts could escalate things maybe. Luke seems to think his dad with that Women will be short lived I wouldn't be so sure. I chuckled when Luke waved at Edith at the curtain when he drove past.You know she might be the one with the more serious mental health issue. -
I'm curious what the consequences would be for MaryLou.I understand the Mom being clueless about her daughter but why was she tolerated for so long by others?And a tape was needed to change things.
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Chapter 26: More Talking
weinerdog commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Chapter 26: More Talking
You think sweets are awful? Then I wonder how you ended up having Alec and Finn meet in a shoppe that specializes in them.- 37 comments
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Chapter 26: More Talking
weinerdog commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Chapter 26: More Talking
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Chapter 158 Blown & Tossed by the Wind
weinerdog commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 158 Blown & Tossed by the Wind
@Dodger has said a couple of times the trust is set up to where Don can't access the money.That of course doesn't mean he might have found a way to do it illegality if so that would be be a whole other issue and Don would be in deep doo-doo but I wouldn't even know if that would be possible. -
Chapter 11 - One Day at a Time
weinerdog commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 11 - One Day at a Time
Hey @James Matthewssounds like @Anton_Cloche wants to write the story interested in co-autoring? -
Chapter 1 - The First One
weinerdog commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The First One
The fact that these attacks come out of nowhere is disconcerting this particular day seemed to be a calm uneventful day so what brings it on? I have a really good buddy who's impossible to dislike every time you interact with him you walk away smiling.A few years back he was telling me his doctor prescribed medication for him for his anxiety I had no idea and he was the last person I would associate with that.Which is why when Luke's doctor said "Turn the dial down lad." well geez the guy you work out with at the gym or the guy you're having a beer with at the bar can pretty much tell you same thing "Pull yourself up by your bootstraps" "Buck up" for a doctor this guy sounds pretty simplistic- 17 comments
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Chapter 26: More Talking
weinerdog commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Chapter 26: More Talking
Well the stage is set if that's the right term.Will Alec be more assertive in this next conversation with Finn? And how will Finn react?Based on how Finn was when Alec left I see no reason why this won't be okay but I've been surprised before.I hope River designs an awesome selfie Alec can send Finn. So you were intent on dying this weekend? Do I see the makings of another story coming?If that came of as flippant I didn't mean it to but I find that comment interesting. Fried candy bar? You mean a regular candy bar isn't unhealthy enough?- 37 comments
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In this case either word is accurate
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Chapter 11 - One Day at a Time
weinerdog commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 11 - One Day at a Time
All the baggage is gone from Puppy's life at the moment at the moment BTW I have relatives in Austrailia but I never been there do you know where they are going?If they are going to Adalaide this would be a good time to go.🤔I'd like to watch Puppy and Steven bicker So Puppy says he's through with men?We all know how likely that is.Hope you revisit his life down the road.I'll be interested to see how he's doing.Thank you for the story- 13 comments
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Put THAT in your next story description trust me the readers will come
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MORE!MORE! I"M STILL NOT SATIFIED
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I normally don't lobby an author to put something in a in process story that would make me more annoying than I am now. Having said that I know this one character hasn't been mentioned at least I don't recall in this story and it makes sense since the story centered around Jay and Loe but I hope at the wedding you mention in passing that Matt's Dad Brad was there.
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Gee you don't think I was too obvious do you
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Oh man if that ever became the case I would be going on the lam
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Make up fake accounts if you have too.....Who said that?
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Chapter 158 Blown & Tossed by the Wind
weinerdog commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 158 Blown & Tossed by the Wind
For a very brief moment I thought the Pastor had a little bit of intelligence but the more he started talking about the gay topic the more he sounded like the idiot he is and I'm convinced they should not sail I just hope nobody gets hurt or even worse dies. Assuming they all survive I hope Robbie stays at Rory's house for the time being.There is still a slight worry there Rory is cute if the stars line up just so its not out of the question that Rory and Robbie have an encounter -
You heard the old saying about New York,New York the city they had to name twice or words to that effect. Well this is the chapter you have to read twice
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