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When you mentioned the chef's flaming pan I thought to myself "Oh no Kyle or Mathias is not going to do what I think they are going to do? Yep they sure did LOL. Waiting around for fifteen minutes for the train I think would have given Salvatore enough time to get there I have to think he considered that's where they were going to go especially since they had bags with them. Kyle and Mathias may want to consider the possibility of Salvatore and his thugs waiting for them at a stop.Is there a way they can get off the train before it reaches a stop?Other then jump which would not be smart.
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Will we see the aforementioned sister? If we do it's hard not to see some inappropriate incident happening. Just like you get a second opinion from a doctor that is what Stephen Dad did with Tim.If his lawyer has a hidden motivation Tim would find it.
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I guess that was Tim's dad that asked Stephen to build him a system he's going to be one busy guy. Does Randy want to do the same kind of thing?I ask that because if Stephen is going to inherit two businesses he'll need as many trusted allies as he can get
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So what were you saying?Did Randy find out the same thing that Tim found out about the Goat?
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From Beale Street to Meridian Street
weinerdog commented on Altimexis's story chapter in From Beale Street to Meridian Street
J.J. is sure making the most out of his vacation but there were two spots where he was close to that he seemingly missed .He said he was in Missouri (I had no idea the strongest earthquake in the U.S. happened there) but didn't go to Branson.He was in Cincinnati so that means he was somewhat close to Cleveland my God Rock and Roll Hall of Fame maybe in the next chapter -
Hey if I'm not mistaken I think he's a Brit cut him some slack😄 I know I would get the geography of GB wrong
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I wonder if the two receptionists at Gramps and ar Stephen Sr place of work are related.At the lunch Stephen mentioned the run-in but didn't say the name of the employee I wonder if Gramps is going to try to find out. Tim passed the bar on the 90% percentile that's impressive
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I cannot say that this is this authors best story.Why you ask? If I say this was his best story someone will say "No way it was A Bridge To Yesterday" another will say it was it was You Promised Me A Tomorrow another will chime in with A Delicate Situation and someone else would say you are all wrong it's A Mourning Storm in every example one can make a great case for every story mentioned and they would not be wrong.It's like trying to say what is the best Beatles song you can't do it because there are so many of them same thing here. Having said that this story absolutely belongs in that discussion.The topic of teens being kicked out of their homes because they are gay is not unusual in GA stories but sadly it doesn't get the proper attention in mainstream society and media.People with extreme religious views lead by leaders who are frauds are the culprits in this story.Sadly there are many real life examples.The way this authors tells the story he will have you crying a lot and he might get you angry in places but in the end he will have you smiling....again
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A perfect ending to to a great story. Matt's parents and Hayden parents are just unbelievable you heard the expression two peas in a pod? There should be an expression 4 peas in a rotten pod made just for them.The optimistic side of me was hoping Matt's mom wasn't as bad as his Father but we found about that sadly.Both parents sent there sons to the POS pastor so I guess Hayden's parent also went to the same Sunday services what kind crap did the pastor say in his sermons that had the parents think the way they do?Sadly it's all too true that these kinds of pastors exist. Remember the pastor who used to picket funerals of AIDS victims with signs that say "God Hates Fags" that was this pastor. No surprise Matt knew how to handle the trans kid.Matt was like that even before he was on the streets remember he stood up for Charles and he stayed with Uncle Teddy because Matt had compassion. Like Matt I have no idea why a trans person thinks the way they do but there feelings are valid Matt took his experience with trans people he met and was able to help Charlene. Reader always asks this author for sequels and a story maybe centered around Evan and Hayden one being a athlete and the other being a theater kid could be pretty good but if not a sequel it would be great to see Matt and Trent appear in a different future story where the characters paths cross with them. Thank you for this wonderful story
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Always Regretting Yesterday
weinerdog commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Always Regretting Yesterday
I hate divorces and break-ups but after what Joey revealed about what has been going on in his marriage it may be the right thing to do.After Joey tells Jack about wanting a divorce I wonder if he will say "I know I've been unfair to Noah but I can change"Another thing I can see happening is Puppy having the same type of conversation with Jack and then really being confused. How this for a thought? After Puppy tells Joey what happened with Steven Joey will get Steven a job at Chariots. Why? It will keep Steven busy and more importantly less time with Puppy -
I gotta say Clair isn't very bright when your Bosses son comes into the office and introduces his husband to her well duh his Father knows about it and that comment about it being a sin ...not a smart move
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The only thing the letter could have said to get such a reaction from Stephen would something like"Gather your clothes and go to your Grandpa house" and Stephen took that to mean he was being kicked out.I know this was suppose to be a surprise but geez if I'm correct about how the letter was written they should have given it more thought.That being said it was a awesome gesture
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To me it seems like a no brainer for Greg and Billy to accept Adam's offer they know he's smart and is a honest person some of you may not believe in this kind of thing but I bet Larry is smiling right now where he's at. Part of the reason for this may be because this chapter could have written before Dia de los Muertos,The Day of the Dead but when JJ/Adam mentioned that he may never know his birth name so what do we take from that?He doesn't believe that dream with Roberto was real?If you recall Roberto called him David but I guess he would sound like a nut if he tried to tell Greg and Billy that.
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Since the same thing happened to Mathias he had to have known what would happen and that Sonny would be into Kyle.He didn't tell Kyle this because then he would not have gone.The window of opportunity to skip town unnoticed might have closed.
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I don't know who's luckier Stephen and Tim or Randy. Considering how well things turned out for Stephen and Tim I think it's a no brainer for Randy to go to the same university especially since Mrs Kenner will have a room ready for him. You didn't mention if Tim's snob older sister attended the wedding
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Hiking Clifty Falls with Cliff
weinerdog commented on Altimexis's story chapter in Hiking Clifty Falls with Cliff
The details Grandpa spoke while talking about Glen I figured you had some personal experience with that I have to shake my head to the approach the medical community took back then I bet Marcy and Jeff had a very interesting conversation with Grandpa after Cliff and Grandpa returned from hiking. Outstanding story -
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I never heard how much is involved in taking the bar exam 6 hours before getting some water?Even a bad lawyer has to be pretty smart to pass that. I would worry about Stephen reaction when Tim speaks of naming their kid Donald but Stephen also said something about seeing Donnie in a dream so I guess it will be all good.
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Getting married same day as graduation wow Stephen doesn't mess around.Never using the word Dad or Mom I bet the mother was responsible for that as if saying it that way was beneath them. It's very touching that Tim never forgets about Donnie
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Return to the Land of Lincoln
weinerdog commented on Altimexis's story chapter in Return to the Land of Lincoln
It was so sad to hear what happened to Larry with his condition he was susceptible to the virus I bet he got it from some idiot who didn't wear a mask and didn't practice social distancing.But glad to see Greg hanging in there and that he found someone. This is not such a wild prediction but I see a threesome happening.I do have another gut feeling with Greg scrambling to keep the business afloat I see J.J. offering to help in some way before he leaves maybe he can be a silent partner in the store or something like that. -
Chapter 25 - Reality's Burden
weinerdog commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 25 - Reality's Burden
What a gruesome site watching bodies put in a bonfire and burn.Like Jake said it could your parents best buddy etc. and its not like these people did anything to deserve that fate -
Then she should get along really well with Tim's older sister.Maybe they already know each other .
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Conventional wisdom says usually it's the mother who knows first but not in this case could it be she did not want to know?
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That family would have fit nicely in Sodom and Gomorrah.I think this f-ed up family might be why Neil so into his music. I know this is set in another time but I still felt a little twinge when I heard Prince mentioned
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So Puppy is going to get another bottle? Steven and Puppy getting drunk together well doesn't take much of an imagination to see where this is going. While I don't want Puppy with Hunter I do feel bad for Hunter with his shitty upbringing. Do you see a chapter where Steven interacts with Joey and Jack? Possibilities are endless BTW that conversation with Mum funny stuff
