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Neil's band actually playing at the party.I have a bad felling something is going to happen it won't be Neil's fault but somebody associated with him. Hope I'm wrong

Alan did mention Jake going to a foreign country now did mean The U.S. or Egypt? And I hope Trevor will have the good sense not to mention that as I'm sure there is going to be conversation between Trevor and Jakes folks and please don't let Colin er...Mike? know that I can hardly wait to hear the load of BS he is going to say.Does Colin/Mike know about Alan not being Jake's Dad? So glad Cody is going to see Luke and Luke's parents that was awfully cool of them to help in the travel expenses Luke must have shown a lot of signs how much he missed Cody for them to do that. Jake comparing what his parents did to Harold Shipman? A serial killer? Wow that was a bit over the top but not any more so then Jakes parents phony police scheme. I will say one thing I would also be very worried about Jake and his neglectful way he approaches checking his sugars

How many writers have their characters tell them about their progress?

Interesting.Since some things doesn't fit in Howard's mind is it possible they found something that will change what they once thought about the history of Alexander and Ptolemy? Or maybe add something new to it

ALL of this is just mind blowing Colin has to be the biggest a-hole.And you know something Jake has never been able to keep a secret any reason to think that will change now?And what if Alan sees the picture? And this question is aimed at @James Matthews WHY does your writing keep F-ing over Cody? What has he ever done to you????

If @chris191070 is right about the son It could make for an interesting day.It may be better for them if the kid is there no alarm then if the kid despises the parents he may even help them(Kidding on that part)

I understand Shaun's grief and the fact that his dad ignored J.J.'s safety recommendations and J.J.was found innocent of any wrong doing doesn't matter to Shaun and he's lashing out.Optimistically with time Shaun will understand and come to terms with things and maybe one day clear the air with J.J..Pessimistically Shaun might remain bitter and judging by the title of this story J.J. may one day be more high profile and if Shaun's still bitter and angry he might for some money make allegations public and that will mean J.J. past may come to light.What happens then? I hope it doesn't play out like that but it has to be considered.I'm not as smart as J.J. but I hope he is considering that possibility also.

I figured something having to do with the CIA would prevent Jake from leaving with Ethen but the details of it I had no clue. A question comes up was Callum really physically abused? Or was that a cover story.I don't think Ethen would allow that and would ask for Colin to stop it.Also Colin was using Ethen as an informant and he was under age that has to be illegal unless the age we were told isn't his real age.Regardless Colin took advantage of a venerable Ethen and that's chicken s---. Now the meeting with Trevor oh my what's going to be the fallout from that?

Does that mean you came up with something to add? Wow as if there isn't already enough can't wait

That picture of his Mother and Colin WTF? Does it mean they had an affair? When? The picture said "summer 2004" but that doesn't mean didn't they knew each other years before.Why was this sent to Jake?The possible explanations I can't wrap my mind around so I won't even guess I'll probably be wrong but I bet some others readers are thinking the same things and some of them are doozies. The e-mail Ethen got sends a red flag to me.He told Jake it was from" A guy he knew in the States" how well does he know this guy really?This person might know Colin and this e-mail might be a ploy to draw Ethen out . This is more evidence to Jake that they will always be looking over their shoulders.I would stay if I were Jake besides Cody still does it for him that's not the worst thing in the world.

Funny trying to remember Lewis earlier appearance in the story yeah he and James never saw each other although they crossed the same paths.I'm surprised Casper never mentioned him to James.When Lewis finds Charlie(I say when because if he doesn't find him the story stops here LOL) what is he exactly suppose to do then?

They think it was the front of the temple what if it is the back? Ignore me.But it will be interesting to see how they identify what kind of temple it was anyhow different certain peopled build Thiet temples

I really don't know what to say about this without giving too much away I'm doing this review so it will have 5 stars and might get some attention from some readers.The tags tell you a lot about this story I'll only add that there are a lot of twist and turns and suspense to go along with a good old fashion love story between two gay teens and the tribulations that brings along with the supernatural elements. As if not to be obvious please read season one first.

So much to absorb.Forgive me if I'm asking the obvious I'm slow Alex"s Dad and that big cat/human were after Owen because he and Alex got together I guess.What I don't remember is back in the first season did we see the cat before or after Owen and Alex got together? I guess the cat would have been around anyway because of Ryan's family. A lot of interesting questions to be answered .I guess Ryan and his sisters were e born foxes and transformed into humans.So maybe which way did it happen with Alex's Dad and does Alex brother have the same condition?We know damn well Owen isn't just going to accept what Alex said and move on I imagine he's going to have a confrontation with Alex and maybe Ryan also and he's sure to find out the secret I'm guessing.Season 3 can't come soon enough

Jake's mother sure gave him a lot to think about it will be interesting to see if changes his feeling toward this situation.I know Jake is young but what his mother said he should have been able to realize himself.I wonder if it's significant that Kit's name got brought up

That last sentence has really bummed me out I can think of only two things one is something happened and Shaun had to leave town with his Dad that would be bad but Shaun is still around if it's the other thing which I won't say but all the readers know what I'm referring to OMG that would suck

For a very brief moment while reading this chapter I had this thought some of you might remember in Ron's previous story there was a Stephanie in that one also when the Stephanie in this story said “I want to thank you, Matt. I have a gay brother who means the world to me." I thought OMG is this Jack's older sister?But then she said he was 14 and Jack was 16 so it's not her would have been cool though.Her statement explains why she wants to do the story it's for all the right reasons. I'm glad Evan is getting a nice family to live with I mentioned in a previous chapter about what may happen to Hayden and it got brought up again so it looks like this will be an issue . I hope he ends up in a place where he can stay in touch with Evan as they were getting close So Trent asked Matt out to dinner is this two buds hanging out or a date? Seeing that Trent asked after Matt got tested I'm thinking date when it comes to dating Matt is still that 16 year old boy so I hope Trent is careful. Stephanie said earlier “After what I heard this morning, I could write a book about you." Or she could write a story on GA about him ..Oh wait Ronyx is already doing that LOL

Jake is sooooooooo!!! mixed up right now.Remember when Ethen forgave Jake back in Neveda? Would he this time?There a really old song called 'Torn Between Two Lovers" and there's a lyric in it "feeling like a fool" that's Jake right now. But even discounting all that say If the Cody issue didn't exist this is still being reckless get some more facts first. Will being with Ethen mean being on the run 24/7?Depending on how serious Ethen's situation might be it might even mean death if things go wrong

This reads like a statement of some kind.I can think of only a few things either a newspaper story or somebody writing a book or a police statement.The one thing we know more then ever is Javier is bad news

Well Ethen is going to be in the UK for 3 months a lot of things can happen and change in 3 months.I'm pretty sure Colin can figure out where Ethen went and I'm sure somebody will be coming.I'm wondering how complicated would it be for Colin to go there since he's not even supposed to exist and maybe because of his assignment he may not be able to.If Ethen just stayed holed up at the hostel could they track him down? I also imagine Jake being followed everywhere he goes.Perhaps Alan has some ideas on how Ethen can avoid being found. As far as the Jake/Ethen/Cody situation goes I mentioned this before Jake loves Cody more like a best friend while Ethen has Jake's heart.Even if it ends up Ethen going back to the U.S. Cody will know he'll always be number two would anybody want to stay around in those circumstances?The name of the story is Everything You Were now is the title referring to Jake and Cody's relationship or Jake and Ethen's?

It sounds like whatever was Alan's part in this he was never told any details just that it's top secret and Alan accepted it and went Aye,Aye. What if what happened to Ethen isn't a CIA thing at all ,what if it's all Colin's doing and he pretended like it was a CIA plan? After Ethen cleaned out the accounts I think the CIA would know immediately and most likely have intercepted Ethen at the airport but if it's just Colin it might take him a little bit longer to realize what happened.Colin doesn't exist officially now that may be because once Ethen took off from home they were afraid Colin's cover would be blown. As far as Alan knows he's taking a huge risk but he must believe he's taking a bigger risk by doing nothing the deleted files has him spooked. Alan can't really have a plan in his head yet but he does have a skill set where he might be able to come up with something but what?

I hope you're right but it would be a way where Salvatore is out of Kyle's life.

There is still a lot to figure out about Colin was he putting on an act all this time?Maybe something happened to his mind after his wife,Ethen's mother died.He had a file on Luke's family. Why? Well Luke did have a crush on Ethen perhaps it really is about Ethen being gay Colin also might have been upset at the way Ethen was living his life sleeping around like he was. I still don't how Jake dad fits into this I guess we'll find out next chapter. After all this though I can't see how Ethen can stay around without things ending badly.

Awesome story it's late where I am I'll try to write a review tomorrow unless some other reader writes a great one before I get to it which will probably happen. I learned something I never heard of a pumise before.

Stay away from all parties etc. until after Districts. Cindy was really crossing a line I suspect we might see Henry getting more involved in this