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This is difficult to read about but it is reality I almost put a tear icon as a chapter reaction.The day Belle passes(hopefully not soon) Having Felica around would be like having a piece of Belle still around.I hope Belle fights for a long long time but I get the feeling arrangement will be made for Hunter and Dale or maybe Vicky to get her kids
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Chapter 1 - Thanksgiving
weinerdog commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Thanksgiving
Perfect subject matter for Thanksgiving.I get Tristan grief but if you see said loved ones in ghost form like that then they are really still around just not the same way I would love to speak to my mom in ghost form(I don't worry about people thinking I'm nuts I already am) I hope Jamie condition is temporary he didn't seem to know yet how will he find out?When he tries to take a leak?🤔 -
I'm very happy to see this uh is there a chapter yet? I don't see it
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How clueless is she?She signed a pre-nup even if her husband's death was unexpected and he died too young she could have planned for when this happened.I'm sure you know of some similar case like this and we will find out what the loophole is my guess is it will be the legality of the prenup.If Tim does find something I hope he tells her I did this for Mom,Dad Aunt Clara and Randy NOT for you
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The part about talking to a patient who is comatose is true I was told to do with a close relative she claimed bits and pieces sounded familiar🤔 Well this was a rather appropriate ending to a story that had it's share of unusual occurrences.So Jake wants to hear more?If any of you readers were Ben would you bring the intimate stuff up? That could be a basis for another story Well done😄
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I loved how he called Camilla his sister and how he thinks of the Gonzalez's as his family. You're absolutely right about how filling authentic Chicago deep dish pizza is the first time I had it I was with two friends we heard eight slices and wondered if it would be enough we only finished a little over half of it we were all chow hounds.We don't have Giordano's where I live now there is something new for my bucket list. The author probably ticked off Chicago Cubs fans when he didn't mention Wrigley Field I know J.J. isn't a sports fan but the place is legendary
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That was beautiful. Dogs before dawn?Never heard that phrase before but it fits.
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If Ana Marie makes any kind of issue with Aunt Clara and Randy implying her need should come before theirs I would say OUT!!! DO NOT PASS GO DO NOT COLLECT $200.00 JUST GO AND HAVE A NICE LIFE.
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Not only that her s--t doesn't stink
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Out of all the things I didn't see this book being told from Ian's POV. Confession time cutting a slit into the sheet was something I might have done.I would not have recored anybody with my phone without them knowing though.Speaking of Ian said he never seen a real life naked boy body he doesn't count recording Owen and Alex as that? It's way, way too early to take a guess but I will do so anyway Ian's missing dad could that be the one who attacked Owen in the last book?
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Ana Marie was everything as advertised too bad.She needs a serious reality check.“It’s hardly enough to cover my staff.”🙄Oh my that would be slumming it.
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Great ending of the chapter I didn't see it coming.On one hand it's a perfect idea but on the other hand who will they get to run the farm? Maybe Randy eventually if he wants to do that but who in the mean time?I don't think Tim would quit being a lawyer
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I didn't get the notification for this chapter that's been happening occasionally with other stories I read. West instincts might be right.It sounds like this Erick Manzanares is taking the rap for the vandalism.And pretty interesting timing was the conversation the four had overheard?
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Oh boy another chapter where my head hurts I didn't know so much was involved in auto racing.J.J has come a long way from not being able to park Rob's car to driving an Indy car on the track. That Pizza and gourmet cookies he described I got a coronary just imagining it
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When you mentioned the chef's flaming pan I thought to myself "Oh no Kyle or Mathias is not going to do what I think they are going to do? Yep they sure did LOL. Waiting around for fifteen minutes for the train I think would have given Salvatore enough time to get there I have to think he considered that's where they were going to go especially since they had bags with them. Kyle and Mathias may want to consider the possibility of Salvatore and his thugs waiting for them at a stop.Is there a way they can get off the train before it reaches a stop?Other then jump which would not be smart.
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Will we see the aforementioned sister? If we do it's hard not to see some inappropriate incident happening. Just like you get a second opinion from a doctor that is what Stephen Dad did with Tim.If his lawyer has a hidden motivation Tim would find it.
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I guess that was Tim's dad that asked Stephen to build him a system he's going to be one busy guy. Does Randy want to do the same kind of thing?I ask that because if Stephen is going to inherit two businesses he'll need as many trusted allies as he can get
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So what were you saying?Did Randy find out the same thing that Tim found out about the Goat?
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From Beale Street to Meridian Street
weinerdog commented on Altimexis's story chapter in From Beale Street to Meridian Street
J.J. is sure making the most out of his vacation but there were two spots where he was close to that he seemingly missed .He said he was in Missouri (I had no idea the strongest earthquake in the U.S. happened there) but didn't go to Branson.He was in Cincinnati so that means he was somewhat close to Cleveland my God Rock and Roll Hall of Fame maybe in the next chapter -
Hey if I'm not mistaken I think he's a Brit cut him some slack😄 I know I would get the geography of GB wrong
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I wonder if the two receptionists at Gramps and ar Stephen Sr place of work are related.At the lunch Stephen mentioned the run-in but didn't say the name of the employee I wonder if Gramps is going to try to find out. Tim passed the bar on the 90% percentile that's impressive
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I cannot say that this is this authors best story.Why you ask? If I say this was his best story someone will say "No way it was A Bridge To Yesterday" another will say it was it was You Promised Me A Tomorrow another will chime in with A Delicate Situation and someone else would say you are all wrong it's A Mourning Storm in every example one can make a great case for every story mentioned and they would not be wrong.It's like trying to say what is the best Beatles song you can't do it because there are so many of them same thing here. Having said that this story absolutely belongs in that discussion.The topic of teens being kicked out of their homes because they are gay is not unusual in GA stories but sadly it doesn't get the proper attention in mainstream society and media.People with extreme religious views lead by leaders who are frauds are the culprits in this story.Sadly there are many real life examples.The way this authors tells the story he will have you crying a lot and he might get you angry in places but in the end he will have you smiling....again
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A perfect ending to to a great story. Matt's parents and Hayden parents are just unbelievable you heard the expression two peas in a pod? There should be an expression 4 peas in a rotten pod made just for them.The optimistic side of me was hoping Matt's mom wasn't as bad as his Father but we found about that sadly.Both parents sent there sons to the POS pastor so I guess Hayden's parent also went to the same Sunday services what kind crap did the pastor say in his sermons that had the parents think the way they do?Sadly it's all too true that these kinds of pastors exist. Remember the pastor who used to picket funerals of AIDS victims with signs that say "God Hates Fags" that was this pastor. No surprise Matt knew how to handle the trans kid.Matt was like that even before he was on the streets remember he stood up for Charles and he stayed with Uncle Teddy because Matt had compassion. Like Matt I have no idea why a trans person thinks the way they do but there feelings are valid Matt took his experience with trans people he met and was able to help Charlene. Reader always asks this author for sequels and a story maybe centered around Evan and Hayden one being a athlete and the other being a theater kid could be pretty good but if not a sequel it would be great to see Matt and Trent appear in a different future story where the characters paths cross with them. Thank you for this wonderful story
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Always Regretting Yesterday
weinerdog commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Always Regretting Yesterday
I hate divorces and break-ups but after what Joey revealed about what has been going on in his marriage it may be the right thing to do.After Joey tells Jack about wanting a divorce I wonder if he will say "I know I've been unfair to Noah but I can change"Another thing I can see happening is Puppy having the same type of conversation with Jack and then really being confused. How this for a thought? After Puppy tells Joey what happened with Steven Joey will get Steven a job at Chariots. Why? It will keep Steven busy and more importantly less time with Puppy
