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You know all the soaps we watched and in some cases still watch. on CBS? @AquariusGuy should have been writing for one of them.

I was almost going to be a smart aleck last chapter and mentioned that Adam was going to find some place to eat while at the hospital.Sure enough the only thing I got wrong was I thought he was going to get Pastrami.

It will be interesting to see what three did to get in the situation they are in. There were some clues all of them sounded bad.You also have to wonder why Coach Rogers and Mrs Mander have a double standard.

Please forgive me if I have this wrong but the story is set in the sixties?At the very least this was before the tech we have today like smartphones etc.Those computerized games you mentioned were around in the seventies as we know.These recordings took more sophistication back then and it wasn't as common knowledge with kids then as it is today.Also the equipment needed wasn't as cheap then.I say all this because no way Derrin is doing this without Jackson's knowledge.The question is why Jackson is sharing videos with Derrin. Is there some blackmail or something? The obvious thing to do is to tell Ethan's dad about this.I'm thinking and hoping he has a contact that can maybe they can do a sting operation of catching the boys watching the film.After that you ask them how did you get this film? How was it recorded? etc. Okay I'll stop now I'm not writing the story LOL

There was so much good in this chapter done by so many people despite all that the one thing I can't stop thinking about is Ann's parents that's their grandson who has no fault in any of this and they are letting him be malnourished?That is evil.Billy bless his heart is stepping up above and beyond

When Adam started at the Academy there was no way he could see everything turning out like this.

My first thought exactly maybe their parents are GA fans so why not? But then they would see these Charlie Boone stories and know everything

I guess Hans and his team have to think about how to increase security at the lake especially since there were over a 100 boys there. I'm curious to see what Adam does with Jer and Abe and their Mom

One small inane question when Max said to group"There will be more from all of you coming" did that include Horace also? Thank you Geron for another awesome Charlie Boone adventure.Happy 4th everybody

Well silk is pretty shiny so it wouldn't be dull.OH! I see what you mean

I am stunned that as of 45 minutes ago as I'm writing this there was no review of this story. I'm guessing it because this a premium readers story.I concur with @DaveinLA review on all counts.The only thing I would add is Mr. James also uses humor very well. I have heard many many readers talk about Circumnavigation also well it's 159 chapters so I guess I better get started

I have a question that might make me sound clueless(so what else is new)Are the Moths aware of this defense system that has to be activated I have heard them say nothing about that like they are oblivious to it's existence.If they knew about it surely they would consider that's what their opponents are here to do.

It went from "I may not be at the cabin this weekend" to 110 kids plus the chefs at the lake.There is a saying God laughs when we make plans.

Lawrence and the other 5 who will be attending the college I guess they have their priorities .Beer. Adam better be prepared for when spring break comes

The illusion bought Charlie and company some time.But the last words of this chapter "Here is where our endgame will play out. Here is where we will know if we are to win...or retreat, and wait for another day." You're already writing the sequel aren't you

That college is building up very fast. This is not that important to the story but what laws and requirements did Adam have to meet to open a new college?It's obvious that Adam is qualified but I'm curious what he had to do. I love the way the kids are treating Anton.

And now comes the part where The Moth looks like it has the upper hand and Charlie and his friends are doomed.The fun is in the details

The thoughts Trey had in the previous chapters it seems like Dallas had the very same thoughts it's very mutual so everything should be great.We know it doesn't work like that especially in GA stories I guess one obstacle could be Trey's willingness to be open about the relationship I think that is something he must do I say that like it's simple but we know it's not.The soccer team seems to be OK with Dallas being gay will their attitude be different if there is a gay couple on the team?

I live close to the Mexican border and I'll tell far more Mexican citizen's are bi-lingual and speak English thenthere are American who can speak Spanish. Gerry is showing a lot of character it sounds like he's willing to give Gunther the son of the stepmother who hated her a chance many kids might be reluctant to do so

I get the feeling that the two items purchased in the first chapter the cloak and the time traveling globe are going to be put to use here. So the two Madracorns didn't understand the insurance reference? I bet if they visited Earth after about twenty minutes they'll say "We're outta here let's go"

"But that don't mean no time at all passes here. It's just so slow it can hardly be counted." I think I had some classes in school under those conditions

Alaric wasn't just greedy he was a dumb greedy.He could have raised the rent a modest amount and pointed to cost of maintinence etc. making his not raising the rent for ten years argument more valid even if he was lying it would have been hard too disprove.But he opened his big mouth saying he found good fortune. When Adam is at the academy who runs the country?It's a tall order to be hands on in both places

You must live in this country because what you described sounds like Americana to me.Having a student from the school Hunter is going to teach at living across the street will come into play I'm guessing

I don't remember reading about the elves " no bulge" policy.That brings up a question what does a well endowed elf do? That vendor that kept going "Huff,Huff' sounds a lot like vendors I've seen here on Earth some things are universal. Great first chapter

The way I think Jackson will be caught is if when he tries to lie about not having a teacher as a witness the lie will be executed so bad that it can be disproven.He would have to get another teacher to lie for him well the more lies you tell the better the chance you slip up.The thing about the truth is it's the only story you have to remember. This is a aside when I was in middle and high school when a bully like Parnell did his bullying no teacher ever sees it but when someone stands up for himself and a fight starts THEN some teacher arrives.I'm sorry that happened to often for it to be a coincidence