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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 11

    Wow from a story that was possibly going on hold to 3 chapters in 3 days.Hunter might end up being the baddest ass yet.
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    Hunt: 8.9

    So while all this is going down where the heck is Finch?
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    Chapter 8

    The guys from Wildwood tell West and the others to watch their backs doesn't seem like a good strategy and threatening to take the captaincy away from West makes no sense with them being new.It sounds they are being directed what to do by an older outside source
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    Chapter 57

    So none of the staff knew that were being charged for their rooms?That means it wasn't itemized on the paycheck. That certainly violates something another thing Arlene and the board had to hide.And another thing the trustees missed because they never asked for an accounting.
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    Chapter 16

    Two smart guys acting like idiots.More so Davey though he using Julie without her knowing what's going on and as far as his mother goes it will still be a shit storm if she finds out after he graduates high school only with the extra bonus of pretending to be something he's not.But the one thing he should be able to understand is he got so upset when he saw Brian with Todd how the hell does he think Brians feels about seeing him being with Julie .Its not that complicated As for Brian for a person with all that life experience he still acted like a....teenager
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    Hunt: 8.8

    What @centexhairysub got me thinking did the higher ups make the decision to let James fend for himself and if he dies he dies?Finch had to be close enough by to come and assist.If I'm the Toranga's I would be saying we don't trust you guys
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    Chapter 55

    Wow every director took kickbacks since most of the students are sons of wealthy and in some cases well known people you would think this would make it in the media
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    Chapter 15

    If you remember Davey was the one that specifically remembered her number in the previous story in this timeline they haven't met.Brian might remember her but wouldn't know her number I don't think.
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    Chapter 10

    Based on your last chapter comments it sounds like a lightbulb went on and you though of this chapter pretty impressive. I guess people like Emma could do some pretty supernatural things I assume you worked out the details on how she almost framed TJ .Did she "create " some of TJ's DNA to put at the scene among other things?
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    Sweetest gift

    @kbois She'll get it in at 4:59PM just to show you
  11. What I worry about is Kayden being alone at the party.I have too much of a over active imagination I wonder if its a scheme to get Trent away from Kayden I hope I'm so wrong.
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    Chapter 54

    Love how things are progressing.They have 5000 coins? These are appetites of teenagers we are talking about you would have needed that many just for me.I exaggerate(but only a little)
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    Chapter 15

    Well I guess something might hit the fan in the next chapter.I remember Sandy being a little homophobic in previous lifelines but not this extreme.And like I mentioned before how will Jenny be?Before this happened all the other characters deserved kudos for how they acted toward Sean when he returned. This Sean is a little messed up thinking he deserves the bad stuff that happened to him is this the same guy that later in the original timeline was smart enough to help that scientist with the time machine? Unless Sandy pulls her head out Davey may be a permanent resident in The Breckenridge house.We didn't get to know Aunt Bev as well in the other do-overs but in this one she's awesome.
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    Hunt: 8.7

    This spirit isn't exactly evil it just wants to find it's way home.You referred to it as a Guardian that implies that it was a leader of some kind. Is there a way to communicate with it.Casper can find out what its emotions are but does anybody have a communication power?
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    Chapter 9

    How ever long it takes for you to get inspiration we will be here no worries. I know it's been awhile since the last chapter but is this the first we heard of the murder?I forgot Just what every teen boy like Hunter wants penises on their phone 🙄 come to think of it I wish I had friends like that in highschool
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    Chapter 53

    The Trustees still don't communicate adequately.Adam had to hear from the architect about being the college president.Maybe some of the Trustees don't because he didn't have a brandy with them.It will definitely be a challenge but Adam is up to it Hmmm Onion Pie.Never had it but it sounds great.
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    Chapter 52

    It sounds like some of the trustees were ready to grill Adam on what's been going on only to find out it was them who didn't do their due diligence to begin with and previous staff got away with a lot of stuff.
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    Chapter 14

    I'm sure there's a precedent for what Davey's Dad was trying to do but the California lottery was still fairly new in 86.While what the dad was trying to do was dead wrong Sandy should help out some of that side of the family's issues after all they are relatives to her children and in some cases they have a good relationship like Aunt Bev.It will be interesting how sandy and her materialistic ways will react.This Davey is still pretty smart and with Brian to influence him with his experience I think they will do OK. This Sampson that was mentioned I wonder if he's going to get into this story.This comment I was going to make last chapter but I forgot Jenny is a little different in this timeline and is a molestation victim.Is it possible she won't be supportive of Davey when she learns he is gay
  19. It is still an issue today if somebody isn't careful.I'm worried that among the people if it's not in the media they don't pay attention to it out of sight ,out of mind.I worry that a new strain will come.
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    Hunt: 8.6

    I never thought I would see the words spazzed out Pokemon in a story. Why do I think Cody is somehow going to get in the middle of things again
  21. I'm not surprised about law school in Massachusetts I read somewhere that the state has the most universities per square mile in it and most of them prestigious like Harvard and MIT. Believe it or not I agree about David and Noah I loved that story. While I also loved this story I was very,very bummed about Hayden. I know _ "stuff" happens .Thank you for this great series.
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    Chapter 51

    My first thought was that the meeting was ominous but why should it be?Unless there's a unfounded allegation. Why would have a door to a room plastered over.You can always use a room that makes no sense.
  23. I might be mistaken but I think this is the author's first story it is the first to appear on GA.This is an enjoyable read with characters you grow to like and like most stories one character you despise and one you outright hate even with that character you have a little sympathy toward the character .I won't tell you why you have to read the story for that.The writing got progressively better with each chapter and he plans to write with these characters again so it's a good bet the next one should be better.
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    Epilogue

    I guess your saving the details for the future stories .It would be interesting on how they made the decision on having kids etc.Looking forward to it Thank you.
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    Chapter 50

    Did the Doctor inadvertently tell Adam how Marie feels about things?
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