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Everything posted by weinerdog
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Do all the boys have a running program at the academy as part of their routine?Otherwise I'm surprised Adam would get them up to run if they weren't daily runners.
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Pretty cool that West and Casper are heroes to the little kids.I'm guessing by tone of chapter that Neil's older brother being Teresa fiance is not a good thing.
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Is Tristan talking about a literal nightmare the kind you get when you sleep or is something really happening?As far as Tristan wanting privacy as long as Hunter can teleport everywhere is the there any place he can be alone? I was on the GA site when the notification pop up and Wesley was finished 8 minutes before I was.You should give us a test after the next chapter to see if Wesley is actually reading these LOL
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Book Two: Winter. Prologue.
weinerdog commented on Rhythminthemind's story chapter in Book Two: Winter. Prologue.
Very interesting chapter.It makes me wonder if Charlie is in his right mind.Did the Whale not unlike Father or any other cult leader brainwash Charlie?Will there be a confrontation does Peter have a another way of finding out that Charlie returned other than going there? It's also interesting to note Jackie could not find hide nor hair of Charlie but Charlie knew she was there. -
What would Scotty be now a freshman or 10th grader?If someone is watching him now I would say a scholarship is in his future unless he gets injured.I chuckled at the Susanna being a Marie clone.
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Two Truths and a Liar
weinerdog commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Two Truths and a Liar
I'm grasping at straws here.My first thought is G is manipulating the situation to cover his own ass.Maybe the dream Tyler had was a hypnotic suggestion.IF Tyler really is guilty of something then did the murder of his family really happen?My money is still on G being the bad guy here -
I totally get what you're saying I have recommended this story to a number of people directly and the one thing I said to all of them is the first eight chapters or so are really rough.I am motivated to reply to your comment to tell you to stay with the story you won't regret it.I can't tell you much without giving it away but what you said does get dealt with hang in there like Stephan is doing.
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I can't wait to see where they place the fake ring will they have a security cam to record it? Why do I think that the person who tries to steal it is going to be somebody that is hired by the stepmother
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In all honesty Wesley commenting first sets the tone of how the comment go here.Now whether that's a good thing or a bad thing🤔........
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Man I had a dilemma You and Dabeagel posted a new chapter at the same time I had to flip a coin.I had no idea Jeff and Kevin could be so evil.They better put Jackson in a room protected by a force field if he can't have any stress. So they wiped Julian's memory? I borrowed $100 from him I was going to pay him back but don't want to take a chance in messing up his recovery
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In addition to Sturgis there are corrupt Judges that are in on this.There was a Law and Order SVU episode that dealt with this very topic. I wonder if Farmer will use the kids he's helped to communicate with Phillip about taking his place? I do have one question I may be reading too much into this I'm not sure how the Dirty Laundry video is relevant.That was a song about sleazy media and I hope that's not a clue having to do with Stacy Scott.
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I don't think I could ever have a safe like that I've lost my share of keys in my lifetime.Herb said lose the key and you lose everything?Surely there is something they can do if that does happen anybody could lose a key.I can also see myself messing up the two second limit.
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Is Gerry's sleeping problem related to his Father dying?
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If Mr Jackson tries to get back at Ethan and Wayne with some trumped up charge that would be a huge mistake because unlike with Wayne Ethan's Dad will raise some hell with the School Board
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So the plans called for 100 dorms which equals 200 students and they had 60 students more evidence how incompetent the previous administration was.With the type of families the students have you would have thought it would be filled.That tells me some word of mouth of the school was negative.I would be curious to find out how many students in a given year didn't return.
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It's cool that all the kids are calling Adam Dad
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The way this ended it sounds like the author was leaving the door open for yet another Do Over but we know that is not going to happen.I could have done without hearing what Brian had to go through but in the end they are back together all six of them with their life experiences and together with their soul mates at the age of 12 or 13 so that part is good. A good read.Going to miss commenting on this series
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Well I'm caught up wow it was exhausting and exhilarating to read all this now I have to wait like all the rest of the readers. Why does Don think he has all the answers?This meddling you say he's going to do might also tick off Stephanie and her parents
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Chapter 143 Unfinished Business
weinerdog commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 143 Unfinished Business
Connor's Mom was more classy then anyone had a right to expect -
Chapter 138 Papering Over the Cracks
weinerdog commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 138 Papering Over the Cracks
Like Nimiraj said Will Connor be asking for a loan?Don would have to get involved.I think what I'm about to write is ridiculous but here goes maybe Don got the bank to cancel the funding you can fill in the rest after that I assume .I don't blame anybody if you think that's nutty but I seen stranger plot lines -
Chapter 133 One-Trick-Pony
weinerdog commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 133 One-Trick-Pony
I would agree with 'Go Team Tom" I now think one and a half to two years isn't that unreasonable the one question I have is have would Tom come here or Robbie go there?One would have to give something up.I would want to remain close to my sibs and Jaime also for that matter -
Chapter 130 Happy Holidays
weinerdog commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 130 Happy Holidays
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Chapter 127 When the Cat's Away
weinerdog commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 127 When the Cat's Away
A lot of guesses but knowing you it's none of the ones that have been mentioned. What I want to talk about instead I'm glad Robbie in going back to Daniel's room the only downside is Daniel may now have a GF and Robbie may hook up with Connor so they have to work out a schedule for some alone time.The main reason I'm glad he's back is Daniel said he missed him being there the adoption was a good thing because of the sibs.This is my pervey mind talking here but also Daniel is also good eye candy for Robbie I know it's his brother but you're only human. I think this is a less then 50/50 chance but it is in the back of my mind Daniel seems to be at Doug's house quite a bit Hmm. -
They are going to need to beef up security there could be some bad guys from Gerry's country who might have people check out the Academy they will see Hans there and put 2+2 together not not to get dramatic but an attempt on Gerry's life is not out of the question.Could Adam use some of the country's budget only for the security of the future King that would be ethical right?
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The combination of everything of everything you mentioned would be great I trust your judgement.If I had to choose one then it would be -Alex x Owen relationship progress but all the other stuff you mentioned should be there also.This is just me the just add more sex part is the least important to me but if it's done well like you have in the past for example then that's cool also
