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Everything posted by weinerdog
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If you're late for work tell your boss you were reading the new chapter of this story and show it to him.That might work
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Excellent chapter. I think after hearing about Gunter and Anna the obvious thing to do is to sent some teachers who attended Adam's seminars and have them run the schools in their country.Anton had to be in a lot of pain what kind of country(before Adam got there) can do nothing?
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I thought it there was going to be about four people to run with him seeing how these countries are about security but Hans is more than enough.No surprise none of the council or ministers joined him.I't also no surprise how big of man Adam is wanting to make peace with the stepmother's family.I hope the family is receptive and she was a bad apple. Not my place to tell you how to write a chapter but I would love to see a chapter where Billy visits the country with a gold medal around his neck
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We find out more about Matt's family that they're estranged from them more signs of extremism every body in the family is evil except them. I have to wonder if tha Pastor will let Matt and James go to school when it was just James he was ostracized and Nobody talked to him so no one knows what is going on. With Matt it may be different at school Matt might say something to Ricky or somebody so I suspect the Pastor will keep them locked up.Why would the Pastor room two gay teens together?That would tempt both of them for something to happen between them .It would seem to make no sense unless the Pastor wants something to happen to justify what he may do. Could be a trap
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The Wisdom of Scotty Cross
weinerdog commented on JamesSavik's story chapter in The Wisdom of Scotty Cross
I know by law the police have to inform the mothers about what Tyrone did but it seems like the kids are getting victimized again. -
Wonder how school will be when Deme starts to attend.Will the girls be all over him? Will a few guys? So Stephanie actually hugged Shane and said goodbye?Maybe in the last chapter seeing Shane in just a towel got to her after all
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Great chapter Tristan said Justin is angry does Justin know what Hunter said? So Jack has a Doctorate. I remember in Dancing On A Star he said celebrate when the word he was looking for was celibate.He has certainly come a long way from that point
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Evil stepmothers do seem to be useful for story plot points. If that plan had worked wouldn't she be a overwhelming suspect?She must have been planning to get out of Dodge.
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Is gang the correct term?It sounds more like organized crime.
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I wouldn't be surprised If @CLJobe had that many ideas left for this story.200 chapters would be a record for GA if I'm not mistaken
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Unravelling A Web of Lies
weinerdog commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Unravelling A Web of Lies
What do we know about G background?Is he even qualified to do this stuff seems like he's not. I wonder what memories Tyler was referring to?Based on what the story revealed nothing like that happened .Could Tyler possibly believe something happened but it really didn't -
You have to tell us us what items Marcel made got the most popular reaction.
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That made me think of something.As far as I know there has never been a situation where the person inheriting the throne was in a same sex relationship I think we would have heard of that.So say in the future something like that happens in England do the rules allow for there the be two kings or queens?
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It would not have happened if Ethan didn't forget his book so risky for them to go anywhere in that school alone and that sucks. Jackson conveniently won't believe that Derrin started it. Wayne's Grandmother comment to Ethan about "A happy place tp pitch your tent" sounds like she has them figured out already.
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The very idea of upchucking and seeing worms go out of your mouth Wow!!! I guess as far as the wedding goes I'm sure Adam will ask her but we readers don't know what Marie wants.But the reception maybe could be at the academy.Who's the best man? Bill and perhaps Billy could be in the wedding party
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Scary stuff.I wonder if Dr.McMillian would have missed it.
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Oh man I surely thought when I checked back I would see Wesley's comment before mine.I'm first again OK drinks are on me only you have to come here LOL
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Well that's certainly one way to kill a relationship when someone who knows the future says it isn't going to last.If its me I would do something stupid like 'Oh yeah" and then not break up even if I wanted to so I can say he's wrong.Of course we could be talking about death here😢
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What you wrote could have been in the review section with 5 stars of course. I was just like you when I read it I couldn't put it down or whatever the online equivalent is.I cried and smiled though out the whole Interesting what you shared about your personal life some of those issues was touched on in another @Parker Owens story called Double Concerto.In that story the main character Rick is in his late thirties or early forties and had some of the same issues you have except he didn't get married. It is a 5 star story in its own right. What you expressed about AtoZ was spot on perfect
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Pretty smart idea the Knight and squire system and it will work because they are all good kids.I don't know if you have this planned in the story but these are kids living in close quarters and things can happen how would Adam handle a situation where a couple of kids end up liking each other that way?
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So if I understand this right with 51 new students there are now 111 total now.If they are going to use all the chalets that's 60 boys that is going to be one huge feeding job even if you catch enough fish there are still a lot of sides dishes to prepare.
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Well because of Adam Billy has the option of running for Liechtenstein but one thing I would have been tempted to do when the one trainer said Billy wasn't any good was to challenge their "best" runner to a race.When he wins the medal I would like Adam to tell someone from the media that he could have ran for the U.S. but his coach said "he wasn't any good". I might have this wrong bit two times you mentioned a Bobby was that suppose to be Scotty?
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I didn't get the notification on the previous that seems to happen occasionally on other stories also.I have a feeling Ethan jumped the gun with his outburst and didn't let the Coach finish his thought.The Coach may have been a ally.Or maybe he's just an a-hole like the rest of the faculty seems to be LOL.But that hasn't been established yet.The coach may have been emphasizing 'You" because he heard Ethan was a swimmer in California.He probably is unaware of Wayne's ability. I'm not writing the story this is just me thinking but one thing I would consider if I were Wayne and Ethan is go to the trials if both of their times are among the best and then the coach announces that they made the team Ethan and Wayne would announce they are not joining the team they just wanted to show that they are good enough
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Define Pompous Ass: Those two prima donna's who left the seminar You think those two were a plant that they had a connection to Arlene and the others?
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I'm thinking maybe once every two weeks or so the academy can have a pizza day with the pizzas supplied by Moma . I'm sure Marcel wouldn't mind the break.Once word got out enrollment would increase even more.
