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Everything posted by weinerdog
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How many does it have to be before you call it a orgy ?
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You're the author so you know what's going to happen on second thought maybe you don't lol.But that's neither here nor there. Ryan did calm down very quick considering.I think of something he said to Jake "I’ve screwed up too. Not like you did, but in my own way".Makes me wonder did something almost happen with his roommate?Maybe they were about to then the coach knocked on the door or something.That would explain why Ryan is being so generous with this.Ryan is a sweetheart this could be just how he is but we should consider the other possiblity
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I'm very easy to confuse but this does help thank you🙂
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I tried to do what you did in your quote but could not figure it out In some ways I'm still computer illiterate.So what I did was go the regular comment box and then dragged your quote over including the word Quote then I used a different text type to distinguish the quote from my comment.I guess it worked in my usual dumb-ass way
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Quote Took a little longer than I'd planned, but there we go! Not sure how many more chapters I've got left. Got a few storylines I'd like to get to, but I think we'll be approaching the end in a few more chapters. Don't know if Ryan will ever be anything more than a friend to Jake after what happened, but I'm glad they made peace. I wasn't willing to write Ryan off in such a sad way, so there we go! And that Danny! On to girlfriend number 4! Take as Many chapters as you need to make it right .Danny and girlfriend #4 I thinks that makes it easier for Jake to wait for Ryan to forgive him but will he?These guys are impossible to figure out "We're like soulmates" blah, blah,blah. somebody get me a shovel
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Hey I got size 13 (really) whatever isn't damaged after you get done I'll finish off
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Chapter 1 - What The Heart Wants
weinerdog commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 1 - What The Heart Wants
Remixed?I guess that means this was posted before.I think I read this before but I read so many stories I can't be 100% sure.If its the same story I'm thinking about the subtle changes are excellent.The thoughts a gay 14yo keeping that secret was very accurate here but that's not surprising knowing this author.The only thing he could have added was riding his bike or walking home a mile out of his normal route home so he can pass by Steven's house.I'm curious how different what happens next is. -
S Same where I live.I have temporary masks.Do you know who sells cloth ones?I don't mean online but In a store?
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A new book is out 'How to say the wrong things at the wrong time" by Jack Woolery & Jimmy Taylor yeesh ! The sad thing was it looked like Jimmy was ready to be cool with Jeff and everything. I said something like this last chapter but Jack's mom said she doesn't trust Tracy and Jeff but trusts the guy who almost had him killed? 😡 I will say it's only been a week since she knew everything so it is still early.If Jack's mom doesn't change she loses her family even Karen base on what she said to Jack
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Gay Fiction rule #2-There has to be at least 2 persons of authority i.e.School Board members ,Law enforcement officers that are corrupt morons
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I binged read the series over the last 1-2 weeks or so including this story so I could have easily missed this I went over this story again and wonder has it been explained how Jonathan happened?If Blu has never been with a women? Please be OK Levi.
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I was thinking of another chapter actually my bad.
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Me and you both.I have have been binge reading the series the series the last two weeks.You're right about a Paternity test of course It will be a positive result for the purposes of this story.Like you I'm looking forward to more.
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How about "This is an awesomely dysfunctional story"?
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Mr Reilly is awesome.He can tick you off but he really made things right at that practice.It is interesting that he said "No amount Of yelling by me will make this work" but that's what he did the night before.Complicated guy but cool. No matter what Jake does somebody is going to be hurt that sucks.One thing I failed to mention last chapter is why did Danny have that stuff in his suitcase?Is there someone else at camp that Danny knows about?Or did he in the back of his mind hope something was going to happen with Jake since they were in the same room? Great chapter
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I now know @droughtquake was joking (thank God) But You're WB still has something in common with @jkwsquirrel WB both of them are dreaded
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So it was YOU who wrote those Dick and Jane books
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I appreciate your point but did it have to happen in a way that Ryan gets hurt?
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That was right after John took off with Yoko.
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Hey 3 kids with 3 different women why pretend? IMO it was a tame comment.
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I suspected it was going there.The only difference is I thought Danny was going to be the instigator.Poor Ryan although he's been pretty perceptive I bet in the back of his mind he thought this could happen. All of these guys seem to need some form of anger management counseling.Including Mr. Reilly
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I was fine with the series.DQ wanted an epilogue at the end of the W.A.R series.I was just pointing out how this story has been telling us how everybody's life has going since that time.
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This review is aimed toward readers like me who only recently joined GA and spent a lot time looking for worthwhile stories to read from GA"s massive selections. Some might come across this and see that has 67 chapters and say to themselves "oh man that's too much to read I can't invest that much time to this" to that I say I could have read 67 more chapters of this it was that good. This story might have the most evil character in all the stories in GA and I realize what I'm saying.But it is more than counteracted by many awesome characters two of which might be the most sweetest characters GA has had.Please read this story you won't regret it.
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Wow a lot of what you wrote would make good material in a GA story but this is real life.There was a couple times in my life that I was close to homeless but literally both times something came up at the 11th hour 59th minute that spared me that.I even put all my belongings in storage in anticipation of being homeless.As a result present day I have two friends living in spare bedrooms with me and one of them can be a pain in the butt.But as long as there's no drug or alcohol problem I put with it because I can't in good conscious put someone out on the street You're a very inspiring example of someone who doesn't give up and people who have a condescending view of the homeless should know stories like yours.If you haven't already read author WolfM story ' Alone in the night" If I tell you what it's about it wold ruin the story but it is very relevant to this
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I think all the newer parks do a variation of that.They do it at Petco Park in San Diego. They like to catch people at random
