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What Tyler was saying to Zeke made total sense as long as Tyler is in that place he can't be of any danger of any info of the mission leaking out so just tell him everything. They scouted two safe houses for Tyler to stay in and the bad guys knew about both.That would suggest there's an insider feeding the bad guys info so maybe Tyler may not be safe where he is either.Zeke said"It's a date" I wonder if it will end up being a real date😉

Forgive me if this should be obvious @Chris L alluded to it in his comment. You haven't said one way or another is this the Vic from the other story?If it is then he's perfect for Scott and Brad to talk to since Vic grew up with a gay couple who were like his Uncles.

Hunter has some great friends it will help a lot.Like Olivia earlier Hunter being unfamiliar with term pansexual is somewhat surprising while it's still a relatively new term it's been around long enough that they should have heard of it. I'm surprised Vicky let Olivia move in after hearing her bigoted attitude apparently she doesn't share @JeffreyLworry about Olivia seeking revenge if she shows any signs of that at least Vicky will be close by I have a stepsister who when she forgets to take her meds changes her behavior is like night and day so I'm willing to reserve comment on Mayson at the moment. I wonder if the school was aware of this.

Wow is all I can say.The fact that Father was stunned that Casper resisted made him for a moment not knowing what to do otherwise surely he could have done some spell to make Casper stay.He knows his full name so that's not good. I don't remember if Casper actually saw Father when he was taken to building by Lewis if he did I would think his guard would be up as soon as he saw him with the goblin

I figured Ronnie would be OK with them.Now lets see for the rest of the team, school and sadly possibly some teachers

Now Casper is with the Family on one hand it's good to be exposed to the healing power other then that not good.I'm guessing he knows Casper is something out of the ordinary but does he know what exactly?If he doesn't maybe Casper could use that to his advantage

You said Jonah turned on him and that could be true but Jonah did two things that contradicted each other.It might be Jonah wanted to stop Dallas and the Faggot line was a cover the story Jonah might tell Dallas is if he goes too far there will be trouble.Jonah may not be able to be an ally publicly yet.I try to be optimistic

Meeting with the grandparents went great.When Nonna said“He’s your family. If they don’t like it, then that’s their problem.” Was she referring to other member's of the family?

I was kidding of course.I'm afraid with me being your editor your readers would really get confused lol.I barely passed my English and writing classes.If you really are serious feel free to message me and tell me what I would have to do.

Gee that's a loaded question are you sure you want us to answer that?

As far as the chapter goes when I read the flashback with Tristan and Damian and you mentioned it later in the chapter but I immediately thought "Yep he's definitely a TJ clone alright".I love the relationship he has with his sister and I suspect he has the same relationship with his brothers(brudders?) Tristan mentioned his dads is that a foreshadowing of their appearance?Did I read this right that Tristan took the stairs and its 190 floors?I guess he can skip the gym today.And it explains from the time TJ said to come down to the time he saw Jackson southing happened BTW Mr. Romero should be made aware of what Tristan can do with someone's junk lol

When I got the notification that you posted the new chapter it said you did it 8 minutes ago @Wesley8890 had already commented what is he getting advanced copies now? He'll do anything to be the first comment huh?

The one thing from Casper's perspective is whoever he is with right now are enemies of the birds so at least at this moment he's in the right place until he finds out more about them .Let's hope they are the good guys or at least the non-evil guys as opposed to the good guys.If these people are a problem in their own right then Lewis would be needed to help the others find Casper but we have to find out what's up first.

I understand why Scott and Brad have to be discreet but it sounds like they can't even be friends out in the open at school what's up with that?

The weekend sounds like it's going to be a blast.Does somebody have good portable recording equipment?That could come in handy when they check out Chuckles house

First and last month's rent?Security deposit?Not that Seamus is worried about Matt taking off but he doesn't need a security deposit even if by some tiny chance there's an issue well Seamus knows where to find him HE WORKS FOR HIM🙄.Matt should figure out that Seamus made this offer because he loves Aidan and that Seamus is into him it's like Matt feels he's not worthy of Seamus when in reality there's a lot to admire about Matt When Seamus talked about $400 rent and his reasoning behind it I was reminded of my situation where I rent rooms to two friends and I could get double maybe even triple of what I charge but it isn't about that for me so I get what Seamus is talking about.Maybe Seamus should have put a condition on the $400 dollar rent that being Matt had to pick up his towels. BTW $850 for a one bedroom I don't know if it was mentioned where they live but in California where I live that would be a super bargain if you can believe that.

I agree with what @drsawzall wrote that James family is in cahoots with the government maybe even part of the government. The timing of these men getting Casper comes shortly after James grandma had her encounter with the birds it was as if she tipped them off about the birds although after what these birds did it's hard for the authorities not to take notice

I see that Scott learned what to say about his Pa's wine from his Dad😄.They have a brick oven? I bet they make great pizza.Can't wait to see how the grandparents are with Brad.

I'm less then 50/50 at predictions so take this with a grain of salt but I think Rita is marrying Willy Kohler.As far as the plans that Walter "just happened to find lying around while faithfully doing his duty" well we figured Rita was a wheeler dealer and the school board men thought with their little head instead of their big head. I imagine they can call a meeting and raise a big stink among other things Irene might be able to accomplish that by herself but it won't be easy I'm afraid. I would have liked to have heard Rick's explanation to Jerry about the hickey if Walter Hadn't called😁

I laughed at @Wesley8890 comment but he's right college students being grounded?How lame.There has to be some way to get the hell away from Mark.Unless something new gets introduced in this story the only way I see this happening is for Trent to get Chase involved so Kayden wouldn't have to be so financially dependent on Mark.I know Trent hates Chase but if it means he could be with Kayden he might try something like that. Hey I'm going to be annoying pain right now.When Trent text Kayden you had it say Can I call you baby? He texted Kayden. I’ve got to tell you something then when Kayden received the text it said Can I call you baby? I’ve got something to tell you. Mark would have taken off 20 points for that LOL

There's talk of meeting the Grandparents they being from an older generation what will the reaction be? So that kissing game Scott and Brad played they kissed until they got back to the lips uh..Does that mean they kissed EVERYTHING?You don't have to answer that LOL.

Cole being 17 and Ike being 14 would get a few comments around school that would happen if it was a boy and a girl. If they were a little younger maybe it's a problem but at this stage I don't know what the big deal is.In a few states if some one over 18 is with someone under 18 if there is less then a 4 year difference in age it's not illegal conversely I remember reading a sex offender registry from another state where the "offender" was 19 and the "victim" 17 now THAT"S ridiculous. You tend to forget although Philip has some fun with some cute boys he really does miss Javier there's a hole that needs to filled .......I mean emotional hole pervs LOL

Well all of this is moving pretty quick. Both set of parents are in on it from the start so that should help things

Good call that was the perfect place to stop.Can't wait to see what follows now.A couple of weeks ago I read a story chapter that was three times as long as this one so don't sweat it.

Casper is going to have to figure out how to do a certain kind of spell and quick.I know he's new at this but is a desperate time.