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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 29

    Smooth move with the girl there Nick. If Rich's dad gets together with Marie then he HAS to move in.Can't lose Marie as a chef.
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    Epilogue

    I guess it depends on interpretation is W.A.R one story or eight different stories?
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    Chapter 28

    How well do you know the campus of OSU?I only ask because maybe you can mention a unique landmark on the campus or something.Like I know the football stadium holdover 100,000 people. The problem the store owner is having is not unusual Has he tried things on his own I don't know why he needs their help.Maybe Its a sophisticated scheme by a employee.
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    Harmony

    I guess since it stops at 2018 he could write a story that doesn't jump a few months at a time and concentrate on just the senior year that way he won't have to deal with the pandemic.If a good idea pops in his fertile brain who knows?
  5. My main purpose for writing this is there is to give another five review here and that just might get readers who haven't read this to the series curious to check this out.You don't have to read the W.A.R series to like this story but I recommend that you do so first.All of you reading this I'm sure have your favorite authors and this author does many of the same things in his stories that other good gay male fiction authors do.What set this author apart is what I think is his unique personality and take on thing.When you read other great stories you could tell someone this author wrote it when in reality another author wrote it and they would believe you.If you read a story by this author and nobody told you who wrote it and they changed the names and places in the story you would still know it this authors story.And that's a good thing.
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    Epilogue

    Thank you for this great story.A lot of growing up on Jake and Danny's part is a relatively short period of time not that it can't happen.There have been a handful of gay fiction stories written with the pandemic as a backdrop and what I read so far it's been limiting on what an author can do with it.I have seen a few good ones.So if we ever see a story from Mon Valley it would be after all this Co-Vid stuff is over.Thank you again Please stay safe.That goes for all the readers here also.
  7. Using the droid awesome.I bet you that very thing you wrote about is going on more then you think it's especially harder for kids not being able to see all their friends.One thing this awful co-vid 19 has done is have people appreciate things like school
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    Chapter 27

    Good Chapter .How about them telling Nick he couldn't bring girls over if he moves in.On one hand I get it.But on the other hand I'm a little surprised.But they did say they would give in sometimes
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    Chapter 26

    I'm glad they are making plans for Nick to move in but is Nick going to Ohio State a sure thing yet? I wonder if Nick will somehow occasionally scheme a way to be in their bed every once in a while.
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    Chapter 8

    Another excellent chapter.Alex did the right thing but boy there could have been fireworks .I guess he was smart enough to know what to do after the experience with his mom.I somehow knew Jill would be different.Speaking of fireworks on to Alex house.Can't wait
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    Chapter 25

    These guys are perfect for each other.Now school starts will they meet new people and along the way a few show interest in one or both of them?It will be interesting how the reactions will be if it happens
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    Oooh Baby, Baby

    Great Chapter @James B. from the comments from the last chapter called it.I know its a sensitive subject with Blu but was Sage really out of line talking to him about his sister?
  13. Me at 13 I would have freaked so I can't really criticize here.Why do I think his mom is going to come home before anything happens.
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    Chapter 23

    That was a great gift from Brand.I know they love Nick but I bet they don't miss him as much now
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    Chapter 24

    Interesting that they had Richie do the same thing they had Jimmy do on his first day.Will Richie discover some screw-up with the company? I love how Jimmy is being patient with Richie before that next big step.
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    Chapter 22

    This is like Deja Vu like I read this chapter before?Kidding. That comment about swearing off girls was odd. Jimmy said Nick's friends were giving them looks.When they skype later that night Nick said his friends thought they were cool.If that wasn't the case Nick would say so right?
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    Chapter 21

    "Nick took the Buffett,They lost money on us" .Charles buying two pizza's one for Nick.Are you sure you didn't base the Nick character on me? Maybe it was because Charles was there but Jimmy should have spoke to Brand about the diner he's family and had a right to know.
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    Finding Hope

    Sage is so awesome .Come on Blu it's been 4 months now you got to know Sage is cool.Stop being so stubborn. This might have been mentioned before and maybe the law has changed but legally Link has no rights being 17 at least at one time that was true which sucks .I hope Melissa and father don't get too greedy. Although you're not 100% yet I'm so glad you're getting better.Praying for you
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    Chapter 20

    It was cool Jimmy saying in his narrative that he would always make he stayed in touch with his Dad.I've seen some lovers that won't do that. Nick is like me when it comes to Buffets except I don't stay slim.In Calif. where I live Buffets have had to go out of business because of the times we live in😢some will be able to start up again when things get back to normal but sadly some won't
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    Chapter 19

    It looks like the dreams and that whole situation will continue to be an issue.Richie was cute when he was surprised his Dad knew Jimmy was his BF.Come on who else could it have been?
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    Chapter 18

    Wow Russians and espionage I would be very nervous. Great way you wrote that
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    Chapter 17

    The meeting should be interesting. I know eating establishments have security cams but one thing I would have looked into if I were Gramp and Jimmy is to see if was only to use equipment designed to listen in on private conversations.At their business yes but at a public diner could be a problem.
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    Chapter 7

    I first saw this story on another site I didn't realize it was here .I much rather read a story on this site I'm glad you are here.Well clearly Harry and Alex need each other Harry should just somehow come clean to his mom.Otherwise they will definitely be caught and that's not the way for her to find out. I would hope Alex's dad could come and help in this situation but maybe his judgment won't be so great.After all he married Alex mom.
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    Chapter 16

    For a successful company it seems to have a lot of glitches.That's why at first I thought these problems were planted to see if Jimmy would find them.But they do business with with the government that probably explains a lot.OK no more politics lol
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    Chapter 16

    I'm curious also didn't Brand and Charles Leave?And I heard no mention of taking a trip to Ames.
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