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Everything posted by weinerdog
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What @chris191070said. It sounds like it's impossible not to fall in love with Angelina
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I found it. It wasn't someone named Caleb that spoke to Casper it was Alister gee at least that was close🙄I'm too young to be getting senile
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We know Davey is in good shape with his morning runs and workouts and he has two previous lifetimes in the military I'm sure he learned some stuff so I'm thinking he won't be a pushover in the P.E. class which would get Dr. Bitner even more mad.
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"I signed that before I knew what you were going to say." This guy is responsible for the educational curriculum at the school and he doesn't even read the document before he signs it.🙄The man is a genius I tell you
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Can't wait for the explanation on why he apparently woke up not being a vampire.I have some lame ideas like somehow he got into a wormhole to an alternate universe?Is Noah still a vampire?He'll be going to school not even knowing what classroom to go to.This is fascinating. The best thing about starting a new @Comicalitystory is to see the picture on the chapter page of the latest gorgeous kid he found and this one didn't disappoint
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You're beginning to need a scorecard to keep up with all the new characters. Until they started talking age I thought Caleb was 20ish. But I remembered something I did a quick look but there were too many chapters to go though didn't Caleb briefly speak to Casper at The Family headquarters anybody remember that?
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Men. They are un-understandable
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Men. They are un-understandable
Some readers are saying Matt is being oblivious and he has been but you can also argue that Seamus might have been making assumptions. Matt never indicated that he was planning on staying there permanently one could even argue it would have been arrogant of him to do so. Being men and being un-understanable is difficult enough it's worse when both of them don't communicate. Is Matt using Kase or vice versa. It's been a dry spell for me think Matt will let me borrow Aidan?Kidding- 37 comments
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How close is it to school time for Angelina?Everyone should speak to her in English
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When Farmer talked about his time in Gulf war one you detect some extremism but it sounds like for the most part he did his duty well.What the hell happened to him?
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Would the adoption be in Italy or the US? At that point in time it might still be an issue for a same-sex couple to adopt in the US but if it happens in Italy the US would have to accept it am I right?Grandmother could probably make it happen
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Wow that was exhausting you had me thinking it was actually going to happen for a moment.I guess since you mentioned therapy Matthews Mom and Jonah must have found out how close he came.Luckily Jonah was a good guy who struggled with trying to be a loyal friend to Dallas and doing the right thing sadly there are other kids who in the same situation as Jonah was would want to do the same thing he did but cannot bring themself to.Thank you for this story I don't know how many kids read on this site but I hope this helps some adults here who may a son/daughter or nephew/niece etc. to recognize the signs
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It's would be difficult for anybody to move away from their high school when they are fairly close to graduation leaving friends and a long time crush would be tough enough if he was moving somewhere else in the United States in this case our main character Lautaro had to move to another country where another language is spoken where his new classmate could sense he is a bit of an outsider even he didn't say where he was from and while his parents are not bad people it is far from a good situation which made this move happen.This author does a great job to make the reader feel his anxiety while adjusts and wouldn't you know it he meets another crush .So do yourself a favor and explore with Lautaro his exciting and scary journey
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Great chapter the only thing missing was details of Dr. Grimes being humiliated LOL. If I understood this right George H W Bush was responsible for what happened to Davey.I wonder if that would be a big enough rift between him and Reagan for Bush to be taken off the ticket. This is a different lifeline after all. Smart idea making his Dad be a Chaplin less complication in the future(past?)well you know what I mean
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Thank you for a beautiful story.And I can appreciate how difficult it was for you to finish.I have a musician friend he's not famous but I think he's very good.He once told me when he has a heartbreaking split some of his best work comes out in song but I imagine it didn't work out for you that way. BTW maybe I have been reading too many stories but I sort of knew when the epilog started they were talking about Noah Whenever you have an idea in the future and you decide to post it here we will be anxiously waiting. Take care
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My thick skull just thought of something .When Rick crossed paths with his former classmate who's a lawyer most readers understandably figured Rick was going to be her client somewhere down the line.Well we found out that Zoltan has a condescending view of Gus intelligence and that got me thinking what kind of work agreement or contract does Gus have with Zoltan? I bet there is something illegal or some violation there and THAT is where Rick's lawyer friend comes in.I'm probably wrong again but I like to speculate
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So we have an idea of where some conflict will come from. I guess I have some limited knowledge but Neil's comment "Flower boy" I take it that it's a gay slur
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I love Tasha's priorities "Pie first" I knew I loved that girl.With Hideyoshi training her she would almost be as invisible as she thinks he is. This would just like the Government not even child prostitution would make them do the right thing
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So Angelina is not a blood relative she's an orphan, or is she both?At any rate she sounds like a sweetheart.
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Farmer was deemed not fit to command but somehow got a job in charge of kids?There is some other corruption going on here.
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Happy Easter to you also. Hunter has a great support system but it looks like he needs the professional help really bad.I fear they might be rushing him back to play. BTW I'm glad you posted early but in the future you may not want to post the same day Parker Owens posts a new chapter LOL other new chapters from other authors might get overlooked when that happens
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I didn't think it was possible but there's a character that I and I suspect most of the readers hate more than Heinrich and Rita.I had a sense Zoltan was very controlling but I didn't imagine to this degree.Rick in his thought process after Zoltan left felt he had no way to fight Zoltan he even thought that he didn't have a lawyer.Well he then gets a emergency call from and old classmate who's...A LAWYER!!! Coincidence? I think not but I can't speak for Parker so we'll see.I have to think Zoltan said some illegal things to Rick I'm no lawyer but maybe Debbie can strike first for Rick by having a restraining order against Zoltan or something like that.A corporate lawyer from New York would be a good match for anyone Zoltan has The chapter did end on a silver lining IMHO.The master of great timing Heinrich decided to call just then and finally Rick speaks to him the way he should have spoken to him a long time ago Just thought of something it would involve Rick revealing himself a little.He can ask Jared to speak to Marta about what Zoltan said maybe it will get back to Gus.Yeah risky
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Ending the chapter while the story in progress that's mean😄.Seriously I'm willing to bet this story might explain the Angelina mystery
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I knew Davey would think of something for me the surprise was he set it up before he left for the base he didn't know about any changes but I guess the experience of the last timeline got him trained to think that way.And say what you want about the Dad's shortcomings Davey knew if he was missing Dad would search his room looking for clues and it worked like he thought. Speaking of the Dad he's a lot different in this timeline what changed?
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Bonus Chapter: Ray Sullivan.
weinerdog commented on Rhythminthemind's story chapter in Bonus Chapter: Ray Sullivan.
So Ray and Peter know each other and Peter was aware of Casper. Didn't Peter consider that there might be a supernatural reason why his son is hanging around Casper sure he doesn't have any details but in the back of his mind he knows that both of them could have powers and are keeping it secret unless we find out different it looks like Peter though James and Casper just randomly became friends. I think we can say based on what we know Peter might have dropped the ball here. So did Ray of course but in a different way -
All train trips should be something like that LOL. A Shawarma that's the first I've heard of that.You said the meat was lamb so I guess it's Greek.Is that the same meat they use in a Gyro?
