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This story is not set during the pandemic but for Tyler it might as well be.I might be showing some ignorance here but Tyler can't go online right.?Some tech savvy guy could figure out where he is.If I'm wrong about that I'm sure somebody here will tell me.Tyler knows Zeke had a same sex relationship with how nuts Tyler is going being by himself I think he might make some kind of move on Zeke
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I'm afraid you may be right I live in San Diego and we always hear on the local news about people being smuggled across the border.We will find out maybe a few new boys for Carleton.I'm curious about Joey's back story
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Two Families/Two Hunters
weinerdog commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Two Families/Two Hunters
I half way surprised Mrs. L didn't blame her cancer on Hunter.I was fantasizing that while Jerry was there despite being straight maybe had a few too many beers and then a three-way with Hunter and Jerry and Jaime like I said fantasy.Is it really true freshman can't drive on the UT campus? Man that's lame. -
Walter's fish was first a yard long then it was four feet long and and finally sixty inches sounds like you heard your share of fish stories.When Walter and Jerry asked Rick if he knew what Rita was up to why was he so tight lipped?From what I can see he has no loyalty to Rita.I'm guessing Rick doesn't want to say anything because of how senior might react.But he should say something because what's Rita is saying sounds like a scam. When the motorcycle first pulled up I was thinking it could be Sexy hunk but it was cool to see these characters good touch. You think Jared reaction to the two might give Rick some encouragement? Have a Happy Thanksgiving
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When you wrote he met the president you didn't mean THE President did you it wasn't clear I guess you meant a president of a business right?Those thugs actually ran out on to the air field toward the plane?Not very bright were they especially after what Carleton did the first time.
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This story must be set in the present time because a company from Mexico would be harrassed today. If Carleton has to go to Mexico to investigate you can be sure he'll find a few boys to bring back
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I didn't know Morocco was one of those kind of countries but I'm not surprised.I remember reading two 16 years old boys in Iran got publicly hanged for being caught in the act.There is still a long way to go in so many parts of the world.
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My bad if this has already been mentioned Alex said "My Dad is going to be so proud of you".Who is his Dad?Is it one of the men in Europe?We know he was on the streets as a kid so I guess he was adopted.I was thinking what is Carleton going to do for Christmas?If he needs to hire a Santa Clause I'll do it. Good way to meet the kids.
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It could be because I live in San Diego but when I hear Maria's name I think she's Spanish or Mexican but I guess she could be anything. If she's Mexican have her make the boys some tacos they would love it
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The swimming pool would be a great surprise I'm sure it would be indoors it would have to be olympic size maybe bigger.While they are at it how about a gym?
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Chapter 22 - A Test Of Faith
weinerdog commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 22 - A Test Of Faith
One thing that's hard not to notice is how for the most part the people are doing their best to support one another in this tragic moment.In comparison to our reality we have morons who refuse to wear a mask.If this really happened to our earth today we would all be doomed.I hope I'm wrong but I see a solider taking a shot at Spencer and Jake pushing him out of the way and a innocent person getting hurt.Like I said I hope I'm wrong -
I get Carleton's guilt and grief but the boy appeared to him in his dream I don't think that's a coincidence that was divine intervention.I was thinking these guys need to go to Costco as soon as I thought it you mentioned wholesalers.
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Well obviously Hunter is doing the right thing.I'm curious what Hunter would do if something of that nature happened to his Dad?I sure hope his Dad understands why his son is doing what he's doing and at least stays out of his way while caring for his Mom but I'm not holding my breath.
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Oh please no!!!
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With so many kids maybe after David and the other older one Steven I think?Go to college they could come back and be part of the staff/Family because they are going to need the help.I have a friend who I got interested in your story he's from the Philippines.After reading the last chapter he told me poor filipino families often sell their youngest child.I don't know if you planned on adding any other kids in this story but that might be something you can work in.
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Thank you so much for the new chapter to this story.Well we will definitely find out If Mr.Raffe is an ass or a human being the way Zack poured his heart out Mr.Raffe has to be able too see this is for real.Wouldn't be something if the teacher Zack doesn't like turns out to be the guy who gets the ball rolling to get Zack out of this.I don't know if some other reader said this in another chapter comment but Sam is a sweetheart
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It great to have powerful people on your side like Carleton does as long as the cause is admiral like this one is.Was the military base you mentioned an American base?If it was these people have incredible pull
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I'm most likely going to show my ignorance of architecture here.Couldn't you build a building that connects the house sort of like how a hospital adds a wing?Maybe have a hallway that connects the two buildings so all the boys are sort of in the same place .Just a thought
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If I recall their location is secluded.I'm worried some government busy bodies will start asking questions about so many kids etc. and about other government regulations. That dream he had with the first kid was a great touch.I do believe he's in a better place but if I had that dream after initially being freaked out I would also be reassured .
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This is sort of a cliffhanger. This is way more then just a couple of boys to bring back.And I admit usually I have a thought as to what it might be but this I don't. I hope it's not trouble with legal authorities.
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Carleton was thinking about one or two dogs.At different times we would have one or two dogs at a time. To me when it was two dogs they always seemed happier. When Carleton told Harry the story he mentioned something about boys saying no.I guess that means some boys turned him down. I could understand why they would but I bet that hurts Carleton almost as much as the boy who died.
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"I don't know Rita I still have...""Great I'll see you there " if that's not classic Rita. I guess that means you won't need to give us another Rita warning next chapter. I see the timing of Rita's closing date and Senior's arrival coinciding could lead to some incident that could possibly involve Gus. Maybe Marta's family is buying the property. If I interpreted Rick reaction right he seems to think after reading the Wikipedia passage about Gus that Gus is straight but it referred to Helene as a partner nothing more than that a business partner.While he was at it he should have checked if there were any YouTube videos of Gus
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A buddy of mine had a Great Dane and it was a cool dog but he did tell they cost a lot to maintain.
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I'll say one thing it never seems to be dull over there.I don't want to rain on anybody's parade but so far he brought home boys and all of them been nice.What would he do if one had behavioral problems and didn't get along with the others? Law of averages suggest that would happen eventually.Although I'm sure Alex and the other men try to weed that out.
