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If you are already familiar with The Killian Kendall series then I don't have to say anything ,You know what's good. For those who are not familiar think of Nancy Drew or Hardy Boys but from gay teen perspective and more contemporary and funnier. Try to think of being in so many ways your average teenager but with super natural gifts and abilities and you are thrown into this adult world of being a P.I. working with a a highly respected P.I. and at the same time you're still trying to figure out how to be an adult while also navigating a new and seemingly continuing evolving adoptive loving family.Add to the mix genuine intriguing mysteries to solve and you have a great series .And this stories adds excellent new characters to an already interesting cast.Interested in reading this now? Highly recommended
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“I-in-initiat-i-i-ing E-Emergency Re-act-or sh-sh-shutdown…” A voice boomed through the silence Unless I totally missed something the voice that said that had to had followed Mickey and Isaiah on to The Vixen You gave me biscuits." He swallowed looking down trying not to shudder, “and your pants.” "The biscuits were stale." He forgot to mention so were the pants But then how would Mickey sneak peeks at it when he thought Isaiah wasn’t aware? Not that he was into that, nope, totally not. Mickey sounds so much like myself in the locker room after PE class
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Well Ben would be able to identify why it's sticky and then the solution is simple.....Use a sock.....Just not one from Mickey's spaceship
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Problem is if the washing machine breaks the Maytag repair man wouldn't be able to make a house call
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It's The Postman that always rings twice....Much to the chagrin of Mickey and Isaiah
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Yeah I have been keeping up with it on that site and it is a damn good (but sometimes frustrating) story) It would also appear that the story where Noah from the previous story gets reformed won't show up here either
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Hopefully these are baby steps 🤞🙏
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Three weeks of learning that space was not the glorious frontier he had imagined, Sounds like Isaiah has seen the show Star Trek but I can't imagine Father allowing the boys to watch it This resembles The Odd Couple with a spaceship setting
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After looking at that I think the person that Mickey should have met was Finn. Isaiah better not wash it without the dirt the ship may not stay intact
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Whoa between that group Father is the leader of and all the demons from the other story I would pick hanging out with the Demons without a second thought.
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That makes him someone to WATCH out for......🙄
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Bad News for the Slacker Crew
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Bad News for the Slacker Crew
For that I deserve a pass for my next groan -
@Josh Aterovis Put the complete tag up so people can see the 5 stars I'm going to give it
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Bad News for the Slacker Crew
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Bad News for the Slacker Crew
Did Russell compose? Perhaps through Fabian he'll finish a song he started -
Jacy joined us occasionally, his calm, steady presence adding an easy and comfortable layer to our trio. It surprised me how natural it felt, the three of us forming the early threads of a friendship that I hadn’t realized I needed. That sort of fits with something I said in a previous chapter comment.Those three working together on cases.Great foundation for future stories. "It's about time," I said in lieu of a greeting. Kaplan chuckled. "These things take time, Kendall That was one thing when shows like CSI and their spinoffs came on the air.In one scene they collect DNA and then in the next scene they have the results. As if they put it in a machine some lights blink off and on and Viola results.I doesn't work like that it takes awhile "The dead are not powerless. Dead, I say? There is no death. Only a change of worlds." Among Killian's gifts is knowing there is somewhere we go after this existence.(In my case maybe not so good😄) While Killian is sadden he may not see Seth for now he did get to say goodbye and he knows he WILL see him again. That might be the biggest gift of all. As far as Breaking The Mask I'm reading the original version at the moment as this one is going to be a major rewrite and I can tell all of you this story is good And finally best line of the chapter "Kyle Leonard, the talking Sasquatch? I guess you could call it talking.😄 Speaking of Kyle anybody need a place to live I hear Kyle need a roommate now
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6,666 words? in a story with demons in it? You had to of planned that.What did you? After you were done you saw it was 6,668 and then you went "I can change "would not" to "won't" that will make it 6,667" . Now to find one more word to delete"
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Wow I have to admit I didn't anticipate the being watched part. The very idea that those four thugs Kent took care of was some kind of set up is appalling.
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The fitting was a surgical procedure. The components of Riley's new identity were laid on the bed with the reverence of a knight arming for battle. A black dinner suit, tailored from wool so fine it felt like a structured shadow. A dress shirt with front pleats like a secret cypher. A black satin bow tie. And the glasses. I'm surprised Riley didn't break out in hives You know I wish I had that terminology when I was a kid. "Where were you tonight"? " I was involved in an data exchange"
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Bless me Father for I have sinned I didn't return a shopping cart
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Just thought of something you know when parents before they go out for the night tell their teenage kids "Don't burn down the house". With Cecil it would not be a joke. "These are the souls of people who don't return shopping carts." I've done that before......Should I be worried?
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The Space Between Breaths
weinerdog commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in The Space Between Breaths
I’d been starving for that kind of contact since Ken died and hadn’t known how deep the hunger ran until it was being fed. After that thought I wonder how Kent sees Marvin,Is it as a possible significant other OR as a brother replacement for Ken? If it's the ladder that isn't fair to Marvin. Devon knows Kent has been through some stuff such as Ken dying.But is he aware to what extent? Does he know about the PTSD? I know it's a private thing that Marvin shouldn't reveal but perhaps he should tell Devon about that in case Kent has an episode at dinner. -
Not a bad theory but PLEASE NO!!!!! That would put a stop to my Kasy or Jillian fantasy. Your comment about Ricky being in the Wong place at the Wong time reminds me of this Q: Why is it difficult to make a phone call in China? A: There are so many Wing's and Wong's you might wing a wong number
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Chapter 3: Bryan Falls Into The River
weinerdog commented on irivera's story chapter in Chapter 3: Bryan Falls Into The River
The name of the story is Ruin The Friendship...If Bryan had died that would have definitely ruined it -
Who would have thought the equalizer would be Riley's familiarity with gay sex. He was clean. He was safe. He was fed premium, nutrient-dense cardboard. I'm not so sure if that's a metaphor or if it really is cardboard The radio, when found, was preset to a classical station playing something mournful and complicate “I get the code to the Telly, the one that lets me watch what I want.” Riley narrowed his eyes. “270275” Ben said softly. “Deal?” Ben gave him the code to the Telly but notice he didn't give him the code to the preset on the radio. I guess Ben doesn't want to take a chance on hearing Oasis
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There is no reason for me to think this since there was no mention of anything like this but I remember a previous trip where they were being followed. If something happens where Devin and/or Mac have to shift it would be very difficult to explain to Lonny,Clint and Daniel
