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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 27

    WE human call Krista?.... Is this your way of saying you're not human?
  2. weinerdog

    Chapter 3

    We’ve been that way since the start—total trust.” It looks like that comment might bite him in the ass
  3. Robbie Playing Baseball? It will be interesting to know how that came about. Looking more and more like there going be a Bory ( Im using Bobby instead of Robbie since Rory and Robbie have the same first letter)instead of Nobbie ...come to think of it the second choice sounds so appropriate. Since you said you were close to end it sounds like there is not going to be enough time for Robbie to meet his Dad's side of the family and possibly will he be in his kid's life
  4. And what was all that stupid crap about how Alexander had been sure of Lyn’s ‘straightness’ in college? Perhaps Alexander was trying to create a more clear path for Lyn. “You’re so cocksure, I want to smack you.” That's because Alexander is sure of Lyn's cock
  5. weinerdog

    Chapter 22

    I almost put an angry reaction like @Philippe but I liked the Adam and Rick scenes but now after @Philippe comment I'm not so sure. It's hard to ignore Rick telling Adam important info like where the boys are. The main reason I come to the conclusion that Adam isn't involved though is it would make Rick an awful judge of character. It's one thing to make a few mistakes along the way but this would be incompetent. Notice in the Corcoran files Cunningham didn't mention the knife,That tells me he and the board made a possible connection to Martin's murder the year before. If Cunningham still has the knife maybe Martin's DNA is on it. The Stalker might know somebody in the police department which is how he would know why Rick was assigned there @Philippe made a point of Rick and Cory looking like each other. I'll go you one better (or maybe worse is the right word here) If Corcoran ends up at Tom and Beth house he will notice the resemblance between Martin and Shane
  6. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    I like how this is starting I hope you have more snarky comments about Aunt Daisy coming from Lily. So it sounds like Jacy sort of seeing the future is something he might have inherited from the family background.If it's related to the reason why Daisy was closed mouthed about it that would be doing Jacy and Micheal a disservice
  7. I would make bald jokes to a friend of mine he eventually shaved his head (As if to say I'm bald on purpose) so being the smart ass I sometimes am I once looked close at his head and said "You're losing your skin"
  8. For a moment, he felt a hint of guilt. But Five wasn’t his; there was no reason for him to keep his hands tied behind his back. When this vacation was over, things would go back the way they were. He might as well have as much fun as he could. “What’s this about a towel?” Five asked as he hung up his coat and pants. “And what should you have looked at?” “Nothing,” Percy said as he took off his coat. Those two statements would seem to contradict Percy snorted. “I’m going to be focusing on baseball. I won’t have time to find a boyfriend.” Sound like an idea for a future story Percy and a teammate? Ira let out a whoop and ran over to the fridge. He opened the door and grabbed a can of soda. He quickly opened it and drank about half. He burped loudly, and when his father glared at him, Ira grinned and went back to his sweeping. Imagine how Ira would react if he saw the wine cellar
  9. Really?🤔 I can't Imagine what could go wrong
  10. You mentioned powdery stuff and pot in the same comment. Don't be surprised if Deputy Barney Fife knocks at your door
  11. weinerdog

    Grace's Intel

    I had no idea how any of this worked. Who even needs a lawyer at eighteen? You would know if you had the classmates I had
  12. weinerdog

    Grace's Intel

    Now there's a comment that's universally acceptable for any situation
  13. weinerdog

    Chapter 21

    I'm pretty sure The Headmaster answers to someone so I'm guessing if the higher ups had influence in this and we all well know what religious institutions have done in the past in cases like these. I’ll take the boys for a motor up and down the river and have them back safe and sound in time for you to get all set up for tonight. When Tom said that my thought was OH NO. Hope I'm wrong
  14. weinerdog

    Chapter 2

    We're still in the getting to know you stage so far so good. I think it's insane to do so many activities
  15. weinerdog

    Chapter 27

    True you're not only thinking of "Colt's wet ass" ......You're also thinking of Percy's,Five and Ethan's from your story
  16. In the flashback years Lyn consistent attitude has been Alexander is an ass. But I guess he really did care about him then
  17. Lot of things to sort through here “You’re the son of a DEA agent! You’re a target! I’m sure the cartel already knows who your dad is, who he really works for, and who you are. That’s why the fuck I’m here!” If Juan is right about the Cartel knowing who Hunter is well then logically they should take him the hell out of there .But that wouldn't work for the flow of this story so I'm guessing they won't. I agree with @Cane23 not only was the headmistress reckless Juan Camilo should have got the right people involved as soon as he saw the posters unless I'm missing something like perhaps increasing the security could have made things worse. Because back home, everything that was going on about immigration at the moment was always this stupid “us versus them” mentality. So true and not just with immigration. I figured I'd need to visit the tutoring center soon or risk drowning, particularly in math. For those of us who are Team Yeison if he is good in math perhaps HE should tutor Hunter Speaking of the Yeison/ Miguel thing. Miguel gave us more reason to dislike him this chapter but I get the feeling he is going to be a complicated character in this story.Heck he might even end up being one of the heroes in this story. and Grindr was like walking in with an unlimited gift card. Wait Grindr has gift cards?.........I think I might have solved what to get this one friend of mine for Christmas
  18. He’s way better looking than me, and Cody might fall in love with this Dawson dude. Well he found out later about them being cousins but still he had nothing to worry about falling in love would not be worth it if he had to live in Montana. “Well now Cody’s giving me the silent treatment. You tore apart my relationship. All because of your stupid jealousy?” Hate to differ Ollie but it was also your "stupid jealousy" Unless @Lee Wilson is right about the phone. “There’s fajitas on the back patio if you’re hungry.” Ollie I don't care if you're bummed at Logan .Fajitas man
  19. weinerdog

    Chapter 32

    If Sam moves in with Jesse and Shaun one thing that has to happen is Monica marries or lives with someone reasonable otherwise those poor kids that are still there. I hope it doesn't come to calling CPS
  20. weinerdog

    Chapter 32

    “Are you fucking kidding me?!” he exploded, the pink lounge chair shuddering beneath him as he sat bolt upright. “Ben, that was the best potato salad I’ve ever tasted and you inhaled the whole goddamn tub!” Ben froze mid-bite, mouth full, a smear of mayonnaise on his chin. “Uh… Sorry, man,” he mumbled guiltily, glancing down at the tub clutched in his hands. Gretchen barked out a laugh. “Maybe next time, you serve yourself before you get comfy on my chair, drama queen.” Will this be the first band to ever break up over......Potato salad? You think people are gonna come out to shows for the ‘anal porn band’? If they call themselves that some people will show up just for that The meeting with Stokes on Monday morning can still go sideways for Shaun. But we are 30+ plus chapters into this story @mastershakeme would add that kind of drama this late into the story?.........What am I saying of course she would
  21. weinerdog

    Chapter 27

    So how did that go? On the ranch late elementary or early middle school age "We can't let anyone know" " Yeah especially @Krista" They must have been fans of her stories.
  22. weinerdog

    Chapter 27

    At Tempton Joel tried to stay invisible so it's safe to say he never got into any confrontations over there. This might be a new experience that he doesn't know how to navigate yet of when to show discretion in these kind of situations (Drinking 6 beers isn't a way to do that). While I think Joel is getting some respect he will also attract some dumb ass macho types.
  23. weinerdog

    Chapter 27

    Hey @Jason Rimbaud @Seraph28 is first among readers who actually read the chapter
  24. weinerdog

    Chapter 26

    Yea first on pg.13 Oh but 13 is unlucky
  25. weinerdog

    Chapter 26

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