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To add to that I would like to see where this left off to be told from Zack's perspective

I said this in another story chapter comments but to be able to able to write three stories that are so different one in particular and do it at the same level of excellence is amazing. Jamie's father (I forget him name at the moment but I won't waste my time looking back to find it) interesting how he places so much value on education when he takes action that even the most uneducated person wouldn't take. It's like he had no idea how his BS criminal complaints could turn around and bite him on the ass. Luckily Detective Jenson is a competent, uncorrupt detective.He even knew more than Jamie that Luca would be there for him.

Oh I bet @Laura S. Fox will just LOVE!!!!! hearing that

There is still a lot of story to tell here .As others have mentioned the shelter for homeless teen is obvious but there's other stuff like what were the details about Zack's situation ? Is he also gay? And geez Aaron and Zack's parents pretty much let TWO sons go by the wayside.I think they may have surpassed The Monolith as the worst charcter(s) in the story.Some legal action HAS to be taken against them. That was what it felt like for me when I first spotted Thompsonville from the air as I flew down from Brisbane. I knew the place, but it still felt quite daunting, That leaves me an opening to tell one of my stupid comments I love to say in a when we are in a town we never been in "Well I wouldn't have known the old place" And somebody would then say "You've never been here" And then I would say "That's why I wouldn't have known it".....BOOOOO

Oh I'm sure thar character named Krista was just a coincidence

The way Alexander house and Grandfather(What a piece of work) was portrayed explains a lot of why Alexander is like the way he is

Now wait just a damned minute. I’d sworn this wasn’t that story. Jeff, you absolute bastard, this wasn’t part of the plan!. Is breaking the third wall a trope? Very well done.Maybe you can take it farther by having Skylar say " Oh and I saw your chapter comment @Philippe" flash of teeth that should’ve been illegal in three states. That's the second time in this story you mentioned illegal in three states.What are these three states?🤔 I want to avoid them So this beach party there's a good chance Ryan and Gabriel are going to be shirtless.......I'm there you have to to tell us @Jeff Burton the time and place. Oh I won't be attending the party I'm going to find a good lookout spot....with a powerful telescope

Make it two cold pints and you're home free

Episcopalian is pretty much Catholic lite ....Or maybe Zero Sugar?Eh whatever you want to call it

You make a good point about the coach.Perhaps he's a moron also and thinks having a gay player no matter how good will mess up team chemistry. I'm sure @Krista will have some reason why the coach won't be able to get Joel back otherwise the story ends here😀

Yeah he did. And when his therapist checked out the chapter HE booked a therapist

even my sheets had been stripped from it. Part of me wonders if she had them burned because a heathen laid down on them. I know there is still more to know about Lisa but at the moment I dislike her more than I do Cindy from The Best Year. The Twins will notice Joel's baseball bag so it will be interesting to see where that leads to

In addition to everything else it seems like Elion and Holden will be a thing “When darkness rises, four hearts shall bind. Two Fae, two human; two anchored in shadow, two in light. Only through love’s consummation shall their bond fully awaken, allowing them to forge a prison of shadow from which the dark lord cannot escape.” “You know,” Ash murmured playfully, nuzzling Desmond’s temple, “this explains why we’ve all been so desperately drawn to each other lately. It’s destiny, Des. We’re supposed to save the world by making love. You see Thats why this happen The sacred ancient scriptures demanded it........Not because The author's a perv

Haven't Started reading yet but when I saw this WARNING: Incest I thought well gee WHO!!! can that be🤨🤔 Some readers may get incensed about that.(hee hee)

I remember Tony thinking that kid looked familiar. How old was Aaron's brother when he last saw him?

Hearst has a plan, I promise. He will be quite sneaky, too. I think I MAY know (Huge if) Either Angus or Wen won't be able to resist using the stuff Hearst already told them. That's where not signing the NDA will come in. I'm thinking of a few other details still to revealed that will have to happen for Angus and/or Wen to fall for the trap Hearst is apparently setting

BTW (This may make you want to have The Zamora's move) I was born In Columbus Ga. (well actually Ft .Benning hospital) but it says Columbus Georgia on my birth certificate

Yeah I had that thought also. Who ever it is he might have a story similar to Tony's

Damn I have to fold all I have is😇🐆🤨😊

"Are you with Webber yet?" "Just heading over there now." "I'll be sending a car over as well. Taylor was shot yesterday evening." "Dead?" "Yeah. It was likely a high-powered rifle, from a distance of two hundred yards or more. There wasn't much left of his head, but with woods across the street about that distance away, it's a good bet that's where the shot was fired from. Right after that exchange you had 3: The Killer but before I read that part I thought to my self 'AHA I know who the killer is...Leon or Stephen from the previous story

Saggio has had only two cases? That can't be right🤔 On Magnum P.I. they get a case every week usually involving the local police or FBI sometimes even the military where national security is at stake

“Those are cut so low my hip bones would need their own OnlyFans. How am I supposed to hide my boxers?” Kenzi gave me a look like I had just asked why rain was wet. “You don’t wear any. It's settled any business I own or manage I'm going to have Lex set the dress code oh sure there will be some employees I wouldn't want to see in Lex's dress code but there would be plenty more that I would want to see. My chosen saint is St. Michael the archangel same as Ryan...what does that say about me🤔

@Jeff Burton you talk about putting more tropes into this did you write that country song where the last verse which had nothing to do with the rest of song went like this "Well, I was drunk the day my mom got out of prison, And I went to pick her up in the rain, But before I could get to the station in my pickup truck, She got run over by a damned old train." The last verse made it a "perfect country song" because it has Mama, getting drunk, prison, a pickup truck and a railroad

Then they san sing Get along home Cindy,Cindy ....but oh they'll have to marry her someday ..forget it

"I don't think any of us are going to understand this well," Charlie said. Well Charlie now you know how I feel when I try to understand @Geron Kees