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So when someone asks how they got together their answer would be.....We broke the fourth wall?
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After the synopsis and this first chapter my first thought is their GF's being in different towns is why what is implied is going to happen will happen.
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Frosted Hearts: The Pool
weinerdog commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Pool
Well of course Percy heated the pool and the hot tub and......oh......OH!!!!!!...never mind -
I'm going to have to start working a new group of people
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Frosted Hearts: The Pool
weinerdog commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Pool
Percy had trouble concentrating on the show as the object of his desire was five feet away, trapped inside its cotton prison. it depends what show he was watching “I never knew it was so hard to be gay,” Five commented .Isn't being hard one of the requirement of being gay🤔 “He acted mad that I brought them pizza,” If Ethan and Ira weren't already adults I would call CPS on this guy Wow, not a good place to stop. But it wasn't my fault, next week we find out what a ravine, snowmobile, and an Elk have in common. So judging on how the posting been going in a couple of day on Saturday? MONDAY!!,MONDAY I meant MONDAY!! -
The Mini Orgy and High School Begins
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Mini Orgy and High School Begins
“Classes Begin, So Does Trouble” Is the trouble named Max? -
I didn't know you were a penguin
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The more time there is between chapters the more nutty comments will appear (Including me ,and including this one) Hey I have an idea post a new chapter everyday
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Absolutely good points but it still doesn't override that Rick interacted with all three. Just spitballing here but you mention there were no murders when Rick was at the Academy. Where was the Academy located? Maybe the person who Rick is noticing never saw Rick during that time.He started seeing Rick again when Rick got his current assignment
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Did you get a ride? Or did you go Go Your Own Way. Now don't tell me Little Lies.That might Break The Chain.If I Don't Stop thinking about tomorrow I maybe in Over My Head.This has Got Me Hypnotized and pretty soon I'll be Second Hand News
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Chapter 8: An Appalachian Christmas
weinerdog commented on RichardWrites's story chapter in Chapter 8: An Appalachian Christmas
I'll wait to see how this plays out before commenting on it. But considering what happened last chapter Jake was probably the most surprised seeing Aadan making out with Nina -
disconnected from reality🤔
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And very intelligent also
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You're not going to try nailing it the ceiling are you?
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“That has to be the dumbest thing I’ve ever heard,” Grandpa said flatly. Apparently Granpa hasn't watched too many political campaine speeches
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OH and since we mentioned @kboisfirst on page 8
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Speaking of @Krista being a comment lover I have been reading all the comments and can somebody help me with something?.....What's the story about again
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Oh I see @Jason Rimbaud beat me by a few seconds do you have a cam hidden in my room and knew I was about to post it
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I bet you it's one of @kbois stories check out her last wolf shifter one.
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I wasn't for a second making any excuses for him just saying how I think his mind works.I would like to hear more about this marriage is it to appease the parents perhaps. I have an idea for a sequel. Brad runs for political office(lets say senator) and then Alexander wants to reveal Lyn did all of Brad's homework in college
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We'll get a better idea once we find out more about the incident in the past. Who was more to blame.? If the blame is equal between the two then I could see Brad being ticked off at his parents reaction. Still Brad is being very callous. You know the old joke what's the difference between your Job and your wife? After a couple of years your job still sucks. Well perhaps Bella is already at that point so maybe in Brad's mind this is OK because it's the only way to get head. I bet this thinking is more common than most realize. “Yeah, right. Hey, by the way, did you tell His Majesty about your sexual orientation?” So Brad has no clue about that. ” Although Luke had proven to be an ass, Lyn didn’t want to throw him under the bus. Why the hell not?
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Frosted Hearts: The Overlook
weinerdog commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Overlook
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I would hope the nightmare is a clue.The reality is dreams and nightmare are formed by your own thoughts so perhaps these are Rick thoughts about what happened but this is a story so thats no fun😄. Maybe he'll see something in the yearbook and Marty's journal that he can piece together. ‘I have her number somewhere, so I’ll dig it out for you. Then it’s up to you as to whether or not you call her . . . but I certainly hope you do. People really can change, Rick, and if nothing else, it’d be a shame to see you miss out on meeting your nephew.’ Here's what I would do I assume it's a cell phone so I would text her "It's Rick I want to call you will you take the call?"
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Frosted Hearts: The Overlook
weinerdog commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Overlook
Why do I think Mario and Ethan are going to visit at the same time? It wasn’t that sharing a shower with Five was an unpleasant thought. But gay chicken aside, Five was straight. And he really should not be having the kind of thoughts he was having. After all this should't it be Bi after all the thoughts pretty turned into actions So what's the next accident? Lets see they walk out of shower one slips and falls on his back while the other rushing to help slips and falls forward and while his mouth is open because he is screaming he just happens to land...... -
Well this is an interesting unique type of story. Can't wait to read more Sorry to use such a lame comparison but nothing else comes to mind. Remember Gilligan's Island? The Professor always had all the answers to their problems...except how to get off the island. In this story Morgan can say a spell to get money out of an ATM and say a spell to make it stop raining until he gets home but did he have a spell to find the key?🤔 Of course not.But I guess he did have a spell for looking like he's in his thirties even though he's been here for 15 centuries. Tomorrow I'm going to an ATM and say “Obliviscere et largire.”
