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Thank you for this trip through time.Very interesting to see how thing were those days. I remember a lot of things (although I wasn't born yet..yeah right) But I never took a cross country trip on a train. A couple of things got my attention Back then, luggage didn’t have wheels.You with all the smart creative people that were around then I'm amazed it took so long for the luggage companies to think of that. I learned it was because you could buy a brand new house, only a block from the ocean, for around thirty thousand dollars. Whoa how times have changed.Your sister was sitting on a gold mine.Although to be fair property tax was getting outrageous then. I grew up In The San Diego area .Maybe you have found this out since that time but Del Mar had a great yearly summer fair that was very popular. And after the fair ended Del Mar racetrack had their season and a lot of celebrities would attendDesi Arnez of I love Lucy fame was always there.I tripped out when he mentioned Del Mar on an episode of I love Lucy. Thank you for the trip down memory lane

I am not predicting this @Lee Wilson so don't change it if any of this MAY happen. With all the attention the guns got in this story it would be a good GUESS they will figure later in the story.IF it does it would be interesting who the shooter would be.Wouldn't it be a hoot if it was Michael. Mel and Sandy had to have had alcohol before the dance even from the most brazen that is unbelievable behavior. one of those couples were Mel and his date, the alleged booger eating Sandy. Did @Summerabbacat help you write this chapter. That sounds so much like one of his rants about characters he doesn't like

The portal took them to Desmond room. You see Desmond? Even the portal knows just go with it.

You say that like it's unusual or something🤔

"You would be doing porn if it wasn't for me" Not exactly a great foundation for a relationship. Are there any unseen risks Leo is taking for doing this?He should think it through. I hope Carter is stupid enough to keep those underage naked pictures of Ace.That could end up biting him in the ass

If the person running the lawn mower is as hot as Aaron then I'll gladly wake up that way every morning.(I have other thoughts of how to wake up but thats a discussion for another time)

I have seen low carb keto donuts online Granted its not a Krispy Kreme but it's something .And only costs

I guess you don't want a Pulitzer Prize

I'm curious if Alexander is actually different these days but when he reconnected with Lyn he for some reason reverted back to his old ways

Well done again @Lee Wilson. You must have to empty your "trash bin" frequently given some of the horrid characters you have created. Here's what it will say in @Lee Wilson obituary 'His contribtion to society? Creating horrid characters

The one possible challenge for Jeff might be he meets the academy's version of Brodie and said possible person tries to get Jeff to do something stupid with him. It may become a case of Jeff having a choice of become a snitch or go to juvy and possibly jail when he turns 18

Up until this chapter I was assuming Jamie was going to do the tour and that might still be the case. But now I'm wondering if he will or won't.Great writing!

They haven't found a way to get rid of mosquitos have they? Does that answer your question?

I mentioned I hoped something like The siblings coming to the party in a previous chapter comment. I swear if this story is posted somewhere else I haven't been looking. Now the only missing piece in Aaron finding his brother

I must say VERY suspenseful. “They didn’t even look,” Ash muttered, checking his own bag. “Idiots.” That's reflective of Scarlett's leadership huh? “You miss my devastating charm. My handsome face. My—” “Gods, stop.” If you had let Ash finish Desmond,Ash would have said "Humility"

Lots of tension ahead 😘 REALLY!!!🤔 I would have never thought....OK I'm going to read the chapter now.

Even though there were other dogs around, she just didn’t seem to hit it off with any of them, at least not as well as she does with Bear.” Any chance Bailey knows there is something different about Bear? Dogs could possibly have that sense humans don't have. her face contorted into a sour, nasty expression before she turned her back on us and walked away. Wait wha..?.....I thought that was her permanent expression

I was beginning to think that maybe Luke would have had to tell Aaron that he witnessed the contract signing and had met Harry.The only thing you left out is Tony couldn't hold on to the towel and was chasing Aaron naked

And you didn't edit it

Kudos to that girl that walked up to Stephen. Why am I getting a feeling Jeff and Gavin are going to be meeting up in Juvie. Are Melton and Gavin cousins by any chance

So on future job applications could Cody write down co-producer?

So if I keep a fake camera around and I say 'It's only for content'.......🤔

Remember in A Promise To Protect you gave us two alternant endings? Could you do that here? Only be sure in one of them Carter gets the crap beaten out of him.(I'm kidding but in a way not really)

Is Brad REALLY only doing this for content

Something I forgot to mention ‘You better believe it,’ Harry joked. ‘She can be as savage as she needs to be.’ If that's true Harry Shi-anne might end up with your clients