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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 16

    Maybe you can work in "If the meal isn't served within 30 minutes it's free"
  2. weinerdog

    Coquet

    What I'm going to be interested to know is if Lonnie is good enough at what he does to find out who Gabriel is. Also will some paparazzi get a pic of Gabriel and Sean and start some kind of rumor.
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    The Reveal

    When are you going to write the chapter implicating the enemies as responsible for the JFK assassination?
  4. You heard of zero to sixty? Well the way things were at that point in time to what eventually happened it seems like it went from sixty to zero
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    Chapter 15

    He doesn't need to be busy if Garrett keeps visiting
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    Chapter 15

    The pig farm vs the manor? You heard the expression "Pearls before swine" ?(which in a way applies to Tarquin) well in this case Swine beats Peals
  7. I wonder how the dynamics of the group of friends will change? You just know Daniel is an itch Hunter needs to scratch will that lead to more trouble? Knowing Hunter yes. That their dream of their son finding real love – and maybe a way out of Colombia – had fallen apart. If that was really part of Yeison and his family thinking maybe they are not so innocent themselves.Having said that Yeison did get a raw deal Hunter wonders if Yeison may start hating him I don't see that but I do see a future conversation where Yeison lets out some frustrations out and accuses Hunter of want Miguel all along.Maybe it's here where Hunter tells Yeison the reason why he's with Miguel.Because his dad told him to.
  8. I was going to say that very thing
  9. I hope Toby isn't the dad according to the timeline it was Jan 22 when he broke up with Morgan and March 20 when Dustin confronted him and Toby didn't use protection. On the other hand judging by past chapters Morgan does sound like someone who would sleep around and then lie about it.Doesn't make for a good future in-law relationship when you use self defense techniques on you're possible future Father and Brother in law
  10. I have an idea for a new chapter .Have Ted ,Brian,Robert,Matt,Wayne and Kerry ALL working the same shift at the Stop-N-Save have them go to Brian's house so Barry doesn't get left out.I'll let your imagination take it from there😆
  11. I guess I need to find a new guy to fuck me. If the Shop-N-Save is close to where Luca and Darren or Stephen and Micheal live with the people they know it should be no problem
  12. weinerdog

    Chapter 14

    For me it depends on how the naked pizza boy looks.....I might even start to order a pizza daily with special delivery instructions.Hmm along with the tip I might be broke in two months......COOL
  13. weinerdog

    Chapter 14

    “I forgot, you and Garrett engaged in intimacy prior to Kyle,” Orel glanced out of the window to where Garrett was just arriving. “Please explain, in detail, everything he did to make you enjoy the congress.” Enjoy the congress eh? Congress is a formal and historic term for sexual intercourse. No wonder members of the U.S. congress take that definition very seriously
  14. weinerdog

    Chapter 14

    What I think about this chapter is.....oh OH!!!!!! I'M SOOOOOO SORRY@drpaladin didn't respond yet. please ,please PLEASE forgive me. I didn't mean to be a third wheel
  15. weinerdog

    Chapter 30

    Thank you❤️
  16. USA junior team wow? Maybe this was discussed before I never thought to ask. Has there ever been a blind participant in a swimming meet not specifically for the blind?
  17. I heard oral sex isn't sex while I don't totally get that I could get around to that way of thinking. But "It isn't gay as long as you'r the one boinking the male ass?"
  18. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    It will interesting to see how much Jamal has changed in 8 years
  19. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    Well I am Loath to comment on this.....or is it loathe?.....I'll get back to you on that sorry double post how the hell did I do that?
  20. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    Well I am Loath to comment on this.....or is it loathe?.....I'll get back to you on that
  21. weinerdog

    Prologue

    I'll echo what @Carybr said. I didn't have much interest in wolf-shifter stories until I read @kbois take on it so likewise while this genre doesn't interest me I bet @Mark Ponyboy Peters will make this good
  22. weinerdog

    Chapter 13

    Finn had made his choice on which Merrick brother he wanted. And that choice cut Oliver deeply. Did I miss something? I didn't realize Oliver was into Finn. Is that why he took the Delorean to Finn? The Puppy Dog Eyes. Oh man once that happens Garrett is toast.Can't wait to witness the double date
  23. weinerdog

    Chapter 13

    Remember this from the previous chapter? "Garrett, it's Mike at the depot. The shipment of hydraulic parts is—" "Later, Mike," Garrett said, his eyes still on the window. "I'm... conducting surveillance." "...On what?" "On a ghost building a bookshelf. It's more important. I'll call you back." I would say that horse has already left the barn
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    Chapter 13

    This time before this post there were 16 uninterrupted comments between @Topher Lydon and @drpaladin...... Is it getting serious between you two?
  25. “Straight? You think he’s straight??” Ian laughed. “You’d have to be blind to not see that he likes you!” Ian scoffed. No way… Jake doesn’t think of me romantically?? Does he????? Nah probably not. I leaned my head back to look at the stars. I noticed a few constellations that Jake had pointed out to me. Dangit... this evening is going all wrong! I’m supposed to like Ian but all I can think about is Jake!! You seem to have an ability to write gay teen boys as oblivious to the obvious just like Ollie in the other story. Why else would Jake be upset about chase joining them
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