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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 32

    A very nice chapter. A couple of thoughts. I'm assuming Tony is going to meet with Shelly Reynolds. I wonder if he will lose his composure and bring up her kicking her son out? I'm not the author of this (Thankfully) But if Shelly Reynolds turns out to be the changed person I think she is she may take an interest in what has happened with Tony's sister. Could you imagine her telling the monolith to pull her head out before it's too late? It probably won't do any good but at least the monolith would be told off
  2. @Lee Wilson is writing that down as we speak
  3. You have to wonder about Brad's motivations spending college with Lyn and Alex OH EXCUSE ME Alexander he had to have gotten the impression that these two merely tolerated each other.
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    Chapter 3

    Wish I had a friend that let me assist him in that endeavor
  5. I know it's wrong to think this but part of me hopes Gavin is stubborn and is as stupid as Jeff so....well I don't have to say the rest do I?
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    Chapter 30

    Don't forget anchovies on......ON ANYTHING!!!!!!!!
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    Chapter 30

    One thing I keep thinking about is right noe both kingdoms and the soliders are behind Kieran but somewhere down the line he going to have to leave to that entity that could save Rory's baby but he can't tell anybody about that. Both kingdoms and the soldiers not to mention Rory himself will think Kieran abandoned everything.How will they navigate that when that time comes.Another possibility might be they think Keiran died in battle.
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    Chapter 31

    Our smart readers gave me something else to think about, Luke might ask to read what he is witnessing a reasonable request will Harry balk at that? That stuff about Tony having a kangaroo in his story and how it might conflict with the U.S. made me go WOW! Because the other day while surfing the web I came across something about kangaroos in the U.S. While still not common overall 13 states allow Kangaroo ownership and it is beginning to become more noticeable in Texas. Ann in Washington state there is a popular attraction that is a Kangaroo farm.
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    Breaking Apart

    I'm glad Jamie is going to call Hearst from the road but will Hearst answer the calls? He should accept the calls because then Jamie will tell him what is happening day by day and Hearst might be able to figure something out by that.Has Hearst thought of looking through Wen stuff?
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    Denial

    Damn I hope Carter doesn't put anything in Ace drink. And while I'm in no position to say where the story is going I can't help but think Jordan is going to be involved in this somewhere along the way
  11. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    I know this is just a story but isn't what the landlord did sort of illegal?
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    Chapter 45

    I might have asked this before what time period does this take place in? I ask because I wonder if solar panels could be used for the cabin
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    Chapter 8

    Good for them they are the next level now. Will there be something different about their demeanor when they see the family and will Mom notice?
  14. That otter be good.(If you want to ban me for that one I don't blame you)
  15. You weren't suppose to look.That's something I NEVER didUh I think I'm going to be laid up for awhile
  16. You mentioned an Alejandro Jimenez my guess is the bully racist homophobe Gavin had words for him also being hispanic.He would be a good ally for Leon Zamora to have
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    Chapter 30

    Haven't you heard? @Mark Ponyboy Peters is doing a story on how The Thompson Twins escape their evil family and become stars. They have that in common with Tony and they will cross paths with each other right @Mark Ponyboy Peters?....Right???
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    Chapter 30

    At least I didn't say shrimp on the barbie...Opps I guess I just did
  19. I loved how you had Rory visiting Desmond and Kiernan visiting Ash the night before they left on their journey. And if Ash ever needs more practice on invisibility with two people I'm available...Anytime👌🙏
  20. I'm about to read the chapter but don't think I didn't notice your last few chapters were late at night (At least in my time zone) While this one is in the morning. Try to throw us a curve eh?
  21. weinerdog

    Chapter 30

    I was hoping to hear Harry reaction to the new story but at the same time I just knew @Mark Ponyboy Peters was going to kick the can down to the next chapter. I wanted this story to be uniquely Australian, so I decided that featuring a kangaroo in the opening paragraphs would set the tone well, While Tony was at it he could have had a boomerang nearby and have the character preparing a vegemite sandwich
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    Chapter 7 S3

    I don't know how likely Lonny and Clint would notice the skinwalker in the background but they would not connect it to Devin and Mick but could they come to the conclusion that its something dangerous.Another thought would it be the evil skinwalker's MO to do something to Lonny and Clint to get Devin and Mike's attention? “Oh, it’s the two of you again. I was hoping you’d graduated.” Geez isn't she just a ray of sunshine eh? Loved Devin's retort though
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    Entry 65

    Well we got subtle and not so subtle hints how Ross and Adam feel. I would have much rather seen The Naked Gun movie but If I' with a certain someone it doesn't matter.Good luck to Adam trying to make amends
  24. I didn't picture myself saying this but Brodie MIGHT be just as stupid as Jeff didn't think that was possible. "Yep. So who else thinks our President is an idiot?" That is the one true timeless statement over the years no matter who's President
  25. Teenage alcohol and drug use is described. I haven't started reading it yet but you know The Name Jeff came to mind. Can you imagine that?
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