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    Not Okay

    weinerdog commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Not Okay

    I second that
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    I knew where this was going when they were drinking all that wine.IMO it's just a roadblock or hurdle for Ash and Desmond but I'm eager to see how it happens. More and More Kieran trips me out he feels "abandoned" because Rory when off with his Mom who he wasn't sure was even alive? geez
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    That would be unCONVENTional. But seriously doesn't Brandon realize he would be getting nun? (GET IT nun,none .....okay I'm running away from the tomatoes and rotten eggs now)
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    Glad to hear that there are going to be two more chapters So Brandon's folks sent him to pray away camp? That's pretty ignorant. Makes me think that's why Brandon is so smart as form of rebellion against his parents (not really) “If it fits, I sits,” ...... Now I wonder where O.J. Simpson's attorney got his famous saying from🤔
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    If the stalker was someone from LiveFeed then Jamie's way of handling it might be OK BUT if it's Wen...possible problem
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    Chapter 22

    weinerdog commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 22

    ‘About twenty-five, but there could be a few extras off the street, as we’ve been publicising your visit in the newspaper.’ I Had a terrible thought what if The Monolith was one of the ones off the street. Or worse yet a few like minded people came with her to create a commotion. I then thought @Mark Ponyboy Peters isn't that twisted but then there was this ‘For writing that filth! You’ll be going straight to hell for that. It’s disgusting. Absolute trash. Pornography, that’s what it is! Nothing but pornography! Then I though OH NO!!! I hope this isn't foreshadowing . Any way great chapter
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    Chapter 22

    weinerdog commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 22

    I admire a man who is thorough. I wonder why he viewed it several times? What part was he unsure of before deeming it pornography🤔?
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    Or 6? 7? 7,7 do I hear 7?
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    Still Okay

    weinerdog commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Still Okay

    A stack of VHS tapes sat nearby like offerings to the creative gods. People still have VHS tapes🤔(Yeah I know they do😄) I have a ton of them lying around me in my wisdom taped so much stuff thinking when I'm really old I'll have plenty of time to watch them all. Only now I don't have a VHS player🙄 and most of what I taped you can see on YouTube anyway. Wasn't much of a visionary was I. “I just want it to make sense someday. You know?” Judging by our Country's divorce rate Jordan is not alone. Needless to say I'm expecting tense next chapter🤞
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    Still Okay

    weinerdog commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Still Okay

    I would love a story about Jordan. But I also like the other two stories and their characters. I guess just go by whatever great story idea pops in your head first.Whatever you do will be great.
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    Well those two comments contradict. Jeff sounded sincere but he may also be a BS'er.
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    So far it seems as impossible as trying to get Republicans and Democrats to work together
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    Why should @mastershakeme change the way she writes chapters now🤔
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    Given the time this story took place all the issues brought up would be very difficult the present day let alone back then. Other reviewers covered this very well particularly @Carlos Hazday . That this author was able to in an intelligent way tell this story show how brilliant of a writer he is. I recommend you read this but prepare to brace yourself this story has more sad and angry reaction after every chapter then what one usually sees here on GA .But it really was necessary to write it this way
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    Epilogue

    weinerdog commented on Dodger's story chapter in Epilogue

    A very complicated story even in today's times, let alone 1978. You managed to navigate this is 12 regular sized chapters. IMHO opinion very impressive writing
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    Saving my Bacon

    weinerdog commented on Dodger's story chapter in Saving my Bacon

    I couldn’t remember telling him or talking to him about any of my experiences in Vietnam. That you got spot on. My step did a year in Vietnam didn't see combat but must have seen things because he never spoke of his time there. Friends of mine who also had dads go there told me the same
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    Entry 63 & 64

    weinerdog commented on D.K. Daniels's story chapter in Entry 63 & 64

    I get Emma,Eli and Thomas being upset but Carl I don't understand.I think he should be neutral. I bet he has never had someone annoying hounding him. Old-Phobie I never heard that expression put that way.In the U.S. we say Old-fogey is that the UK version of the same saying.
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    Chapter 21

    weinerdog commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 21

    I\in addition to who you mentioned( I knew about him) in The U.S. there is an Baseball pitcher who won The Cy Young award(To my Aussie friends sorry if I'm speaking a foreign language) with the Name Randy Jones.
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    Chapter 21

    weinerdog commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 21

    This is an uncommon surname but I knew somebody with this surname. So Randy Biggerstaff?
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    Chapter 7

    weinerdog commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 7

    I echo what @chris191070 said a very memorable Christmas. So Tony got mentioned. It sounds like Kieran and Charlie might cross paths with the guys from the other story. Since this is a new situation for them those would be good friends and allies to have
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    I'm surprised someone hasn't brought up Anita Bryant yet. It sounds like Jeff took her rhetoric to heart. It's very nuanced this is all not black and white but it is hard not to see this getting way worst then better
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    Stormy Weather

    weinerdog commented on Dodger's story chapter in Stormy Weather

    I don't have a good feeling about this. At the time the military was also archaic on this topic
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    A Safe Environment

    weinerdog commented on Dodger's story chapter in A Safe Environment

    Jeff didn't want to give Jon the money because of grocery shopping BUT he had a credit card which he used to buy his precious alcohol
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    OK I over reacted (again) but I like Brandon looking like he did on the story page.Oh BTW thanks @Jason Rimbaud.For what you ask? Well there was something I wasn't aware of. Lets just I'm now going to be calling friends to see if any of them have a copy of The Dreamers I can borrow
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    I just started reading this and Brandon is changing his look for his date? My reaction? STUPID!!!!!! Brandon hasn't been stupid up to this point. If he doesn't look as good as he does in that image on the story page then this was a waste. OK I'm going to continue the chapter now to see if my reaction was valid
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