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A Lawyer, Insanity?, and The Date
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in A Lawyer, Insanity?, and The Date
Yeah they talked about seeing places but after nelson mentioning The watershed you wrote 20 minutes later they were there.So did Nelson take the scenic route there😄 -
A Lawyer, Insanity?, and The Date
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in A Lawyer, Insanity?, and The Date
She had to tell her Aunt Elaine some of the things they did. Elaine seemed satisfied the date went well and Marie behaved. Marie was happy she had fooled her aunt. I noticed you didn't include the actual conversation , Well wasn't the "date" about showing ML around town? So what line of BS could ML have said? If she told the truth it would be "The food was good in the Mexican restaurant ,Oh and the Norris Watershed parking lot was real nice" -
A Lawyer, Insanity?, and The Date
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in A Lawyer, Insanity?, and The Date
While I think (And hope) this isn't the case I did wonder did Ed researched this stuff and had it in the back of his mind that he wanted to kill Claude even before the last incident with George? The only other way he would know all this legal stuff is he's a bright student and has plans to become a lawyer himself. -
Family Is What You Make of It
weinerdog commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Family Is What You Make of It
“He was involved in other things,” Wen insisted. “He was a kid, trying to please his parents. Don’t tell me you can’t relate,” Hearst said cuttingly. Wen paled visibly. That must have hit pretty close to home. Maybe Wen just might be capable of learning something.I guess we'll find out in the epilogue. A talk show says so and so will be on their show and they don't tell them first? Is that how far things regressed? Pretty arrogant if you ask me “No. But I do like licking you all over. Does that count?” Since when that doesn't count🤔 -
That'll be enough talking,' our subby said, while looking straight at us when he said it. 'You can save that for later. Now, I'm sure you all know the drill. When I call your name please respond.' A giggle quickly passed through the room, followed by a stern, 'Enough!' It sounded like somebody got out of the wrong side of the bed this morning. 'Anderson, Charles?' our subbie called from the roll. Here.' 'Baartz, Amelia?' 'Here.' The teacher calling the roll saying the last name first reminded of something that actually happened on a first day of one of my school years. We had a buddy his name was Richard Large and yep you guessed it he went by Dick because of course he did. Well all of you could already guess what happened in one class the teacher was calling roll using the last name first and she said "Large, Dick" There was muffled giggling for the rest of the class
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I've heard it said rape is not about sexual gratification but more about power and I can see that being Baker's motivation(I now refuse to call him Timmy that sounds too friendly) Zack being on the small side also didn't help. It will take a lot of guts for Zack to make this allegation🤞
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The New Relationship Gets Complicated
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The New Relationship Gets Complicated
Why am I picturing videos going viral?🤔- 28 comments
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The New Relationship Gets Complicated
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The New Relationship Gets Complicated
She's a.....cut?...dut? no that's not a word. gut?.... I'll get back to you.- 28 comments
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After growing up in the neighborhood Mark did I could see him taking Carl's vanity as a big so what.
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Like in one of your previous stories all this technical stuff has my mind swirling. Chuckling, he replied, “I think I can handle lunch. I’ll send out for Chinese or Mexican, or maybe pizza, or I can order sandwiches from a great deli nearby. spending time with Professor Ellis DOES have its benefits. I appreciate how classic Stairway To Heaven is but that has to be the most overplayed song is history
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Yeah look it up It's a pudding . Might be the cream @Mark Ponyboy Peters was referring to
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@chris191070 can tell you about a desert they have in Britain (And I understand Australia also) called Spotted Dick. These comments tells me you two would like that
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There is obviously a health problem with Peter. I hope it gets revealed while they are on the vacation Peter is going to need all those good people around although it would put a damper on everyone's Chistmas
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A Meeting and Ed In Custody
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in A Meeting and Ed In Custody
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I think saving the text from Timmy might be a good idea. Im sure some law got broken there
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A Meeting and Ed In Custody
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in A Meeting and Ed In Custody
I bet Todd liked what he saw if Nelson and ML have a falling out Todd could fill one role of ML's. There's definitely something going on with Ed I just hope it is something that can be diagnosed. "Well, mostly just because we felt things weren't working between us. They were both amicable breakups." Most guys Nelson's age don't use words like amicable he may be too smart for ML "I can see you're a polite young man, saying sir isn't necessary. Wait is this Nelson...or Eddie Haskell🤔- 28 comments
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I also have to wonder about Louella's intelligence. Going out to bears with a broom saying shoo?Brilliant
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And he still has that plan when the graduation arrives
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The Breakup and New Situation
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Breakup and New Situation
All of those are good points but.....but...HE's HOT😛- 25 comments
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The Breakup and New Situation
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Breakup and New Situation
Was that Scott's fantasy of what he would like to have done after finding out about Laura's affair?- 25 comments
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@Thirdly suggested that the two of us collaborate on a story. I thought it was a great idea, Yeah I'm already anticipating one of your comments If there's a character we all hate you'll say " OH that was @Thirdly idea "
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ARE YOU CRAZY!!!????. At least a combo meal
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I figures something was going to happen at the movies only I was thinking it would involve Timmy and his goons. Alex being seen with them will give the goons pause since he's captain of the soccer team
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What Are You Afraid Of?
weinerdog commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in What Are You Afraid Of?
Oh, he had no fucking idea. Lyn would have to get his revenge, and soon. What does @Laura S. Fox have in mind?- 39 comments
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Two Schools Get Interesting
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Two Schools Get Interesting
So far all the evidence the police have is circumstantial.All George really said is he didn't see Ed after they got off the bus.His question about did Ed do it are heresy . So I guess they have to find the ax. And what if the Ax is twenty plus years old? If that's the case it may not be able to be traced Ed's father
