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  1. Isn't that a weekly occurrence?🤔
  2. Jeff is noticing Paul in varying stages of undress and Paul is very casual about it. Even with the age difference one thing might lead to another.
  3. weinerdog

    Chapter 11

    . When he moved his leg over my crotch again, I turned over on my side, which jolted him awake. With my back to him, I heard him sigh and sit up. Davin was sighing because his plan didn't work “You better come up with a good lie,” Colt said, “Do you know what you hit?” A rock, I think,” I lied, Well Johnny's head could be classified as a rock so it isn't really a lie
  4. weinerdog

    A New Life

    Excellent chapter they were considerate of each other during their first time. And the friends were very supportive. 10 hours is a long drive will Marty tell Angela that he told Peter what happened.Should he? The one thing in the back of my mind that I worry about is does Peter have some undiagnosed condition
  5. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    The circumstances are bad of course but just think"Who cares what anybody thinks there's nobody here"
  6. A date I was on ended after a good grope....I didn't remember his name
  7. I can't add anything to what the others said about the sex scenes “True. Although he acted like a scumbag to me, I’m sorry about your brother. But only because he’s your brother.” “Don’t be.” Hearst sucked in a breath. “He’ll find a way. He always does.” I bet he already has an idea. The lightbulb went on💡.A reality show about how to avoid f---ing up a reality show.
  8. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    “it’s my strong conviction that Andy’s phone did not fall out of his pocket. One of our guardian angels took it out. I truly believe that It was a guardian angel that arranged for us to meet and fall in love. Before he said that I was thinking Willie left it there on purpose.I also wondered if Carlos also left it at his apartment for a similar reason. Hmm🤔 I would try that if I didn't need my phone so much
  9. weinerdog

    Chapter 14

    Should have known Timmy's Dad and Dallas Dad talked 🙄 I do take Dallas Dad saying sorry as a good sign. Just hearing how those piercing were removed made me hurt a little I wanted to make this a hidden comment but I can't figure out how to do that,But I thought of this while JJ was having the piercings removed Why did President Obama get a nipple ring? Because he heard George Bush had a Dick Cheney (I'll delete this if asked)
  10. weinerdog

    Chapter 13

    Sam Cooke is probably rolling over hearing his song used this way
  11. I wonder if Ed had something traumatic happen to him when he was younger you would would think there would have been some clues before the incident. Didn't think it was possible but IMO Billy is just as bad as ML if not worse. What kind of clsassmates did you have @Lee Wilson to come up with characters like this
  12. Changing the timing so the car could pass inspection brings back memories.After he got the certificate them said it passed he could have put the timing back to where it was so the engine wouldn't ping. Also my brother was a service manager for a Toyota dealership and until the eighties they had a way for the car to pass inspection without doing ant work. It stopped once things got computerized. I couldn’t help but wonder what the guy did for a living that he carried so much cash in his wallet! Oh I can guess It at first sounded like Paul might be Jeff's first time in trying something but Paul is 13 and three years age difference at that point in their life would be a big deal with most people
  13. weinerdog

    Chapter 19 S3

    Larimer is the county where Fort Collins is located, but it says we’d need a valid photo ID and proof of relationship, or a legal interest in the record to obtain it. When I found out an older brother had died he was in San Francisco and all they asked o=for was the fee for a copy. I guess they need the revenue The DOB 1954 gave me chills because that was the year my older brother was born. He was estranged from the family and the way I found out he died was from a website that gave the date of death of someone all you needed was the DOB and what state he lived in .It also gave names of possible relatives so perhaps you can have Devin or Mac use that method
  14. weinerdog

    Chapter 19 S3

    I just knew it was Karen er...Louella.I anticipate other readers giving you suggestion on what Devin and Mac could do. I have one that involves them changing into horses but that one might be too Conspicuous .
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    Chapter 19 S3

    I did it again. My apologies. No worries it's not like we can sue you or anything ..excuse me..... My lawyer friend who is with me says"actually you can" Don't worry I'm not going to listen to him
  16. Thank you for that . I remember hearing that some time ago a friend of mine listens to a christian music station and I remember saying to myself sounds like Fleetwood Mac. Angus and Julia Stone had a hit with a song Big Jet Plane I think this one is better than that
  17. “I just… I’ll follow your lead,” Is that really a rule?🤔 For me the big worry will be what will happen when Carter finds out
  18. We now get Eli's motivation but there is more to find out. I too wonder if Eli knows (knew?) Rowan Were the lyrics from an actual song? Shame on me if it's a song I should be familiar with. I wanted to ask this before but is Krista just a random name you chose or is she based on a certain author we know by that name? Sorry if that is too personal.
  19. weinerdog

    Chapter 13

    I think the only reason of JJ to know the identity of the two in the bathroom so he can approach one of them (the one whose voice he recognized?) and offer support. Unless it's Timmy of course
  20. weinerdog

    The Reckoning

    Excellent❤️ So both of them have issues and both require a lot of help and support. With these two I like their chances.But it won't be easy. but also thin, maybe too much so. Perhaps this related to Peter's condition what it is Of course, I couldn't help but hear him - not that I'm a busybody or anything,
  21. As far as these puns go You Got The Beat It sure contributed to this Manic Monday
  22. weinerdog

    Chapter 12

    Well the majority of the time that scenario is the most scary but in this case it is going to accelerate things to place where Dallas and JJ should be. And @Summerabbacat called it right about Dallas mom. She should take her spouse to a Pflag meeting. and just between you and me, I think Dallas would kick Timmy’s arse even if he were on crutches and had one arm tied behind his back!’ If you don't have that scene in the story PLEASE!!! add it
  23. The nurse was embarrassed for Marie, Well someone had to be it sure wasn't ML. "Come around and drive. I can't even see straight right now." "I don't have a license yet." "Like I give a fuck right now? Drive!" Good thing there wasn't any bodies of water close by “My lips are sealed.” I didn't know Amy was once a member of the GoGo's ( I know where's the groan button) "School Begins With a Bang” Given what this chapter was about I shudder about what you mean by the word 'bang"
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