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    Chapter 7

    Doha commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 7

    Let's see how the meeting goes. At least all the family will be there to support the two of them when they get lost for words.
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    Chapter 6

    Doha commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 6

    That's awful. A long time ago, I'm sure, but still poignant when you remember the young men involved.
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    Chapter 6

    Doha commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 6

    @Al Norris did you ever see your marine friend again? I have such vivid memories of close military friendships, but I never saw then again after finishing our national service.
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    Chapter 5

    Doha commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 5

    It sounds like the old house has had a complete makeover. It's so cool that the 4 guys now own the farm house. Let's see how Tony gets on with Aaron and Justin, the protector, looking on.
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    Chapter 4

    Doha commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 4

    That is quite a story and the guys were really disciplined to keep it to themselves. But, as Tony says, it's better that he didn't know, as coming home would have ked to resentment. Let see how Aaron responds to Tony.
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    Chapter 2

    Doha commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 2

    So the first meeting of the reunion has taken place and Matt is as hot as we thought he would be and working at the car shop.
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    The Invitation

    Doha commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in The Invitation

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    Well that blew up quickly. A brilliant first kiss!
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    The sexual tension was so intense. Let's see how these two get on. It's going to be explosive when they get there.
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    Amiens

    Doha commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Amiens

    What a lovely surprise to get a Granger chapter! Caroline continues to be caught between the conflicting emotions of jealousy, anger and desire, with George at the centre. The British diplomats are an inept lot, and it is no wonder that Daventry is furious. Let's see how this goes down when he gets back to London. As for Caroline, she will have several months of confinement on the Isle of Wight. I can't imagine she will like it much. But, as a means to social rehabilitation it will work for her.
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    Jack has given Ryder a lot to think about, but will it be sufficient to move him away from the madness of Cassandra? If Cassandra is leading Ryder astray, then all of the convolutions needed to avoid Danny, and find Pembroke will be unnecessary. If Jack is telling the truth, then mating with Danny and going home to sort out Cassandra seems to be much simpler. Usually the correct answer is the least convoluted one.
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    Troy is a lamb to the metaphorical slaughter. 😃 😀 That waist certainly sounds intriguing.
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    Great start.Blake sounds like Greek God.
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    Chapter 1

    Doha commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 1

    What a super start to the new story. It's good to see Rony again. The years that have passed between his arrival as a teen to now somewhere between 25 and 30 will be great to explore through the eyes of our Thompsonville gang.
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    Chapter 1

    Doha commented on Graeme's story chapter in Chapter 1

    That was a heart wrenching start to what, I think, will be a dramatic tussle between generations and worl views. Peter and Alan are mature beyond their years and this parenting experience will make them more so.
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    Black Swans

    Doha reviewed Graeme's story in Fiction

    Black Swans is a little window into the lives of 3 people. It illustrates the natural cycles of life and seasons in a magnificently poignant way. It is so simple, yet so powerful as it fictionalized the eternal themes of, purpose, remorse, happiness, determination. This is a brief but powerful read.
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    Black Swans

    Doha commented on Graeme's story chapter in Black Swans

    I loved this story. So poignant and true to the cycles we all face.
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    Chapter 26

    Doha commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 26

    I loved this story. Thank you for writing and sharing it. Thonpsonville is becoming a great place to be.
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    Chapter 25

    Doha commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 25

    Things are hotting up in Thompsonville. Will Red be caught? Will Andy get what's coming to him?
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    Chapter 24

    Doha commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 24

    It seems like Randy Andy Thompson is going down. Red needs to follow shortly, for being so stupid, if nothing else. 🙄
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    Chapter 23

    Doha commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 23

    I wonder how deep Thompson's influence goes? Is he sufficiently well connected to avoid being investigated?
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    That is a beautiful part of the world.
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    I'm so looking forward, like everyone else, to the moment that Ryder and Danny ses each other properly for the first time. ❤️
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    @Cane23 that's a good one. 😃 What is your home language, if I may ask?
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