CincyKris
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I enjoyed this wonderful story of friendship through the realms. I'm very happy the sequel is currently being posted so I don't have to wait.
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Wow, the herald is finally dead! What effect will this have on the assault on earth? What’s going on with the spy mission on the surface? Will the “Master” make himself present? Great chapter, but so many questions!
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You just made my day! Making plans and settling down instead of worries about the future. I think Jubal has some of the same tendency to meddle that Boone did!
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When I commented last chapter that Andre “had something in his head” he was not disclosing, I was thinking a bad experience with a past boyfriend, not being molested and under the control of a pedophile for three years! I am happy he finally told someone but hope he gets some therapy soon. Also, I had no issues with Andre pointing out ugly bedding and encouraging the purchase of new ones! I have experienced something similar, sometimes people are blind to items they have been living with for years and it takes new eyes to really see them.
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I guess time will tell, that his choice to make. Will he redeem himself? I can't wait to find out!
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Aglaron has finally broken out of his "woe is me" mindset and is fighting back with ingenuity. I hope he comes out of this as a better person, father, and king. His track record thus far has not been good.
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What we have seen with your High King happens in real life, as well. When rulers have ruled for a very long time, they lose touch with their common constituents, they listen too much to "trusted advisors", and they care only about keeping the status quo. Aglaron was a fool for listening to Maynor rather than his own heart.
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I join @drpaladin in thanking you for going back to this passage!
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Let's all not forget Frank had a part in this plan and has been conspicuously missing in both Rory's and Danny's accounting of events that night. Also, perhaps insignificant, but I have been wondering about Micco's father. Who is he, does Micco know him, did he have anything to do with the fire, is he still alive?
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Either Rory or Danny are not telling the truth, or we are missing something. Rory said Sam changed his mind, but Danny said Sam was getting ready to open the enclosures. “Danny,” Chase says, trying, I’m sure, but failing to keep the glee from his tone. “According to Rory, Sam had changed his mind about your plan. He wasn’t going to go through with it. Because of his feelings for Michael.” “So you said,” Danny whispers. “He didn’t. He didn’t come back. Right away.” It’s a stuttering start, and I brace myself to pry the rest loose, but Danny surprises me and finds his stride. “He said fifteen minutes. That’s all it would take. But it was twenty-five. He left the gate open, so I… I got out and went looking for him.”
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Micco and Chase reacted to tall, hairy, claws, and the smell of rotting meat. Was the gut reaction to memories of stories or to a memory of the fire and murders?
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Doing evil things because you are certain you are in the right is no excuse, you are still evil. I have no sympathy for Kieran's father.
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Well I guess I have to read another chapter since this has left me anxious and angry. I don't want to go to bed with this feeling.
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I have been binging this on a very long weather delayed flight from Florida. You have made it more than bearable and I’m completely absorbed!
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I think Russ will turn out to be a good friend for the guys. He’s also good with Toby and Drew and Evie. This felt like an interlude. Will we enjoy a holiday soon?
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I think something is going on in Andre’s head that he hasn’t disclosed, even to his brother, who didn’t understand why he wasn’t ready to move in. I don’t feel like he’s a bad guy, though.
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Chapter 23 In the Bright Light of Day
CincyKris commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 23 In the Bright Light of Day
Just perfect! This is the culmination of all the sacrifices, fears, hopes, and unrelenting love for each other. Thank you!- 79 comments
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This is a wonderful story of friendship between two boys that contrast and complement each other. One is a genius with a broken body, the other is physically gifted with intellectual disabilities. Both are extraordinary and they change the world.
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I couldn't be more appreciative of this wonderful story. Thank you so much.
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I was afraid that something was going to happen to Barega since Akama never mentioned a brother in Attunga. This was so sad, but sometimes tragedies are the only things that precipitate change.
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I am on vacation in Florida right now, so couldn't read this through in one chunk of time. I am soooo jealous of their beach estate! I feel good at how you ended this, we know the couples will be great dads. Who knows, maybe an adventure for their pups will be in the future.
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People like this exist now, and unfortunately will in the future, both IRL and in your story. I think it's because they want a poorly educated population to control. Almost all dictators and cult leaders cut off legitimate communication with enlightened people. Free speech and education are the antidote.
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I can only imagine what the reaction from the community will be! It’s becoming more evident why and by whom Attunga was created.
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I was on a plane when I read this, if I could have stood up and cheered at Akama’s entrance I would have! Thank you!
