CincyKris
-
Posts
2,796 -
Joined
-
Last visited
Content Type
Forums
Stories
- Stories
- Story Series
- Story Worlds
- Story Collections
- Story Chapters
- Chapter Comments
- Story Reviews
- Story Comments
- Stories Edited
- Stories Beta'd
Blogs
Store
Gallery
Help
Articles
Events
Everything posted by CincyKris
-
I do the same with business' planters and landscaping!
- 14 comments
-
- 11
-
-
-
-
Colin was a bit "fish out of water", but endearingly so. I like that Owain is not just patient, but seems to enjoy exposing Colin to new things. Now if only Colin would expose himself at the club!
- 14 comments
-
- 11
-
-
-
I had the same thought about Thom. The other two are experiencing extraordinary accomplishments, but Thom is not, yet. Hopefully.
-
You have raised the bar with this chapter! I have a feeling Akama is going to be important! I was wondering why this story was being told from Wirren's viewpoint, rather than Calen's. Now I know!
-
I'm greatly enjoying the complex world that has been created here. There is a convergence of humans, dolphins, and AI that is engaging and fun. I'm so happy to have found this over 10 years since it was posted!
-
A 2am sleepy trip to the bathroom could become an otherworldly adventure!
- 31 comments
-
- 10
-
-
-
I knew a mystery was awaiting us! I look forward to seeing how Charlie and friends solve Nicklus’ problems.
- 30 comments
-
- 10
-
-
-
-
Chapter 21 One Step at a Time
CincyKris commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 21 One Step at a Time
I loved the homecoming! I know we are a ways from our guys joining the way we want, but this was a great start. A few of the other readers mentioned the lessening of tension as the chapter progressed, it was good to see. I hope the cause of the tension will come up in future conversations. They don't just need to open their eyes, they need listen, too. I have no doubt the wildings will return, they are too intrinsic to this tale!- 67 comments
-
- 16
-
-
Thank you for bringing back this wonderful story. Tomas has experienced a whole life transformation over the last few months. It's refreshing to read a well-written story about regular adults, I look forward to more of Tomas and Fletcher.
-
Thank you for the Christmas gift! This was a lovely glimpse of the guys’ very comfortable, very British conversation on the way to London.
-
We finally got to meet @raven1’s snotty steward! It’s amazing how some people go crazy when they get even a little bit of power over other people. Fortunately Max put him in his place, and hopefully his supervisor finished the “re-education”! Restoring the Mini will be good for both Charlie and gramps, won’t hurt Charlie’s standing at work either. Although I doubt any “consummation” a la @drsawzall will be possible in the Mini!
-
That was ending even @drsawzall will love!
- 130 comments
-
- 16
-
-
-
Wow! The tides are turning in favor of Micco, and whatever Rory had to say will help even more. Will I forgive her, probably not, we’ll see. I’m so happy for Micco and Chase, but still nervous for their future. And I’m super tense about the storm and refuge. If this were a movie (and it would make a great one), this is right before all hell breaks loose.
-
Even though there were no big surprises in the meeting, the guys are dealing with the aftermath of Deirdre basically abandoning Toby. I agree with @Gary L, we learn more about Deirdre that "adds subtlety". She is obviously struggling a little with choosing travel and Jasper over Toby, but in the end she is still choosing Jasper over her own son. Regarding Ralph, it is becoming clear that our author has some plans for this upcoming storyline, but rather foggy for the readers! I guess we'll see. As for @Summerabbacat, and your 25°c (77°f), you get no sympathy from me with your perfect forecast! 🌞
- 13 comments
-
- 13
-
-
-
-
Trials and Tribulations
CincyKris commented on Karl Anders's story chapter in Trials and Tribulations
I'm relieved the judge is smart and reasonable. The boys have a great support system. We're probably in for a sad next chapter, I hope the funeral is not too rough. Hmmm, is Makani boyfriend material for Charlie? -
Did I miss a snotty steward?
-
Great chapter, I'm sure Michael will excel at his job at Ian and Kevin's new pawn shop. Having a bank account with money will get the boys thinking of themselves with confidence, they will handling life on the offence rather than the defense. I enjoy a good professional fireworks display, but the ones set off by homeowners are annoying and dangerous. My cats run around in a tizzy trying to find a hiding place.
-
I did a reread of the source chapter, even though I sort of remembered it. Well worth it! My suggestion is to finish the whole chapter, don't stop when you get to the money part, the last line is gold!
- 148 comments
-
- 11
-
-
-
-
I like going to IKEA sometimes, the meatballs are yummy, and I got a bunch of stocking stuffers. I can also assure any non-American readers that crock pots are popular and thriving in the US. Great time savers for busy people that want real food that tastes good and doesn't break the bank. I like that the guys are becoming closer and getting more involved in each other's lives, but doing so naturally and comfortably. I think they are building a strong relationship.
- 25 comments
-
- 14
-
-
-
-
Thanks for the great ending to this saga! I can foresee a happy and fulfilling life for Asa, Caleb, and their boys. I’m looking forward to the epilogues, but hoping you leave things a little open, just in case Vann and the boys start talking to you once they grow up.
- 148 comments
-
- 16
-
-
Welcome back! This is my favorite line: ”You’re my home” What a long way Beckett has come! I look forward to the meeting with the jock mages.
- 11 comments
-
- 11
-
-
-
I am happy Michael is starting to move on to making accomplishments, it will give him some much needed confidence. I look forward to him meeting Ian, Kevin, and Benjamin. Looks like Benjamin is fitting in well with the business, I am eager to catch up with them.
- 63 comments
-
- 11
-
-
-
I'm happy the guys handled their disagreement with Russ like adults, rather than like angsty teenagers. There is enough drama in day to day life without creating it for effect. Looks like the nature themed holiday is back on, Toby will be thrilled.
- 11 comments
-
- 11
-
-
-
Chapter 20 No Guarantees
CincyKris commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 20 No Guarantees
Jubal needed the day to reflect on his recent past and think on the future. I’m happy he finally admitted to simple fact that he wants to stay. Hopefully that and his love for the land and Lucas will keep him rooted. I feel like Jubal was chasing his own demons when he was tracking the wildings and killing the wolves. I can only hope he kills his own demons.- 53 comments
-
- 14
-
-
Family Life: pub lunch
CincyKris commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Family Life: pub lunch
I was frustrated with Mhairi a few chapters back, but I need to remember that she only escaped "the cult" a year ago, not the couple of decades that Colin has had to lose the restrictive habits and mindset. She is getting there, she needs some new friends to socialize with, maybe some of Joe's friends' parents. Regarding their holiday, I'm somewhere in the middle of Colin and Owain. I like looking at old buildings and ruins, but I like a little unstructured shopping and eating and drinking at little pubs and cafes. Throw in some nature and it would be perfect.
